46 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
2e2e55f7f6 corrected correction 2016-07-11 16:45:26 -04:00
75771b7f2c removed passive 2016-07-11 16:45:04 -04:00
f6f427fa00 3:21-22 clarification 2016-07-11 16:20:54 -04:00
62b8179b53 3:18-19 cleanup 2016-07-11 15:26:40 -04:00
ccb4d3a6b9 zapped bad commas 2016-07-11 15:22:29 -04:00
7a4171025d 3:15 made complete sentence 2016-07-11 15:19:26 -04:00
bd9f6e6b98 3:14-15 explicating logic 2016-07-11 15:17:22 -04:00
5988458b9e building materials 2016-07-11 14:30:55 -04:00
c2158424e7 the "building" is not a "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
6097f7a528 concretized "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
bc950793f1 connectors 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
370db91ffc smoothed out clauses 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
d4d6f599de more concrete vocabulary 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
0e1c52d7a8 "of glory" modifies "lord" rather than telling what people would do 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
5078809e1c Attempted de-figurativization 2016-07-11 10:24:00 -04:00
a496fe9cc9 2:3 Restructured to remove awkwardness 2016-07-11 09:56:33 -04:00
017b4d00f2 removed comma splice 2016-07-08 16:47:51 -04:00
15d85fed92 spurious comma 2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
060a05f383 spurious comma 2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
29207ff4a2 1:27 smoothed out grammar 2016-07-08 16:15:34 -04:00
9e413fd5b3 1:24 restored TFT
To say that "Christ is his power and the [his?] wisdom" is highly
abstract.
2016-07-08 15:52:51 -04:00
ebd6cd4888 1:20 clarification 2016-07-08 15:21:27 -04:00
ae987df147 1:17 clarification 2016-07-08 15:01:28 -04:00
6eb86aa978 zapped double spaces 2016-07-08 14:57:38 -04:00
12109f4bb8 comma
The comma denotes that Paul can say that he gives thanks because of the
grace. No comma denotes that the grace is the reason he gives thanks.
2016-07-08 13:55:07 -04:00
597f5392b3 stray line 2016-07-08 13:53:40 -04:00
267526185c corrected misspelling 2016-07-08 13:43:38 -04:00
a7eb45cd10 specified both valences of "write" 2016-07-08 13:29:24 -04:00
856727f81b zapped extra empty lines 2016-07-08 13:27:32 -04:00
45bcde799f baptism for the dead
commentary in the text
2016-06-29 06:33:45 -04:00
c6a36137aa Clarity on crowns
and olive leaves
2016-06-28 23:46:35 -04:00
b567b6cb5f Simplify 2016-06-28 06:47:02 -04:00
0feca203e8 Sea of Reeds
continuity
2016-06-28 04:12:11 -04:00
3a7d17fee6 Lowercasing mid-sentence "Scriptur" 2016-06-20 16:25:02 -04:00
pohlig
59e3a372a6 Update 08.usfm 2016-05-19 13:37:47 -04:00
pohlig
4f75acea14 Update 01.usfm 2016-05-19 13:30:21 -04:00
pohlig
f4a879882f Update 01.usfm 2016-05-19 13:28:22 -04:00
lrsallee
47268a0ab6 1Co 12:1 UDB
Removed double-space from line.
2016-05-11 09:18:55 -04:00
lrsallee
fd542ee83a 1Co 11:34 UDB
Removed double-space from line.
2016-05-11 09:17:49 -04:00
5551b82649 Update 12.usfm 2016-05-05 10:40:51 +05:45
pohlig
e0dae6e4c6 Update 15.usfm 2016-04-22 14:39:46 -04:00
pohlig
187db5c0a4 Update 13.usfm 2016-04-22 12:23:04 -04:00
pohlig
5ff639f45b Update 13.usfm 2016-04-22 12:21:32 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
55a1862e25 V1 sea of Reeds 2016-04-14 16:12:36 -04:00
Apache Production
e3fd5a5d05 Added README.md for each book with links to door43.org 2016-04-05 15:56:40 +00:00
Richard Mahn
78b7b614f7 Initial commit from Etherpad 2016-04-01 21:07:40 +00:00