1st person continuity

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\v 3 All of us, the people of Judah have become poor and have suffered greatly; \v 3 The people of Judah have become poor
\q2 most of our people have gone to other lands as slaves. \q2 and have suffered greatly.
\q1 They now live in other lands \q1 Almost all of our people
\q2 and have no peace. \q2 were forced to leave our land.
\q1 Our enemies captured us all; \q1 We now live in another country
\q2 there was no way for us to escape. \q2 and we have no peace.
\q1 When the people Judah were unable to defend ourselves,
\q2 that was when our enemies captured us.
\b \b
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\q1 We did not imagine how we would suffer; \q1 We did not imagine how we would suffer;
\q2 there is no one to comfort us. \q2 there is no one to comfort us.
\q1 We all call out to God, "Yahweh, look at how we are suffering \q1 We all call out to God, "Yahweh, look at how we are suffering
\q2 because our enemies have defeated us! \q2 because our enemies have defeated us!"
\b \b
\s5 \s5
\q1 \q1
\v 10 Our enemies have taken away all our treasures, \v 10 Our enemies have taken away all our treasures,
\q2 all the valuable things that we owned. \q2 all the valuable things that we owned.
\q1 We have seen soldiers from other nations, men who do not worship you, Yahweh, enter our sacred temple, \q1 People who do not worship you, Yahweh, are going into our sacred temple,
\q2 where you had said no foreigner must go." \q2 where you had said no foreigner must go into the place where your people worship you.
\b \b
\s5 \s5
\q1 \q1
\v 11 We groan in the city \v 11 All the people in the city cry out with pain
\q2 while we search for food; \q2 while they search for food.
\q1 we have given our most valuable things \q1 They have given their most valuable things
\q2 to get food to eat to gain some strength. \q2 to get food to eat to restore their strength.
\q1 We say, "Yahweh, look at us; \q1 Yahweh, look at me,
\q2 see how our enemies despise us!" \q2 no one values my life.
\b \b
\q1 \q1
\v 12 You people who pass by, \v 12 You people who pass by,
\q2 you do not seem to care at all about what has happened to us. \q2 you do not seem to care at all about what has happened to me.
\q1 Look around and see \q1 Look around and see
\q2 that there are no other people who are suffering as we are. \q2 that there are no other people who are suffering as I do.
\q1 Yahweh has caused us to suffer \q1 Yahweh has caused me to suffer
\q2 because he was extremely angry with us. \q2 because he was punished me on the day he was angry with us, his people.
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\q1 \q1
\v 13 It is as though he sent a fire from heaven \v 13 It is as though he sent a fire from heaven
\q2 that burned in our bones; \q2 that burned in my bones;
\q1 it is as though he has placed a trap to entangle our feet, \q1 it is as though he has placed a trap to entangle my feet,
\q2 and has prevented us from walking any further. \q2 and has prevented me from walking turning back to our home.
\q1 He has abandoned us; \q1 He has abandoned me;
\q2 we are weak and alone every day, all during the day. \q2 I am weak and alone every day, all during the day.
\b \b
\q1 \q1
\v 14 He turned the sins that we have committed into a heavy load for us to carry; \v 14 He turned the sins that I have committed into a heavy load for me to carry;
\q2 it is as though he tied them around our necks. \q2 it is as though he tied them around my neck.
\q1 Previously we were strong, \q1 Previously we were strong,
\q2 but he has caused us to become weak. \q2 but he has caused me to become weak.
\q1 He has allowed our enemies to capture us, \q1 He has allowed my enemies to capture me,
\q2 and we were not able to do anything to resist them. \q2 and I was not able to do anything to resist them.
\b \b
\s5 \s5
\q1 \q1
\v 15 The Lord looked at our mighty soldiers, \v 15 The Lord looked at my mighty soldiers, who kept me safe.
\q2 laughed at them, and threw them away.
\q1 He summoned a great army \q1 He summoned a great army
\q2 to come and crush our strong young soldiers. \q2 to come and crush me to defeat my strong young soldiers.
\q1 It is as though the Lord has trampled on us people of Judah \q1 The Lord has trampled on the people of Judah
\q2 as people trample on grapes in a pit to make juice. \q2 as people trample on grapes in a pit to make juice.
\b \b
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\q1 \q1
\v 16 We weep because of all those things; \v 16 I weep because of all these things.
\q2 our eyes are filled with tears. \q2 My eyes are filled with tears.
\q1 There is no one to comfort us; \q1 There is no one to comfort me.
\q2 those who could encourage us are far away. \q2 The one who comforts me is far away from me.
\q1 Our enemies have conquered us, \q1 My children have no hope
\q2 so our children have nothing good to hope for. \q2 because the enemy has taken us all captive.
\b \b
\q1 \q1
\v 17 We people of Jerusalem reach out our hands to get help, \v 17 The people who lived in Zion (the city of Jerusalem)
\q2 but there is no one to comfort us. \q2 have no one to give them comfort.
\q1 Yahweh has decided concerning us descendants of Jacob \q1 Yahweh has give the order that the people in nearby nations
\q2 that the people in nearby nations will become our enemies; \q2 will become the enemies of the descendants of our father Jacob (who are also called the Israelites).
\q1 so they consider that
\q2 Jerusalem has become disgusting to them. \q2 Jerusalem has become disgusting to them.
\b \b
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\q1 \q1
\v 18 But what Yahweh has done to us is fair, \v 18 But what Yahweh has done to me is fair,
\q2 because we have refused to obey what he told us to do. \q2 for I had refused to obey what he told me to do.
\q1 You people everywhere, listen to us; \q1 You people everywhere, listen to me!
\q2 look and see that we are suffering greatly. \q2 Look and see that that I am suffering greatly.
\q1 We had many sons and daughters, \q1 My young daughters and brave sons
\q2 but our enemies took them all and made them go to far off lands. \q2 have been taken away to far off lands.
\b \b
\q1 \q1
\v 19 We pleaded with our allies, in whom we trusted, to help us, \v 19 I pleaded with our allies, in whom we trusted, to help,
\q2 but they all refused, like men refuse to help a prostitute they slept with. \q2 but they all refused,
\q1 Our priests and our leaders \q2 they told lies and did not keep their promises.
\q2 have died from hunger in the city \q1 My priests and my leaders
\q1 while they were searching for food \q2 died with the walls of the city
\q2 to eat to remain alive. \q1 while they searched for food to eat.
\b \b
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\q1 \q1
\v 20 Yahweh, see that we are suffering very much. \v 20 Yahweh, see that I am suffering very much!
\q2 It is as though our inner organs are on fire. \q2 Inside of my body I am in great distress.
\q1 We are sad in our inner beings \q1 I am sad in the center of my being,
\q2 because we have rebelled against you. \q2 because I have rebelled against you
\q2 and have caused you great sadness!
\q1 Our enemies kill people in the streets with their swords; \q1 Our enemies kill people in the streets with their swords;
\q2 at home it is like sheol, the world of the dead. \q2 and that makes our homes the places where the dead are kept.
\b \b
\s5 \s5
\q1 \q1
\v 21 People heard us while we groaned, \v 21 Here my groaning!
\q2 but no one came to comfort us. \q2 but no one came to comfort me.
\q1 All our enemies know what happened to us; \q1 All our enemies know what happened to me;
\q2 they were all happy to hear about it. \q2 they were all happy to hear
\q2 about what Yahweh has done to his people.
\q1 Please do soon what you have promised, \q1 Please do soon what you have promised,
\q2 when our enemies will suffer like we have suffered! \q2 when our enemies will suffer like we have suffered!
\b \b
\q1 \q1
\v 22 Yahweh, consent to look at all the evil deeds \v 22 Yahweh, let those evils deeds come near to you
\q2 that they have committed. \q2 so you may see them all!
\q1 Punish them as you have punished us \q1 Punish them as you have punished me
\q2 for all the sins that we committed. \q2 for all my sins!
\q1 We say this to you because we suffer and groan very much, \q1 I suffer and groan very much,
\q2 and we faint in our inner beings. \q2 and I faint within my inner self.

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\v 1 The Lord was extremely angry with us; \v 1 The Lord was extremely angry with us;
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\q2 without pitying them at all. \q2 without pitying them at all.
\b \b
\q1 \q1
\v 22 You summoned our enemies to attack us from every direction, \v 22 You summoned my enemies to attack from every direction,
\q2 as though you were calling them to come to a feast. \q2 as though you were calling them to come to a feast.
\q1 At that time you showed that you were very angry, \q1 At that time you showed that you were very angry,
\q2 and no one escaped. \q2 and no one escaped.

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\q2 He never stops acting kindly toward us. \q2 He never stops acting kindly toward us.
\q1 \q1
\v 23 Every morning he acts mercifully toward us again. \v 23 Every morning he acts mercifully toward us again.
\q2 He is the one whom we can always trust in. \q2 He is the one in whom we can always trust.
\q1 \q1
\v 24 So I sincerely say to myself, "Yahweh gives me what I need; \v 24 So I sincerely say to myself, "Yahweh gives me what I need!"
\q2 I will confidently wait for him to do good things for me." \q2 Because I believe this, I will confidently wait for him to do good things for me.
\b \b
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