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1383 Commits

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Hanker10 bfedd9b0b6 1 Cor 10:22 add phrase for clarity
1 Cor 10:22 add phrase for clarity, "become jealous about split loyalty"
2016-07-13 18:56:33 -04:00
Hanker10 b978ffd083 1 Cor 10:19-20 change wording for clarity
1 Cor 10:19-20 change wording for clarity of concept. A quote from Leon Morris: "To eat idol meat might be held to sanction idolatry; not to eat it might imply that the idol was real. Paul starts with vigorous questions that imply that the idol sacrifice and the idol are both shams."
2016-07-13 18:55:11 -04:00
Hanker10 b1eaa77c76 1 Cor 10:13 change wording for clarity
1 Cor 10:13 change wording for clarity and correspondence to original
2016-07-13 18:44:04 -04:00
Hanker10 c8e285a139 1 Cor 10:4 change wording
1 Cor 10:4 change wording - same as in previous verse
2016-07-13 18:13:27 -04:00
Hanker10 29a404cb0b 1 Cor 10:3 change wording
1 Cor 10:3 change wording by adding "supernatural" to "manna."
2016-07-13 18:12:22 -04:00
Hanker10 d173bac757 1 Cor 9:22 change wording for clarity
1 Cor 9:22 change wording for clarity
2016-07-13 16:48:30 -04:00
Hanker10 361812bea1 1 Cor 9:19 change wording for clarity
1 Cor 9:19 change wording for clarity
2016-07-13 16:44:47 -04:00
Hanker10 ca45c969d5 1 Cor 9:16 change wording for clarity
1 Cor 9:16 change wording for clarity
2016-07-13 16:41:59 -04:00
Hanker10 d2ceca9836 1 Cor 9:15 change wording for clarity
1 Cor 9:15 change wording "money" to "any of these things" because the rights Paul could have claimed go beyond the monetary and other changes for clarity
2016-07-13 16:40:23 -04:00
Hanker10 83ddca4b73 1 Cor 9:10 cut extra wording
1 Cor 9:10 cut extra wording at the end, ", just like an an apostle over his church" since this is not at all in the text. Besides, it gives the idea that apostles have churches like pastors, but apostles are sent out, pastors stay.
2016-07-13 16:32:36 -04:00
Hanker10 4d1454350f 1 Cor 9:9 add missing word
1 Cor 9:9 add missing word
2016-07-13 16:30:08 -04:00
Hanker10 463f4fcf0a 1 Cor 9:5 change wording
1 Cor 9:5 change wording to include missing ideas from the original
2016-07-13 16:24:24 -04:00
Hanker10 58cd312c16 1 Cor 9:3 change wording
1 Cor 9:3 change wording for clarity
2016-07-13 16:23:00 -04:00
Hanker10 410f926034 1 Cor 8:2 improve wording
1 Cor 8:2 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:38:11 -04:00
Hanker10 d86ec39351 1 Cor 7:36 improve wording
1 Cor 7:36 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:32:22 -04:00
Hanker10 d93ff11a0b 1 Cor 7:35 improve wording
1 Cor 7:35 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:31:11 -04:00
Hanker10 412b480445 1 Cor 7:34 change wording
1 Cor 7:34 change wording to keep the ideas closer to the original
2016-07-13 13:28:47 -04:00
Hanker10 053c7eb3a8 1 Cor 7:34 change "girls" to "young ladies"
1 Cor 7:34 change "girls" to "young ladies"
2016-07-13 13:24:49 -04:00
Hanker10 44a4ca5dd5 1 Cor 7:33 change "day to day" to "ordinary"
1 Cor 7:33 change "day to day" to "ordinary"
2016-07-13 13:22:07 -04:00
Hanker10 7764530cfb 1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear"
1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear" to what you see because it is an idiom that could be unfamiliar to many. Also, dropped "or in their hearts" after "joy on their faces" because this is added. Also, "they wanted" after "to buy something." These are all additions that qualify the ideas too far.
2016-07-13 13:18:23 -04:00
Hanker10 9ce09929d4 1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain"
1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain" since not all slaves had to purchase their freedom and this idea is not in the original
2016-07-13 12:55:30 -04:00
Hanker10 107391498f 1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence
1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence, "These are the commands of the Lord." since this is not in the original and is repeated from verse 10 unnecessarily.
2016-07-13 12:43:08 -04:00
Hanker10 df0db16a31 1 Cor 7:6 change wording
1 Cor 7:6 change wording to include the concept of concession (as in ULB)
2016-07-13 12:39:21 -04:00
Tom Warren 9c498b3e5a punctuation 2016-07-13 12:01:43 -04:00
Tom Warren 958aaf2891 twelve 2016-07-13 11:38:06 -04:00
Tom Warren 04f1115835 Twelve to LC twelve 2016-07-13 11:16:28 -04:00
Tom Warren e31afee8df Twelve 2016-07-13 11:01:12 -04:00
pohlig e574daad45 Update 01.usfm 2016-07-13 10:58:22 -04:00
Tom Warren f1f53ba0f8 Clarity 2016-07-13 10:38:28 -04:00
Hanker10 228ebbefa9 1 Cor 6:13 change wording
1 Cor 6:13 change wording: "person" is too broad a term to represent "stomach."
2016-07-13 10:32:16 -04:00
Hanker10 b81aff5ce9 1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording
1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording
2016-07-13 10:23:42 -04:00
Hanker10 e248c2a714 1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom
1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom
2016-07-13 10:20:58 -04:00
Hanker10 4ffcbb6348 1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom
1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom
2016-07-13 10:17:12 -04:00
Hanker10 0f17ab3cf8 1 Cor 6:5 change wording
1 Cor 6:5 change wording to include the idea of shaming
2016-07-13 10:08:42 -04:00
Tom Warren 7859fe9e9a james Royal law 2016-07-13 10:07:01 -04:00
Hanker10 7d2631d626 1 Cor 6:1 change wording
1 Cor 6:1 change wording to include the idea of "daring to" since their practice violated the sanctity of the body of believers
2016-07-13 10:00:34 -04:00
Tom Warren 64ae12ba7f not too many plagues 2016-07-13 09:33:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney 1f33510e85 extra empty paras 2016-07-13 09:30:12 -04:00
Tom Warren 6a1b215cdf wine for wrath 2016-07-13 09:22:37 -04:00
Tom Warren 31c2441998 Therefor into therefore 2016-07-13 09:22:37 -04:00
pohlig 908361235c Update 12.usfm 2016-07-13 08:42:03 -04:00
Tom Warren 0310fec863 consistency turned into blood 2016-07-13 08:40:07 -04:00
Tom Warren 2714546258 what was contained in his bowl 2016-07-13 08:38:18 -04:00
Tom Warren ce80603a29 Reworked 2016-07-13 08:34:20 -04:00
Tom Warren 3f62bc06b6 seeking clarity 2016-07-13 08:28:21 -04:00
Tom Warren 0d2a4d8b0f Comma removed 2016-07-13 08:15:52 -04:00
Hanker10 fb678a8761 1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity
1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity
2016-07-12 21:33:58 -04:00
Hanker10 9b04192d61 1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity
1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity: "be with" becomes "keep company with"
2016-07-12 21:28:43 -04:00
Hanker10 3131be8755 1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity
1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity: "affect" becomes "infect"
2016-07-12 21:26:55 -04:00
Hanker10 0fe2f94a5c 1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity
1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity
2016-07-12 21:24:58 -04:00