Commit Graph

755 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Hanker10 46a6824bb6 Matthew 6:16 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:16 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:34:05 -04:00
Hanker10 359df67e33 Matthew 6:6 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:6 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:13:07 -04:00
Hanker10 7e29742da9 Matthew 6:5 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:5 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:11:46 -04:00
Hanker10 9f20ba796a Matthew 6:2 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:2 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:09:28 -04:00
Hanker10 31466752dd Matthew 6:1 simplify & condense wording
Matthew 6:1 simplify & condense wording
2016-06-20 18:06:59 -04:00
pohlig e28032294b Update 05.usfm 2016-06-20 17:19:47 -04:00
Henry Whitney 3a7d17fee6 Lowercasing mid-sentence "Scriptur" 2016-06-20 16:25:02 -04:00
hharrissWA a405262794 changed "Those of us..." to "For those of us..." 2016-06-20 10:11:26 -05:00
hharrissWA 834574ee82 changed "dies" to "died" 2016-06-20 10:09:02 -05:00
hharrissWA e522a24da9 repeated attempt to correct 2016-06-20 10:05:56 -05:00
hharrissWA 122ddb38eb Merge branch 'master' of https://github.com/Door43/udb-en 2016-06-20 10:02:59 -05:00
Henry Whitney dcb17a66bf Fixed punctuation 4:25 2016-06-20 11:02:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney c06fc79642 verb agreement 4:3 2016-06-20 11:02:55 -04:00
hharrissWA c882957e43 extra "there" removed, and "come from" changed to "comes from" 2016-06-20 10:02:53 -05:00
pohlig 458bf8558c Update 05.usfm 2016-06-20 09:46:33 -04:00
pohlig b4591cedb5 Update 05.usfm 2016-06-20 09:42:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney 82e6ac4bb6 removed spurious space 3:25 2016-06-20 08:36:50 -04:00
Henry Whitney 2aee398b70 removed spurious word 3:25 2016-06-20 08:36:50 -04:00
hharrissWA 7b84331b01 changed "they" to "you," which is referencing the Corinthians 2016-06-20 21:47:04 -05:00
hharrissWA 2e7cc8f3f9 added needed words: "be" in v 16, and "that" in v 17 2016-06-19 08:00:44 -05:00
Tom Warren 45011d92f4 Gal 3:19
Aligned the UDB to reflect the content of the ULB
2016-06-18 17:28:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney 011f9f9bfe typo 3:8 2016-06-18 13:20:08 -04:00
Henry Whitney eeb5b01344 verb tense agreement 2:9 2016-06-18 13:20:08 -04:00
Hanker10 bf385c80fd Matthew 5:38 change wording
Matthew 5:38 change wording to drop extraneous, interpretive ideas.
2016-06-18 11:47:19 -04:00
Hanker10 e7995d418f Matthew 5:34 change wording
Matthew 5:34 change wording drop extras.
2016-06-18 11:44:23 -04:00
Hanker10 cd72ad0418 Matthew 5:35 change wording
Matthew 5:35 change wording to reflect meaning better.
2016-06-18 11:38:39 -04:00
Hanker10 3934348743 Matthew 5:33 change wording
Matthew 5:33 change wording to render Greek better.
2016-06-18 11:36:36 -04:00
Hanker10 bc796efea8 Matthew 5:25 drop "if" since it repeats
Matthew 5:25 drop "if" since it repeats the conditional clause unnecessarily.
2016-06-18 11:18:53 -04:00
Hanker10 63876282d8 Matthew 5:21 change wording
Matthew 5:21 drop "to die." since this is not in the Greek and is not necessary to carry the meaning. It is added.
2016-06-18 11:15:40 -04:00
Hanker10 9ad5902e80 Matthew 5:20 change wording
Matthew 5:20 change wording to render closer to the Greek.
2016-06-18 11:12:10 -04:00
Hanker10 162a69105d Mt 5:19 change wording
Matthew 5:19 change wording to conform closer to Greek.
2016-06-18 09:36:18 -04:00
hharrissWA e5f99087b6 restructured for clarity 2016-06-18 08:31:20 -05:00
pohlig 8bb9bdf297 Update 02.usfm 2016-06-17 21:10:08 -04:00
Tom Warren 81a9d8dc9f take out suffering suffering suffering 2016-06-17 15:19:19 -04:00
Hanker10 e263aab560 Matthew 4:19 change wording
Matthew 4:19 change wording from "It will be just like you have been fishing." to what you see because their new job is NOT just like the old one.
2016-06-17 13:12:56 -04:00
Hanker10 6237c44eb9 Matthew 4:18 change wording
Matthew 4:18 change wording from "because they earned money by catching and selling fish." to what you see. The rewording says the same thing but more concisely.
2016-06-17 13:07:51 -04:00
Tom Warren aa6e8fd420 fixing quotes 2016-06-17 12:24:39 -04:00
Hanker10 7273f16096 Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:23:20 -04:00
pohlig bc97fb82f0 Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:23:00 -04:00
Hanker10 a4422f8cdb Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition
Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition of "They strongly desire to ..." and "Many ..."
2016-06-17 11:21:23 -04:00
hharrissWA cf52b78e25 removed an "immediately" 2016-06-17 09:11:39 -06:00
pohlig 8c336ead0f Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:11:19 -04:00
pohlig 4d3d192bf5 Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:09:02 -04:00
pohlig e2a7ee4803 Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:02:31 -04:00
Hanker10 1beeba382f Romans 1:18 change referent in clause
Romans 1:18 change "everyone in the "who" clause to "all" and the number of the verbs "show" and "do" to match. This also matches with the "them" in the next sentence.
2016-06-17 10:55:26 -04:00
Hanker10 062ee7b7f7 Romans 1:7 added "in Rome"
Romans 1:7 added "in Rome" since this is in the Greek, helps the idea along, and does not hinder the flow of style.
2016-06-17 10:30:35 -04:00
Hanker10 9c7ae84fdf Romans 1:1 correct verb number
Romans 1:1 correct the number (singular) of the the verb "serve(s)"
2016-06-16 19:57:10 -04:00
pohlig a180cf3d36 Update 17.usfm 2016-06-16 17:10:43 -04:00
pohlig 9dce9adeba Update 10.usfm 2016-06-16 16:46:29 -04:00
hharrissWA 6fd77d37e5 semicolon replaced by comma due to presence of conjunction 2016-06-16 14:54:53 -06:00