en_tn_lite_do_not_use/rev/06/03.md

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the second seal

"the next seal" or "seal number two" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal)

the second living creature

"the next living creature" or "living creature number two" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal)

came out—fiery red

This can the stated as a second sentence. AT: "came out. It was red like fire" or "came out. It was bright red"

To its rider was given permission

This can be stated with an active verb. AT: "God gave permission to its rider" or "Its rider received person" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)

This rider was given a huge sword

This can be stated with an active verb. AT: "This rider received a huge sword" or "God gave this rider a huge sword" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)

huge

"very large" or "great"

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