ab1a8ca559
typo
2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
Hanker10
b29e30e7dd
1 Cor 3:4 change wording
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1 Cor 3:4 change wording: "tearing the church into pieces" is an assumption here. This is probably true, but Paul is working up to this evaluation of the Corinthians. It is too early to let that cat out of the bag here.
2016-07-12 15:57:30 -04:00
Hanker10
c1ceab7596
1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
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1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
2016-07-12 15:53:39 -04:00
Hanker10
eccbb0a764
1 Cor 2:15 change one word
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1 Cor 2:15 change one word: "judgment" to "evaluate" since this will avoid the connotation (at least for English speakers) of patronizing dominance over others.
2016-07-12 15:50:30 -04:00
Hanker10
45b66a3ef9
1 Cor 2:3 change wording
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1 Cor 2:3 change wording since there is no indication the weakness was physical. There is also no indication that Paul's trembling was because of enemies. Many say it was because of the awesome responsibility he felt weighing on him and/or because he had just come from Athens where his presentation bombed.
2016-07-12 15:12:16 -04:00
54279cf480
κοπιαω has element of difficulty absent in UDB
2016-07-12 14:17:49 -04:00
3f2d3b6613
resolved ambiguity of "look"
2016-07-12 14:16:37 -04:00
Hanker10
6c66e17fcb
1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording
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1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording. God is not foolish or weak but appears so to the worldly.
2016-07-12 13:57:32 -04:00
Hanker10
aa98f27228
1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
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1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
2016-07-12 13:51:33 -04:00
Hanker10
b24ab0ccef
1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
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1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
2016-07-12 13:49:51 -04:00
Hanker10
8793409dce
1 Cor 1:10 change wording
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1 Cor 1:10 change wording. "this" to "your" since there is no prior reference to what the argument is.
2016-07-12 13:36:54 -04:00
Hanker10
36ee701aa5
1 Cor 1:9 change wording
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1 Cor 1:9 change wording to avoid the connotation that God's keeping of the promise is only in the future. The original is a statement of fact.
2016-07-12 13:32:29 -04:00
Hanker10
c781d3c30a
1 Cor 1:7 change wording
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1 Cor 1:7 change wording to avoid the connotation that
2016-07-12 13:28:07 -04:00
Hanker10
c488916e01
1 Cor 1:6 change wording
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1 Cor 1:6 change wording to avoid the idea that the confirmation was done by the Corinthians
2016-07-12 13:23:01 -04:00
Hanker10
f29116fbe7
1 Cor 1:5 change wording
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1 Cor 1:5 change wording at the end of the verse. "to speak his truth and to know God" is too restrictive. The speech and the knowledge are general, not just theological.
2016-07-12 10:49:12 -04:00
43dde8ed89
changes
2016-07-12 10:24:10 -04:00
505515d287
passive to active voice
2016-07-12 09:07:43 -04:00
6d6ae7a4a5
like the ULB
2016-07-12 09:05:08 -04:00
5b568d6b85
Added missing
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who was sitting on the cloud
2016-07-12 08:56:14 -04:00
2e2e55f7f6
corrected correction
2016-07-11 16:45:26 -04:00
75771b7f2c
removed passive
2016-07-11 16:45:04 -04:00
f6f427fa00
3:21-22 clarification
2016-07-11 16:20:54 -04:00
pohlig
7b4f4901ab
Update 14.usfm
2016-07-11 15:30:05 -04:00
pohlig
ee3b7873f2
Update 14.usfm
2016-07-11 15:28:13 -04:00
62b8179b53
3:18-19 cleanup
2016-07-11 15:26:40 -04:00
ccb4d3a6b9
zapped bad commas
2016-07-11 15:22:29 -04:00
7a4171025d
3:15 made complete sentence
2016-07-11 15:19:26 -04:00
bd9f6e6b98
3:14-15 explicating logic
2016-07-11 15:17:22 -04:00
5988458b9e
building materials
2016-07-11 14:30:55 -04:00
9c110aa968
farmeRs
2016-07-11 14:23:23 -04:00
ad2d8d517b
Christ's authority
2016-07-11 14:18:29 -04:00
e8e26089a1
assorted fixes
2016-07-11 13:46:14 -04:00
a687f49e3e
pigeons throughout
2016-07-11 13:01:52 -04:00
49740c2647
doves to pidgeons
2016-07-11 13:00:26 -04:00
c2158424e7
the "building" is not a "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
6097f7a528
concretized "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
bc950793f1
connectors
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
370db91ffc
smoothed out clauses
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
de552993f4
Revision to who is doing what to whom
2016-07-11 12:21:31 -04:00
c526d3038d
Revised who stayed in Jerusalem
2016-07-11 12:11:55 -04:00
d4d6f599de
more concrete vocabulary
2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
0e1c52d7a8
"of glory" modifies "lord" rather than telling what people would do
2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
5623d1ba30
chaste to not having sexual relations
2016-07-11 11:40:32 -04:00
5078809e1c
Attempted de-figurativization
2016-07-11 10:24:00 -04:00
a496fe9cc9
2:3 Restructured to remove awkwardness
2016-07-11 09:56:33 -04:00
hharrissWA
c422807b58
Update 03.usfm
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v. 10
comma added between clauses
2016-07-10 15:21:43 -05:00
hharrissWA
6458af25ea
Update 02.usfm
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v. 15
A semicolon is not needed because of the presence of the conjunction “and.”
Changed to a comma.
2016-07-10 15:19:46 -05:00
Hanker10
8e987aeccb
Romans 16:25-27 restore idea of doxology
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Romans 16:25-27 restore idea of doxology and follow original wording more closely
2016-07-09 15:01:02 -04:00
Hanker10
183b947655
Romans 16:20 add wording to show meaning
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Romans 16:20 add wording to show meaning
2016-07-09 14:47:31 -04:00
Hanker10
8287726878
Romans 16:19 change wording
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Romans 16:19 change wording to render original more closely
2016-07-09 14:44:14 -04:00
