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-\v 19 Some people from Ziph went to Saul when he was at Gibeah, and they told him, "David and his men are hiding in our land! They are hiding in places at Horesh on the hill of Hakilah, south of a place named Jeshimon.
+\v 19 Some people from Ziph went to Saul when he was at Gibeah, and they told him, "David and his men are hiding in our land! They are hiding in places at Horesh on the hill of Hachilah, south of a place named Jeshimon.
 \v 20 So, O king, come down there any time that you want to. It is our duty to capture him and put him in your hands."
 
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-\v 2 In the town of Maon there was a man who owned land in Carmel, a nearby village. He was very rich; he owned three thousand sheep and thousand goats.
+\v 2 In the town of Maon there was a very rich man. This man kept his property and livestock in a town nearby that is called Carmel. He had much property and livestock and he owned three thousand sheep and one thousand goats. Carmel is where he sheared his sheep.
 \v 3 His name was Nabal; he was a descendant of Caleb. His wife Abigail was a wise and beautiful woman, but Nabal was very cruel and treated people very unkindly.
 
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-\v 1 One day some of the people of Ziph town went to Saul while he was at Gibeah, and they said to him, "David is hiding in a cave on the hill of Hakilah, east of the town of Jeshimon."
+\v 1 One day some of the people of Ziph town went to Saul while he was at Gibeah, and they said to him, "David is hiding in a cave on the hill of Hachilah, east of the town of Jeshimon."
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 \v 2 So Saul chose three thousand of the best Israelite soldiers and went with them to the wilderness of Ziph to search for David.
 
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-\v 3 Saul and his men set up their tents close to the road on the hill of Hakilah, east of the town of Jeshimon, but David and his men stayed in the wilderness. When David heard that Saul was searching for him,
-\v 4 he sent some spies to find out for certain that Saul had come to Hakilah.
+\v 3 Saul and his men set up their tents close to the road on the hill of Hachilah, east of the town of Jeshimon, but David and his men stayed in the wilderness. When David heard that Saul was searching for him,
+\v 4 he sent some spies to find out for certain that Saul had come to Hachilah.
 
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 \v 33 Jehu said to them, "Throw her down here!"
-\p So they threw her down, and when she hit the ground and died, some of her blood splattered on the city wall and on the horses that were pulling the chariots.
+\p So they threw her down and Jehu ordered that his men drive their chariots and horses over her body, and that is how she was killed. Some of her blood splattered on the city wall and on the horses that were pulling the chariots. 
 \v 34 Then Jehu went into the palace and ate and drank. Then he said to some of his men, "Take the corpse of that women whom Yahweh has cursed and bury it, because she is a king's daughter and therefore should be buried properly."
 
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 \v 15 Everything else that Shallum did, including his killing King Zechariah, is written in the Book of the Events of the Kings of Israel.
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-\v 16 While Menahem was ruling in Samaria, he completely destroyed the city of Tappuah south of Samaria and killed all the people who lived there and in the surrounding territory. He did that because the people in the city refused to surrender to him. With his sword he even ripped open the bellies of pregnant women.
+\v 16 At that time Menahem completely destroyed the city of Tiphsah and killed all the people who lived there and in the surrounding territory from Tirzah on. He did that because the people in the city refused to surrender to him. With his sword he even ripped open the bellies of pregnant women who lived there.
 
 
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-\v 19 Then King Tiglath Pileser of Assyria came with his army to attack Israel. So Menahem gave him about thrity-four metric tons of silver in order that Tiglath Pileser would help Menahem to continue to be king and rule his country more strongly.
+\v 19 Then King Tiglath Pileser of Assyria came with his army to attack Israel. So Menahem gave him about thirty-four metric tons of silver in order that Tiglath Pileser would help Menahem to continue to be king and rule his country more strongly.
 \v 20 Menahem obtained that money from the rich men in Israel. He compelled each of them to contribute three-fifths of a kilogram of silver. So Tiglath Pileser took that money and went back home.
 
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