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914 Commits

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Hanker10 4439b7eb9a Matthew 7:15 simplify and condense
Matthew 7:15 simplify and condense
2016-06-20 20:40:17 -04:00
Hanker10 588fe1e2fe Matthew 7:5 eliminate extra sentence
Matthew 7:5 eliminate extra sentence that is purely applicatory: "When you have stopped sinning, then you will have the spiritual insight to help others get rid of their sins." and not the ULB or any other version including the Greek, of course. This concept is treated in the notes.
2016-06-20 19:04:49 -04:00
Hanker10 e92b2acad1 Matthew 7:4 spelling fault corrected & wording
Matthew 7:4 spelling fault corrected & wording condensed
2016-06-20 19:01:23 -04:00
Hanker10 6988d1d277 Matthew 7:3 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 7:3 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:59:09 -04:00
Hanker10 476afc7750 Matthew 6:32 cut last clause
Matthew 6:32 cut the last clause, "so you should not worry about them." since this is added text.
2016-06-20 18:55:05 -04:00
Hanker10 8195252d63 Matthew 6:30 change confusing wording
Matthew 6:30 change confusing wording. The wild plants are not thrown into the oven to bake bread, but to incinerate them or as fuel to back bread.
2016-06-20 18:51:51 -04:00
Hanker10 5fe2c2ebd7 Matthew 6:26 cut last sentence
Matthew 6:26 cut last sentence, " And you are certainly worth a lot more than birds! So you can be assured that God will supply what you need!" since it is not at all in the ULB or the Greek or other English renderings. This is applicatory and beyond the text.
2016-06-20 18:48:11 -04:00
Hanker10 df8eb9fb71 Matthew 6:20 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:20 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:38:48 -04:00
Hanker10 c8783442c4 Matthew 6:19 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:19 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:37:02 -04:00
Hanker10 46a6824bb6 Matthew 6:16 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:16 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:34:05 -04:00
Hanker10 359df67e33 Matthew 6:6 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:6 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:13:07 -04:00
Hanker10 7e29742da9 Matthew 6:5 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:5 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:11:46 -04:00
Hanker10 9f20ba796a Matthew 6:2 simplify and condense wording
Matthew 6:2 simplify and condense wording
2016-06-20 18:09:28 -04:00
Hanker10 31466752dd Matthew 6:1 simplify & condense wording
Matthew 6:1 simplify & condense wording
2016-06-20 18:06:59 -04:00
pohlig e28032294b Update 05.usfm 2016-06-20 17:19:47 -04:00
Henry Whitney 3a7d17fee6 Lowercasing mid-sentence "Scriptur" 2016-06-20 16:25:02 -04:00
hharrissWA a405262794 changed "Those of us..." to "For those of us..." 2016-06-20 10:11:26 -05:00
hharrissWA 834574ee82 changed "dies" to "died" 2016-06-20 10:09:02 -05:00
hharrissWA e522a24da9 repeated attempt to correct 2016-06-20 10:05:56 -05:00
hharrissWA 122ddb38eb Merge branch 'master' of https://github.com/Door43/udb-en 2016-06-20 10:02:59 -05:00
Henry Whitney dcb17a66bf Fixed punctuation 4:25 2016-06-20 11:02:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney c06fc79642 verb agreement 4:3 2016-06-20 11:02:55 -04:00
hharrissWA c882957e43 extra "there" removed, and "come from" changed to "comes from" 2016-06-20 10:02:53 -05:00
pohlig 458bf8558c Update 05.usfm 2016-06-20 09:46:33 -04:00
pohlig b4591cedb5 Update 05.usfm 2016-06-20 09:42:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney 82e6ac4bb6 removed spurious space 3:25 2016-06-20 08:36:50 -04:00
Henry Whitney 2aee398b70 removed spurious word 3:25 2016-06-20 08:36:50 -04:00
hharrissWA 7b84331b01 changed "they" to "you," which is referencing the Corinthians 2016-06-20 21:47:04 -05:00
hharrissWA 2e7cc8f3f9 added needed words: "be" in v 16, and "that" in v 17 2016-06-19 08:00:44 -05:00
Tom Warren 45011d92f4 Gal 3:19
Aligned the UDB to reflect the content of the ULB
2016-06-18 17:28:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney 011f9f9bfe typo 3:8 2016-06-18 13:20:08 -04:00
Henry Whitney eeb5b01344 verb tense agreement 2:9 2016-06-18 13:20:08 -04:00
Hanker10 bf385c80fd Matthew 5:38 change wording
Matthew 5:38 change wording to drop extraneous, interpretive ideas.
2016-06-18 11:47:19 -04:00
Hanker10 e7995d418f Matthew 5:34 change wording
Matthew 5:34 change wording drop extras.
2016-06-18 11:44:23 -04:00
Hanker10 cd72ad0418 Matthew 5:35 change wording
Matthew 5:35 change wording to reflect meaning better.
2016-06-18 11:38:39 -04:00
Hanker10 3934348743 Matthew 5:33 change wording
Matthew 5:33 change wording to render Greek better.
2016-06-18 11:36:36 -04:00
Hanker10 bc796efea8 Matthew 5:25 drop "if" since it repeats
Matthew 5:25 drop "if" since it repeats the conditional clause unnecessarily.
2016-06-18 11:18:53 -04:00
Hanker10 63876282d8 Matthew 5:21 change wording
Matthew 5:21 drop "to die." since this is not in the Greek and is not necessary to carry the meaning. It is added.
2016-06-18 11:15:40 -04:00
Hanker10 9ad5902e80 Matthew 5:20 change wording
Matthew 5:20 change wording to render closer to the Greek.
2016-06-18 11:12:10 -04:00
Hanker10 162a69105d Mt 5:19 change wording
Matthew 5:19 change wording to conform closer to Greek.
2016-06-18 09:36:18 -04:00
hharrissWA e5f99087b6 restructured for clarity 2016-06-18 08:31:20 -05:00
pohlig 8bb9bdf297 Update 02.usfm 2016-06-17 21:10:08 -04:00
Tom Warren 81a9d8dc9f take out suffering suffering suffering 2016-06-17 15:19:19 -04:00
Hanker10 e263aab560 Matthew 4:19 change wording
Matthew 4:19 change wording from "It will be just like you have been fishing." to what you see because their new job is NOT just like the old one.
2016-06-17 13:12:56 -04:00
Hanker10 6237c44eb9 Matthew 4:18 change wording
Matthew 4:18 change wording from "because they earned money by catching and selling fish." to what you see. The rewording says the same thing but more concisely.
2016-06-17 13:07:51 -04:00
Tom Warren aa6e8fd420 fixing quotes 2016-06-17 12:24:39 -04:00
Hanker10 7273f16096 Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:23:20 -04:00
pohlig bc97fb82f0 Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:23:00 -04:00
Hanker10 a4422f8cdb Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition
Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition of "They strongly desire to ..." and "Many ..."
2016-06-17 11:21:23 -04:00
hharrissWA cf52b78e25 removed an "immediately" 2016-06-17 09:11:39 -06:00