added "From" to v. 1; and in v. 3 removed the comma after "us,"
"From" helps explain the "to" of this letter: From ____, To ____ Comma seems to not be needed; unnecessarily interrupts the flow of the first clause
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\v 1 The elder to the elect lady and her children, whom I love in truth, and not I only, but also all those who have known the truth,
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\v 1 From the elder to the elect lady and her children, whom I love in truth, and not I only, but also all those who have known the truth,
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\v 2 because of the truth that remains in us and will be with us forever.
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\v 2 because of the truth that remains in us and will be with us forever.
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\v 3 Grace, mercy, peace will be with us, from God the Father and from Jesus Christ, the Son of the Father, in truth and love.
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\v 3 Grace, mercy, peace will be with us from God the Father and from Jesus Christ, the Son of the Father, in truth and love.
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