Working through Reader report on REV

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-\v 28 Let them be blotted out of the Book of Life
+\v 28 Let them be blotted out of The Book of Life
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 \v 29 But I am poor and sorrowful;

51-PHP/04.usfm

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 \v 1 Therefore, my beloved brothers whom I long for, my joy and crown, in this way stand firm in the Lord, beloved friends.
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 \v 2 I am pleading with Euodia, and I am pleading with Syntyche, be of the same mind in the Lord.
-\v 3 Indeed, I am entreating you also, my true yokefellow: help these women. For they labored with me in spreading the gospel along with Clement and the rest of my fellow workers, whose names are in the Book of Life.
+\v 3 Indeed, I am entreating you also, my true yokefellow: help these women. For they labored with me in spreading the gospel along with Clement and the rest of my fellow workers, whose names are in The Book of Life.
 
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67-REV/01.usfm

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 \v 1 This is the revelation of Jesus Christ that God gave him to show his servants what must soon take place. He made it known by sending his angel to his servant John.
 \v 2 John testified about the word of God and about the testimony given about Jesus Christ, all the things that he saw.
-\v 3 Blessed are the one who reads aloud, and those who listen to the words of this prophecy, and who obey what is written in it, because the time is near.
+\v 3 Blessed are the one who reads aloud, and who listen to the words of this prophecy, and who obey what is written in it, because the time is near.
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67-REV/02.usfm

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 \v 15 In the same way, you even have some who hold tightly to the teaching of the Nicolaitans.
 
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-\v 16 Repent, therefore! If you do not, I will quickly come to you, and I will make war against them with the sword in my mouth.
+\v 16 Repent, therefore! If you do not, I will quickly come to you, and I will wage war against them with the sword in my mouth.
 \v 17 Let the one who has an ear listen to what the Spirit is saying to the churches. To the one who conquers, I will give some of the hidden manna, and I will give a white stone with a new name written on the stone, a name which no one knows but the one who receives it."'"
 
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67-REV/03.usfm

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 \v 4 But there are a few names of the people in Sardis who did not make their clothes dirty. They will walk with me, dressed in white, for they are worthy.
 
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-\v 5 The one who conquers will be clothed in white garments, and I will never wipe his name out of the Book of Life, and I will speak his name before my Father, and before his angels.
+\v 5 The one who conquers will be clothed in white garments, and I will never wipe his name out of The Book of Life, and I will speak his name before my Father, and before his angels.
 \v 6 Let the one who has an ear listen to what the Spirit is saying to the churches."'"
 
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 \v 6 These witnesses have authority to close up the sky so that no rain will fall during the time that they prophesy. They have power to turn the waters to blood and to strike the earth with every kind of plague whenever they wish.
-\v 7 When they will have finished their testimony, the beast that comes up from the bottomless pit will make war against them. He will conquer them and kill them.
+\v 7 When they will have finished their testimony, the beast that comes up from the bottomless pit will wage war against them. He will conquer them and kill them.
 
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 \v 8 Their bodies will lie in the street of the great city (which is symbolically called Sodom and Egypt) where their Lord was crucified.

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 \v 15 The serpent poured water out of his mouth like a river, that he would make a flood to sweep her away.
 \v 16 But the earth helped the woman. The earth opened its mouth and swallowed the river that the dragon was pouring out of his mouth.
-\v 17 Then the dragon was enraged at the woman and went off to make war with the rest of her descendants, those who obey God's commandments and hold to the testimony about Jesus.
+\v 17 Then the dragon was enraged at the woman and went off to wage war with the rest of her descendants, those who obey God's commandments and hold to the testimony about Jesus.
 \v 18 Then the dragon stood on the sand of the seashore.

67-REV/13.usfm

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 \v 6 So the beast opened its mouth to speak blasphemies against God: blaspheming his name, the place where he lives, and those who live in heaven.
 
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-\v 7 The beast was permitted to make war with the believers and to conquer them. Also, authority was given to it over every tribe, people, language, and nation.
-\v 8 All who live on the earth will worship it, everyone whose name was not written, since the creation of the world, in the book of life, which belongs to the Lamb, who had been slaughtered.
+\v 7 The beast was permitted to wage war with the believers and to conquer them. Also, authority was given to it over every tribe, people, language, and nation.
+\v 8 All who live on the earth will worship it, everyone whose name was not written, since the creation of the world, in The Book of Life, which belongs to the Lamb, who had been slaughtered.
 
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 \v 9 If anyone has an ear, let him listen.

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 \v 9 Another angel—a third angel— followed them, saying with a loud voice, "If anyone worships the beast and his image, and receives a mark on his forehead or on his hand,
-\v 10 he also will drink some of the wine of God's wrath, the wine that has been poured undiluted into the cup of his anger. The person who drinks it will be tormented with fire and sulfur before God's holy angels and before the Lamb.
+\v 10 he will also drink some of the wine of God's wrath, the wine that has been poured undiluted into the cup of his anger. The person who drinks it will be tormented with fire and sulfur before God's holy angels and before the Lamb.
 
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 \v 11 The smoke from their torment goes up forever and ever, and they have no rest day or night—these worshipers of the beast and his image, and everyone who receives the mark of his name.

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 \v 4 The third angel poured out his bowl into the rivers and the springs of water, and they became blood.
 \v 5 I heard the angel of the waters say, 
-\q "You are righteous—the one who is and who was, the Holy One,
+\q "You are righteous—the one who is and who was, the Holy One—
 \q2 because you have judged these things.
 \f + \ft Some older copies read, \fqa You are righteous, Lord—the one who is and who was and who is to be, because you have judged these things. \fqb \f*
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 \v 7 But the angel said to me, "Why are you astonished? I will explain to you the meaning of the woman and of the beast that is carrying her, the beast that has the seven heads and the ten horns.
 
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-\v 8 The beast you saw existed, does not exist now, but is about to come up from the bottomless pit. Then it will go on to destruction. Those who live on the earth, those whose names have not been written in the book of life since the foundation of the world—they will be astounded when they see the beast that existed, does not exist now, but is about to come.
+\v 8 The beast you saw existed, does not exist now, but is about to come up from the bottomless pit. Then it will go on to destruction. Those who live on the earth, those whose names have not been written in The Book of Life since the foundation of the world—they will be astounded when they see the beast that existed, does not exist now, but is about to come.
 
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 \v 9 This calls for a mind that has wisdom. The seven heads are seven hills on which the woman is seated. 
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 \v 12 The ten horns that you saw are ten kings who have not yet received a kingdom, but they will receive authority as kings for one hour together with the beast.
 \v 13 These are of one mind, and they give over their power and authority to the beast.
-\v 14 They will make war against the Lamb. But the Lamb will conquer them because he is Lord of lords and King of kings—and with him are the called ones, the chosen ones, the faithful ones."
+\v 14 They will wage war against the Lamb. But the Lamb will conquer them because he is Lord of lords and King of kings—and with him are the called ones, the chosen ones, and the faithful ones."
 
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 \v 15 The angel said to me, "The waters you saw, where the prostitute is seated, are peoples, multitudes, nations, and languages.

67-REV/19.usfm

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 \v 6 Then I heard what sounded like the voice of a great number of people, like the roar of many waters, and like loud crashes of thunder, saying,
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-\q For the Lord reigns, the almighty God.
+\q For the Lord reigns, the God who rules over all.
 
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-\v 11 Then I saw heaven open, and I looked and there was a white horse. The one riding it is called faithful and true. It is with justice that he judges and makes war.
+\v 11 Then I saw heaven open, and I looked and there was a white horse. The one riding it is called faithful and true. It is with justice that he judges and wages war.
 \v 12 His eyes are like a fiery flame, and on his head are many crowns. He has a name written on him that no one knows but he himself.
 \v 13 He wears a robe that was dipped in blood, and his name is called the Word of God.
 
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-\v 19 I saw the beast and the kings of the earth with their armies. They were gathering in order to make war with the one who rode the horse and with his army.
+\v 19 I saw the beast and the kings of the earth with their armies. They were gathering in order to wage war with the one who rode the horse and with his army.
 \v 20 The beast was captured and with him the false prophet who performed the signs in his presence. With these signs he deceived those who had received the mark of the beast and who worshiped his image. The two of them were thrown alive into the fiery lake of burning sulfur.
 
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 \v 11 Then I saw a great white throne and the one who is seated on it. The earth and the heaven fled away from his presence, but there was no place for them to go.
-\v 12 I saw the dead—the mighty and the unimportant—standing before the throne, and the books were opened. Then another book was opened—the book of life. The dead were judged by what was recorded in the books, according to their deeds.
+\v 12 I saw the dead—the mighty and the unimportant—standing before the throne, and the books were opened. Then another book was opened—The Book of Life. The dead were judged by what was recorded in the books, according to their deeds.
 
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 \v 13 The sea gave up the dead who were in it. Death and Hades gave up the dead who were in them, and the dead were judged according to what they had done.
 \v 14 Death and Hades were thrown into the lake of fire. This is the second death—the lake of fire.
-\v 15 If anyone's name was not found written in the Book of Life, he was thrown into the lake of fire.
+\v 15 If anyone's name was not found written in The Book of Life, he was thrown into the lake of fire.
 
 
 

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 \v 20 the fifth was onyx, the sixth was carnelian, the seventh was chrysolite, the eighth was beryl, the ninth was topaz, the tenth was chrysoprase, the eleventh was jacinth, and the twelfth was amethyst.
 
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-\v 21 The twelve gates were twelve pearls; each of the gates was made from a single pearl. The streets of the city were pure gold, appearing like clear glass.
+\v 21 The twelve gates were twelve pearls; each of the gates was made from a single pearl. The streets of the city were pure gold, like transparent glass.
 \v 22 I saw no temple in the city, for the Lord God Almighty and the Lamb are its temple.
 
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67-REV/22.usfm

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 \v 18 I testify to everyone who hears the words of the prophecy of this book: If anyone adds to them, God will add to him the plagues that are written about in this book.
 \v 19 If anyone takes away from the words of this book of prophecy, God will take away his share in the tree of life and in the holy city that are written about in this book.
-\f + \ft Some older copies read, \fqa God will take away his share in the Book of Life and in the holy city that are written about in this book. \fqb \f*
+\f + \ft Some older copies read, \fqa God will take away his share in The Book of Life and in the holy city that are written about in this book. \fqb \f*
 
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