Henry Whitney
75771b7f2c
removed passive
2016-07-11 16:45:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney
f6f427fa00
3:21-22 clarification
2016-07-11 16:20:54 -04:00
7b4f4901ab
Update 14.usfm
2016-07-11 15:30:05 -04:00
ee3b7873f2
Update 14.usfm
2016-07-11 15:28:13 -04:00
Henry Whitney
62b8179b53
3:18-19 cleanup
2016-07-11 15:26:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ccb4d3a6b9
zapped bad commas
2016-07-11 15:22:29 -04:00
Henry Whitney
7a4171025d
3:15 made complete sentence
2016-07-11 15:19:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
bd9f6e6b98
3:14-15 explicating logic
2016-07-11 15:17:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5988458b9e
building materials
2016-07-11 14:30:55 -04:00
Tom Warren
9c110aa968
farmeRs
2016-07-11 14:23:23 -04:00
Tom Warren
ad2d8d517b
Christ's authority
2016-07-11 14:18:29 -04:00
Tom Warren
e8e26089a1
assorted fixes
2016-07-11 13:46:14 -04:00
Tom Warren
a687f49e3e
pigeons throughout
2016-07-11 13:01:52 -04:00
Tom Warren
49740c2647
doves to pidgeons
2016-07-11 13:00:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
c2158424e7
the "building" is not a "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney
6097f7a528
concretized "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney
bc950793f1
connectors
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney
370db91ffc
smoothed out clauses
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Tom Warren
de552993f4
Revision to who is doing what to whom
2016-07-11 12:21:31 -04:00
Tom Warren
c526d3038d
Revised who stayed in Jerusalem
2016-07-11 12:11:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney
d4d6f599de
more concrete vocabulary
2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney
0e1c52d7a8
"of glory" modifies "lord" rather than telling what people would do
2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Tom Warren
5623d1ba30
chaste to not having sexual relations
2016-07-11 11:40:32 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5078809e1c
Attempted de-figurativization
2016-07-11 10:24:00 -04:00
Henry Whitney
a496fe9cc9
2:3 Restructured to remove awkwardness
2016-07-11 09:56:33 -04:00
c422807b58
Update 03.usfm
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v. 10
comma added between clauses
2016-07-10 15:21:43 -05:00
6458af25ea
Update 02.usfm
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v. 15
A semicolon is not needed because of the presence of the conjunction “and.”
Changed to a comma.
2016-07-10 15:19:46 -05:00
8e987aeccb
Romans 16:25-27 restore idea of doxology
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Romans 16:25-27 restore idea of doxology and follow original wording more closely
2016-07-09 15:01:02 -04:00
183b947655
Romans 16:20 add wording to show meaning
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Romans 16:20 add wording to show meaning
2016-07-09 14:47:31 -04:00
8287726878
Romans 16:19 change wording
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Romans 16:19 change wording to render original more closely
2016-07-09 14:44:14 -04:00
d06e3ba1b3
Romans 16:18 add wording to reflect original
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Romans 16:18 add wording to reflect original better
2016-07-09 14:40:58 -04:00
cf1275aec9
Romans 15:18-19 change wording
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Romans 15:18-19 change wording to reflect original
2016-07-09 14:28:14 -04:00
69004058c6
Romans 15:13 reword for the benediction idea
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Romans 15:13 reword for the benediction idea
2016-07-09 14:16:41 -04:00
af71ef028e
Romans 15:9 change wording for clarity
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Romans 15:9 change wording for clarity
2016-07-09 14:13:24 -04:00
d75514a19f
Romans 15:5 incorporate the benediction
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Romans 15:5 incorporate the benediction concept.
2016-07-09 14:08:11 -04:00
2edf1c3677
Romans 14:20 cut comma
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Romans 14:20 cut comma
2016-07-09 13:34:48 -04:00
eb605a6f9b
Romans 14:17 change wording
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Romans 14:17 change wording to clarify
2016-07-09 13:33:09 -04:00
6eadcb71ff
Romans 14:12 change wording
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Romans 14:12 change wording
2016-07-09 13:27:47 -04:00
e834d586c0
Romans 14:4 add wording
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Romans 14:4 add wording to include the first question of the ULB rendering.
2016-07-09 13:21:45 -04:00
c5bf41cda1
Update 13.usfm
2016-07-09 13:16:31 -04:00
cdea816345
Romans 12:20 change wording
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Romans 12:20 change wording to reflect the original meaning better of the metaphor of burning coals.
2016-07-09 13:09:15 -04:00
6516b25867
Romans 12:15 change wording
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Romans 12:15 change wording to reflect original more closely.
2016-07-09 13:03:24 -04:00
19767eb826
Romans 12:13 change wording
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Romans 12:13 change wording to reflect original more closely
2016-07-09 12:59:44 -04:00
632f2492dd
Romans 12:6 change confusing wording
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Romans 12:6 change confusing wording
2016-07-09 12:53:30 -04:00
f143130d48
Romans 12:2 change wording
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Romans 12:2 change wording to avoid confusion of agency: "and always make it new" implies that the reader will do that but God is the agent to change and to make new the way of thinking.
2016-07-09 12:49:19 -04:00
b8b23e4a60
Romans 11:26 change wording
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Romans 11:26 change wording from "will save all the people of Israel" to what you see. Israel is a collective term here not meaning every person.
2016-07-09 12:12:24 -04:00
dfd6d587ab
Romans 11:24 change word for consistency
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Romans 11:24 change word for consistency from "grafting" to "splicing" to be consistent with verse 17
2016-07-09 12:07:39 -04:00
2f7ea5360f
Romans 11:17 change word
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Romans 11:17 change word, "put" to "spliced"
2016-07-09 12:00:36 -04:00
ea89a0e4c6
Romans 11:16 change wording for consistency
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Romans 11:16 change wording for consistency, "the branches of a tree will be good" to what you see.
2016-07-09 11:57:02 -04:00
fbc4bbda09
Romans 11:15 drop "many" and...
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Romans 11:15 drop "many" from "and many other people in the world." And, added "realm of the dead" to the end to correspond to the ULB
2016-07-09 11:53:50 -04:00
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