General Information:

This continues the quotation from the same psalm that was also quoted in Hebrews 3:7.

For we have become

Here "we" refers to both the writer and the readers. (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive)

"if we continue to confidently trust in him"

"from when we first begin to believe in him"

This is a polite way of referring to when a person dies. AT: "until we die" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-euphemism)

This can be stated in active form. AT: "the writer wrote" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)

God's "voice" represents him speaking. See how you translated this in Hebrews 3:7. AT: "when you hear God speak" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy)

Here "rebellion" can be stated as a verb. See how you translated this in Hebrews 3:8. AT: "as when your ancestors rebelled against God" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns)