758 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Hanker10
5fe2c2ebd7 Matthew 6:26 cut last sentence
Matthew 6:26 cut last sentence, " And you are certainly worth a lot more than birds! So you can be assured that God will supply what you need!" since it is not at all in the ULB or the Greek or other English renderings. This is applicatory and beyond the text.
2016-06-20 18:48:11 -04:00
Hanker10
df8eb9fb71 Matthew 6:20 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:20 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:38:48 -04:00
Hanker10
c8783442c4 Matthew 6:19 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:19 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:37:02 -04:00
Hanker10
46a6824bb6 Matthew 6:16 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:16 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:34:05 -04:00
Hanker10
359df67e33 Matthew 6:6 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:6 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:13:07 -04:00
Hanker10
7e29742da9 Matthew 6:5 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:5 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:11:46 -04:00
Hanker10
9f20ba796a Matthew 6:2 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:2 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:09:28 -04:00
Hanker10
31466752dd Matthew 6:1 simplify & condense wording
Matthew 6:1 simplify & condense wording
2016-06-20 18:06:59 -04:00
pohlig
e28032294b Update 05.usfm 2016-06-20 17:19:47 -04:00
3a7d17fee6 Lowercasing mid-sentence "Scriptur" 2016-06-20 16:25:02 -04:00
hharrissWA
a405262794 changed "Those of us..." to "For those of us..." 2016-06-20 10:11:26 -05:00
hharrissWA
834574ee82 changed "dies" to "died" 2016-06-20 10:09:02 -05:00
hharrissWA
e522a24da9 repeated attempt to correct 2016-06-20 10:05:56 -05:00
hharrissWA
122ddb38eb Merge branch 'master' of https://github.com/Door43/udb-en 2016-06-20 10:02:59 -05:00
dcb17a66bf Fixed punctuation 4:25 2016-06-20 11:02:55 -04:00
c06fc79642 verb agreement 4:3 2016-06-20 11:02:55 -04:00
hharrissWA
c882957e43 extra "there" removed, and "come from" changed to "comes from" 2016-06-20 10:02:53 -05:00
pohlig
458bf8558c Update 05.usfm 2016-06-20 09:46:33 -04:00
pohlig
b4591cedb5 Update 05.usfm 2016-06-20 09:42:26 -04:00
82e6ac4bb6 removed spurious space 3:25 2016-06-20 08:36:50 -04:00
2aee398b70 removed spurious word 3:25 2016-06-20 08:36:50 -04:00
hharrissWA
7b84331b01 changed "they" to "you," which is referencing the Corinthians 2016-06-20 21:47:04 -05:00
hharrissWA
2e7cc8f3f9 added needed words: "be" in v 16, and "that" in v 17 2016-06-19 08:00:44 -05:00
45011d92f4 Gal 3:19
Aligned the UDB to reflect the content of the ULB
2016-06-18 17:28:22 -04:00
011f9f9bfe typo 3:8 2016-06-18 13:20:08 -04:00
eeb5b01344 verb tense agreement 2:9 2016-06-18 13:20:08 -04:00
Hanker10
bf385c80fd Matthew 5:38 change wording
Matthew 5:38 change wording to drop extraneous, interpretive ideas.
2016-06-18 11:47:19 -04:00
Hanker10
e7995d418f Matthew 5:34 change wording
Matthew 5:34 change wording drop extras.
2016-06-18 11:44:23 -04:00
Hanker10
cd72ad0418 Matthew 5:35 change wording
Matthew 5:35 change wording to reflect meaning better.
2016-06-18 11:38:39 -04:00
Hanker10
3934348743 Matthew 5:33 change wording
Matthew 5:33 change wording to render Greek better.
2016-06-18 11:36:36 -04:00
Hanker10
bc796efea8 Matthew 5:25 drop "if" since it repeats
Matthew 5:25 drop "if" since it repeats the conditional clause unnecessarily.
2016-06-18 11:18:53 -04:00
Hanker10
63876282d8 Matthew 5:21 change wording
Matthew 5:21 drop "to die." since this is not in the Greek and is not necessary to carry the meaning. It is added.
2016-06-18 11:15:40 -04:00
Hanker10
9ad5902e80 Matthew 5:20 change wording
Matthew 5:20 change wording to render closer to the Greek.
2016-06-18 11:12:10 -04:00
Hanker10
162a69105d Mt 5:19 change wording
Matthew 5:19 change wording to conform closer to Greek.
2016-06-18 09:36:18 -04:00
hharrissWA
e5f99087b6 restructured for clarity 2016-06-18 08:31:20 -05:00
pohlig
8bb9bdf297 Update 02.usfm 2016-06-17 21:10:08 -04:00
81a9d8dc9f take out suffering suffering suffering 2016-06-17 15:19:19 -04:00
Hanker10
e263aab560 Matthew 4:19 change wording
Matthew 4:19 change wording from "It will be just like you have been fishing." to what you see because their new job is NOT just like the old one.
2016-06-17 13:12:56 -04:00
Hanker10
6237c44eb9 Matthew 4:18 change wording
Matthew 4:18 change wording from "because they earned money by catching and selling fish." to what you see. The rewording says the same thing but more concisely.
2016-06-17 13:07:51 -04:00
aa6e8fd420 fixing quotes 2016-06-17 12:24:39 -04:00
Hanker10
7273f16096 Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:23:20 -04:00
pohlig
bc97fb82f0 Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:23:00 -04:00
Hanker10
a4422f8cdb Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition
Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition of "They strongly desire to ..." and "Many ..."
2016-06-17 11:21:23 -04:00
hharrissWA
cf52b78e25 removed an "immediately" 2016-06-17 09:11:39 -06:00
pohlig
8c336ead0f Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:11:19 -04:00
pohlig
4d3d192bf5 Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:09:02 -04:00
pohlig
e2a7ee4803 Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:02:31 -04:00
Hanker10
1beeba382f Romans 1:18 change referent in clause
Romans 1:18 change "everyone in the "who" clause to "all" and the number of the verbs "show" and "do" to match. This also matches with the "them" in the next sentence.
2016-06-17 10:55:26 -04:00
Hanker10
062ee7b7f7 Romans 1:7 added "in Rome"
Romans 1:7 added "in Rome" since this is in the Greek, helps the idea along, and does not hinder the flow of style.
2016-06-17 10:30:35 -04:00
Hanker10
9c7ae84fdf Romans 1:1 correct verb number
Romans 1:1 correct the number (singular) of the the verb "serve(s)"
2016-06-16 19:57:10 -04:00