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1944 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
pohlig c2485b30e1 Update 021.usfm 2016-08-12 17:25:50 -04:00
pohlig ab89206685 Update 05.usfm 2016-08-12 16:28:20 -04:00
Tom Warren 438389403e Clarity 2016-08-12 15:35:04 -04:00
pohlig 0dccd25d94 Update 04.usfm 2016-08-12 14:45:05 -04:00
pohlig aa0c9fad86 Update 03.usfm 2016-08-12 14:30:44 -04:00
Henry Whitney fb99f978e4 Mrk 14:71
Made subjunctive clause subjunctive.
2016-08-12 12:36:58 -04:00
Tom Warren 8515dc934a Flag 2016-08-12 12:25:18 -04:00
pohlig d3db1a1ed2 Update 01.usfm 2016-08-12 12:21:06 -04:00
pohlig a74bca8681 Update 01.usfm 2016-08-12 11:59:40 -04:00
pohlig d44c8b0deb Update 02.usfm 2016-08-12 11:58:48 -04:00
pohlig 6efbdebca3 Update 03.usfm 2016-08-12 11:58:11 -04:00
pohlig 11d2d010be Update 05.usfm 2016-08-12 11:56:41 -04:00
pohlig 8c823afa82 Update 03.usfm 2016-08-12 11:54:01 -04:00
pohlig eaaafe0798 Update 02.usfm 2016-08-12 11:52:29 -04:00
Tom Warren 4b527b099f Various Jewish council changes 2016-08-12 11:31:05 -04:00
Henry Whitney 9278f61187 Mat 19:19
Neighbor is every person
2016-08-12 11:15:46 -04:00
Henry Whitney 4705f5e945 Mat 23:25-26
Followed suggestion in https://github.com/Door43/udb-en/issues/100
2016-08-12 11:10:57 -04:00
Henry Whitney 30ad8a4cbd Mat 8:34
synonym for ULB "begged"
2016-08-12 10:21:21 -04:00
Henry Whitney 94262b394c Mat 1:6
"Out-of her of Uriah" seems to include, however tersely or cryptically,
the idea that she was Uriah’s rightful wife when Solomon was conceived;
to add that Uriah was dead ("widow") softens the effect by saying too
much.
2016-08-12 10:17:19 -04:00
Henry Whitney a40a5f0863 Mat 5:12
de-awkwarded
2016-08-12 09:56:25 -04:00
Henry Whitney 160ea6a8aa Eco 30:28
Unpacked passive
2016-08-12 09:51:45 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5f04e6496a Mrk 14:71
streamlined
2016-08-12 09:25:36 -04:00
Henry Whitney 410a69d651 Mat 15:34, 36
The loaves were small by our standards, but not by theirs. UDB did well
to note that the fish were cooked ahead of time.
2016-08-12 09:23:24 -04:00
Henry Whitney d6706a5f88 Mat 17:25
excessive implied information removed
2016-08-12 08:58:18 -04:00
Henry Whitney 9800065768 Act 20:14
Wrong city in text.
2016-08-12 08:58:18 -04:00
Tom Warren f8a2c077bf Great Tribulation
This term is not easily rendered as "trouble caused by other people." It
should be kept as is.
2016-08-12 08:55:37 -04:00
Tom Warren b3d38d067e Sync conflict resolved 2016-08-12 08:53:49 -04:00
Tom Warren a313eb3cd2 CLeared for sync
# Conflicts:
#	02-EXO/36.usfm
2016-08-12 08:51:26 -04:00
Tom Warren d245cfed89 craftsmen spoke 2016-08-12 08:49:59 -04:00
Henry Whitney d10957495c Mat 18:9
zapped "you"
2016-08-12 08:49:35 -04:00
Henry Whitney b001976d48 Mat 15:8
Added not
2016-08-12 08:49:35 -04:00
Henry Whitney a971046951 Mark 14:31
Stray lines
Fixed heretical typo.
2016-08-12 08:49:35 -04:00
Tom Warren 48af5838c5 craftsmen 2016-08-11 18:17:20 -04:00
Tom Warren c483132ca5 craftsmen 2016-08-11 18:07:30 -04:00
Henry Whitney 0e63ec925f stray lines 2016-08-11 18:04:56 -04:00
Henry Whitney 8d99841890 Mrk 5:13
clearer rendering
2016-08-11 17:53:59 -04:00
Henry Whitney 4a62ba1fd7 Gen
Stray lines

Moved "Almighty" to ULB so can match tW list and UDB rendering to UDB.
2016-08-11 17:41:13 -04:00
Tom Warren e6d29a7ed4 Speaker 2016-08-11 17:26:42 -04:00
Tom Warren edaeb6c30d Chunk divide 2016-08-11 17:24:55 -04:00
Tom Warren 6a65dbf3cb Wise of heart 2016-08-11 17:20:45 -04:00
Henry Whitney eff6b78a67 Eco 30:34
Provides alternate understanding of agency. TN explains difference
between ULB and UDB.
2016-08-11 17:16:31 -04:00
Tom Warren a6e60f0f5b those who worked on the sacred tent 2016-08-11 17:06:20 -04:00
Tom Warren 8042eabbf5 Winged creatures 2016-08-11 16:11:37 -04:00
Henry Whitney 325e19994d Eco 30:28, 32-33
Conformed v. 28 to ULB and extended secondary quote to v. 33 per ULB.
2016-08-11 15:49:34 -04:00
aaronfenlason 8b8fb5fac5 Changed "make love" to "sleep" in v. 26. 2016-08-11 14:27:21 -05:00
Henry Whitney 21e719fa6b stray lines 2016-08-11 14:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney 2efe05be32 Rev 15:6 rephrased to match v. 1 2016-08-11 14:39:09 -04:00
Henry Whitney 8a6afccff9 Rev 15:1
shortened
2016-08-11 14:28:20 -04:00
Henry Whitney 1463720726 Rev 12:10
Shortened.
2016-08-11 14:23:54 -04:00
Henry Whitney 204c9b1bec stray lines 2016-08-11 14:05:13 -04:00