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Henry Whitney c2158424e7 the "building" is not a "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney 6097f7a528 concretized "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney bc950793f1 connectors 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney 370db91ffc smoothed out clauses 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Tom Warren de552993f4 Revision to who is doing what to whom 2016-07-11 12:21:31 -04:00
Tom Warren c526d3038d Revised who stayed in Jerusalem 2016-07-11 12:11:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney d4d6f599de more concrete vocabulary 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney 0e1c52d7a8 "of glory" modifies "lord" rather than telling what people would do 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Tom Warren 5623d1ba30 chaste to not having sexual relations 2016-07-11 11:40:32 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5078809e1c Attempted de-figurativization 2016-07-11 10:24:00 -04:00
Henry Whitney a496fe9cc9 2:3 Restructured to remove awkwardness 2016-07-11 09:56:33 -04:00
hharrissWA c422807b58 Update 03.usfm 
v. 10
comma added between clauses
 2016-07-10 15:21:43 -05:00
hharrissWA 6458af25ea Update 02.usfm 
v. 15
A semicolon is not needed because of the presence of the conjunction “and.” 
Changed to a comma.
 2016-07-10 15:19:46 -05:00
Hanker10 8e987aeccb Romans 16:25-27 restore idea of doxology 
Romans 16:25-27 restore idea of doxology and follow original wording more closely
 2016-07-09 15:01:02 -04:00
Hanker10 183b947655 Romans 16:20 add wording to show meaning 
Romans 16:20 add wording to show meaning
 2016-07-09 14:47:31 -04:00
Hanker10 8287726878 Romans 16:19 change wording 
Romans 16:19 change wording to render original more closely
 2016-07-09 14:44:14 -04:00
Hanker10 d06e3ba1b3 Romans 16:18 add wording to reflect original 
Romans 16:18 add wording to reflect original better
 2016-07-09 14:40:58 -04:00
Hanker10 cf1275aec9 Romans 15:18-19 change wording 
Romans 15:18-19 change wording to reflect original
 2016-07-09 14:28:14 -04:00
Hanker10 69004058c6 Romans 15:13 reword for the benediction idea 
Romans 15:13 reword for the benediction idea
 2016-07-09 14:16:41 -04:00
Hanker10 af71ef028e Romans 15:9 change wording for clarity 
Romans 15:9 change wording for clarity
 2016-07-09 14:13:24 -04:00
Hanker10 d75514a19f Romans 15:5 incorporate the benediction 
Romans 15:5 incorporate the benediction concept.
 2016-07-09 14:08:11 -04:00
Hanker10 2edf1c3677 Romans 14:20 cut comma 
Romans 14:20 cut comma
 2016-07-09 13:34:48 -04:00
Hanker10 eb605a6f9b Romans 14:17 change wording 
Romans 14:17 change wording to clarify
 2016-07-09 13:33:09 -04:00
Hanker10 6eadcb71ff Romans 14:12 change wording 
Romans 14:12 change wording
 2016-07-09 13:27:47 -04:00
Hanker10 e834d586c0 Romans 14:4 add wording 
Romans 14:4 add wording to include the first question of the ULB rendering.
 2016-07-09 13:21:45 -04:00
Hanker10 c5bf41cda1 Update 13.usfm 2016-07-09 13:16:31 -04:00
Hanker10 cdea816345 Romans 12:20 change wording 
Romans 12:20 change wording to reflect the original meaning better of the metaphor of burning coals.
 2016-07-09 13:09:15 -04:00
Hanker10 6516b25867 Romans 12:15 change wording 
Romans 12:15 change wording to reflect original more closely.
 2016-07-09 13:03:24 -04:00
Hanker10 19767eb826 Romans 12:13 change wording 
Romans 12:13 change wording to reflect original more closely
 2016-07-09 12:59:44 -04:00
Hanker10 632f2492dd Romans 12:6 change confusing wording 
Romans 12:6 change confusing wording
 2016-07-09 12:53:30 -04:00
Hanker10 f143130d48 Romans 12:2 change wording 
Romans 12:2 change wording to avoid confusion of agency: "and always make it new" implies that the reader will do that but God is the agent to change and to make new the way of thinking.
 2016-07-09 12:49:19 -04:00
Hanker10 b8b23e4a60 Romans 11:26 change wording 
Romans 11:26 change wording from "will save all the people of Israel" to what you see. Israel is a collective term here not meaning every person.
 2016-07-09 12:12:24 -04:00
Hanker10 dfd6d587ab Romans 11:24 change word for consistency 
Romans 11:24 change word for consistency from "grafting" to "splicing" to be consistent with verse 17
 2016-07-09 12:07:39 -04:00
Hanker10 2f7ea5360f Romans 11:17 change word 
Romans 11:17 change word, "put" to "spliced"
 2016-07-09 12:00:36 -04:00
Hanker10 ea89a0e4c6 Romans 11:16 change wording for consistency 
Romans 11:16 change wording for consistency, "the branches of a tree will be good" to what you see.
 2016-07-09 11:57:02 -04:00
Hanker10 fbc4bbda09 Romans 11:15 drop "many" and... 
Romans 11:15 drop "many" from "and many other people in the world." And, added "realm of the dead" to the end to correspond to the ULB
 2016-07-09 11:53:50 -04:00
Hanker10 8054e8e05a Romans 11:11 change wording 
Romans 11:11 change wording
 2016-07-09 11:49:18 -04:00
Hanker10 c27832ed77 Romans 11:7 replace word "unable" with "unwilling" 
Romans 11:7 replace word "unable" with "unwilling"
 2016-07-09 11:46:12 -04:00
Hanker10 8a3cb4b714 Romans 11:5 replace word for clarity 
Romans 11:5 replace the word "small" with "leftover" to render "remnant"
 2016-07-09 11:34:15 -04:00
Hanker10 35c0bdfc0e Romans 11:1 change wording 
Romans 11:1 change wording
 2016-07-09 11:28:08 -04:00
Hanker10 850dd0bb40 Romans 10:20 change preposition 
Romans 10:20 change preposition from "to" to "through" in "God said very boldly through Isaiah"
 2016-07-09 11:18:52 -04:00
Hanker10 1e8308af7a Romans 10:19b close the quote 
Romans 10:19b close the quote
 2016-07-09 11:17:16 -04:00
Hanker10 259532ea04 Romans 10:18b add quotation marks 
Romans 10:18b add quotation marks and generalize from just "the stars" to nature as based on the quote from Psalm 19:4.
 2016-07-09 11:15:29 -04:00
Hanker10 76afbd1043 Romans 10:14 change wording 
Romans 10:14 change wording to broaden the idea of spreading the good news beyond just the Jews as first rendered.
 2016-07-09 11:02:19 -04:00
Hanker10 860f56ff3e Romans 10:4 drop "for us" at the end 
Romans 10:4 drop "for us" at the end of the sentence because it has the connotation of limiting.
 2016-07-09 10:52:43 -04:00
Hanker10 df0bc093a1 Romans 10:2 replace word 
Romans 10:2 replace word "greatly" with "earnestly"
 2016-07-09 10:50:58 -04:00
Hanker10 3d88fc3c53 Romans 9:32 change wording 
Romans 9:32 change wording
 2016-07-08 21:47:32 -04:00
Hanker10 38915c27fa Romans 9:29 change wording 
Romans 9:29 change wording
 2016-07-08 21:38:28 -04:00
Hanker10 f1e46be1a8 Romans 9:26 add phrase to clarify 
Romans 9:26 add phrase to clarify
 2016-07-08 21:35:38 -04:00
Hanker10 59e0e5cda1 Update 09.usfm 2016-07-08 21:32:08 -04:00