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@@ -34,37 +34,37 @@ Possession is used in Hebrew, Greek, and English for a variety of situations. He
>... the younger son ... wasted his money with wildly extravagant living. (Luke 15:13)
-In the example above, the son owned the money.
+* The phrase "his money" means that the son owned the money.
##### Social relationship
>Then the disciples of John came to him. (Matthew 9:14 ULB)
-In the example above, the disciples were people who learned from John.
+* The "the disciples of John" were people who learned from John.
##### Material
>On their heads were something like crowns of gold (Revelation 9:7)
-In the example above, the crowns were made of gold. Gold was the material used for making the crowns.
+* "Crowns of gold" are crowns that are made of gold.
##### Contents
>Whoever gives you a cup of water to drink ... will not lose his reward. (Mark 9:41 ULB)
-In the example above, the cup has water in it.
+* A cup of water has water in it.
##### Part of a whole
>But Uriah slept at the door of the king's palace (2 Samuel 11:9 ULB)
-In the example above, the door was a part of the palace.
+* The door of a palace is a part of the palace.
##### Part of a group
>To each one of us has been given a gift (Ephesians 4:7 ULB)
-In the example above, "us" refers to the whole group, and "each one" refers to the individual members.
+* In the example above, "us" refers a group, and "each one" refers to the individual members of the group.
#### Possession with Events
@@ -74,29 +74,29 @@ Sometimes one or both of the nouns is an abstract noun that refers to an event o
>The **baptism** of John, was it from heaven or from men? Answer me." (Mark 11:30)
-In the example above, John baptized people.
+* This is about John baptizing people.
>Who will separate us from the **love** of Christ? (Romans 3:35)
-In the example below, Christ loves us.
+* This is about Christ loving us.
**Object** - Sometimes the word after "of" tells who or what something would happen to.
>For the **love** of money is a root of all kinds of evil. (1 Timothy 6:10 ULB)
-In the example above, people love money.
+* This us about people loving money.
**Instrument** - Sometimes the word after "of" tells the instrument that would be used to do something.
>then be afraid of the sword, because wrath brings the **punishment** of the sword (Job 19:29 ULB)
-In the example above, God would punish people by sending enemies to attack them with swords.
+* This is about God punishing people by sending enemies to attack them with swords.
**Representation** - Sometimes the word after "of" tells what the idea before "of" represents.
>As John came, he was baptizing in the wilderness and was preaching a **baptism** of repentance for the forgiveness of sins. (Mark 1:4 ULB)
-In the example above, John was teaching people that they should be baptised to show that they were repenting of their sins. Their baptism represented their repentance.
+* This is about baptism representing repentance. John was teaching people that they should be baptised to show that they were repenting of their sins.
### Strategies for learning what the relationship is between the two nouns
@@ -114,21 +114,21 @@ If possession would be a natural way to show a particular relationship between t
### Examples of Translation Strategies Applied
-1. Use an adjective to show that one describes the other. The adjective below is in **bold** print.
+1. Use an adjective to show that one describes the other.
* **On their heads were something like crowns of gold** (Revelation 9:7)
* On their heads were **gold** crowns
-1. Use a verb to show how the two are related. In the example below, the added verb is in bold.
+1. Use a verb to show how the two are related.
* **... Whoever gives you a cup of water to drink ... will not lose his reward.** (Mark 9:41 ULB)
* ... Whoever gives you a cup that **has** water in it to drink ... will not lose his reward.
* **Wealth is worthless on the day of wrath** (Proverbs 11:4 ULB)
* Wealth is worthless on the day when God **shows** his wrath.
- * Wealth is worthless on the day when God **punishes** people because of his wrath.
+ * Wealth is worthless on the day when God **punishes** people because of his wrath.
-1. If one of the nouns refers to an event, translate it as a verb. In the examples below, that verb is in bold.
+1. If one of the nouns refers to an event, translate it as a verb.
* **Notice that I am not speaking to your children, who have not known or seen the punishment of Yahweh your God,** (Deuteronomy 11:2 ULB)
* Notice that I am not speaking to your children who have not known or seen how Yahweh your God **punished** the people of Egypt.
* **You will only observe and see the punishment of the wicked.** (Psalm 91:8 ULB)
* You will only observe and see how Yahweh **punishes** the wicked.
- * **... you will receive the gift of the Holy Spirit.** (Acts 2:38 ULB)
+ * **... you will receive the gift of the Holy Spirit.** (Acts 2:38 ULB)
* ... you will receive the Holy Spirit, whom God will **give** to you.