en_tn_lite_do_not_use/lam/01/05.md

Her adversaries have become her master; her enemies prosper

"Zion's adversaries rule over it; its enemies prosper"

Yahweh has afflicted her for her many sins

This speaks of Yahweh punishing the people of Zion for their sins as if they were a woman that Yahweh was punishing. AT: "Yahweh has afflicted her people because of the sins they have committed" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification)

Her little children go into captivity to her adversary

The word "captivity" can be expressed as a verb. AT: "Her enemy captures her little children" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns)