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03-LEV.usfm

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 \v 20 However, an unclean person who eats any meat from the sacrifice of a peace offering that belongs to Yahweh—that person must be cut off from his people.
 
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-\v 21 If anyone touches any unclean thing—whether uncleanness of man, or of unclean beast, or of some unclean and disgusting thing, and if he then eats some of the meat of a sacrifice of peace offering that belongs to Yahweh, that person must be cut off from his people.'"
+\v 21 If anyone touches any unclean thing—whether uncleanness of man, or of unclean beast, or of some unclean, detestable thing, and if he then eats some of the meat of a sacrifice of peace offering that belongs to Yahweh, that person must be cut off from his people.'"
 
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 \v 11 Since they must be detested, you must not eat of their meat; also, their carcasses must be detested.
-\v 12 Whatever has no fins or scales in the water must be detested by you.
+\v 12 Whatever lives in the water and does not have fins and scales is detestable to you.
 
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-\v 13 The birds you must detest and that you must not eat are these: the eagle, the vulture,
+\v 13 These are the birds you must detest—and you must not eat because they are detestable: the eagle, the vulture, and the black vulture,
 \v 14 the kite, any kind of falcon,
 \v 15 every kind of raven,
 \v 16 the horned owl and the screech owl, the seagull, and any kind of hawk.
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-\v 41 Every animal that creeps on the ground is to be detested; it must not be eaten.
+\v 41 Every animal that creeps on the ground is detestable; it must not be eaten.
-\v 42 Whatever crawls on its belly, and whatever walks on all four legs, or whatever has many feet—all the animals that creep on the ground, these you must not eat, for they are to be detested.
+\v 42 Whatever crawls on its belly, and whatever walks on all four legs, or whatever has many feet—all the animals that creep on the ground, these you must not eat, for they are detestable.
 
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 \v 43 You must not make yourselves unclean with any living creatures that creep; you must not make yourselves unclean with them, that you should be made impure by them.
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 \v 21 You must not give any of your children to put them into the fire, so that you sacrifice them to Molech, because you must not profane the name of your God. I am Yahweh.
 
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-\v 22 Do not lie with other men as with a woman. This would be wicked.
+\v 22 Do not lie with other men as with a woman; that is detestable.
-\v 23 Do not have sexual relations with any animal and defile yourself with it. Neither should any woman present herself to an animal to lie with it. That is a perversion.
+\v 23 Do not lie with any animal and defile yourself with it. Neither should any woman present herself to an animal to lie with it; that is a perversion.
 
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-\v 13 If a man lies with another man, as with a woman, both of them have done something detestable. They must surely be put to death. They are guilty and deserve to die.
+\v 13 If a man lies with another man, as with a woman, both of them have done what is detestable. They must surely be put to death. They are guilty and deserve to die.
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 \v 14 If a man marries a woman and also marries her mother, this is wickedness. They must be burned, both he and the women, so that there will be no wickedness among you.
 
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-\v 15 If a man has sexual relations with an animal, he must surely be put to death, and you must kill the animal.
+\v 15 If a man lies with an animal, he must surely be put to death, and you must kill the animal.
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 \v 16 If a woman approaches any animal and lies with it, you must kill the woman and the animal. They must certainly be put to death. They are guilty and deserve to die.
 
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 \v 15 and if you reject my decrees and detest my laws, so that you will not obey all my commandments, but break my covenant—
 
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-\v 16 —if you do these things, then I will do this to you: I will inflict terror on you, diseases and fever that will destroy the eyes and will drain away your life. You will plant your seeds for nothing, because your enemies will eat their produce.
+\v 16 if you do these things, then I will do this to you: I will inflict terror on you, diseases and fever that will destroy the eyes and will drain away your life. You will plant your seeds for nothing, because your enemies will eat their produce.
 \v 17 I will set my face against you, and you will be overpowered by your enemies. Men who hate you will rule over you, and you will run away, even when no one is chasing you.
 
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18-JOB.usfm

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 \q and give your attention to what our ancestors learned.
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 \v 9 (We were only born yesterday and know nothing
-\q because our days on earth are a shadow).
+\q because our days on earth are a shadow.)
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 \v 10 Will they not teach you and tell you?
 \q Will they not speak words from their hearts?

67-REV.usfm

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 \v 16 Repent, therefore! If you do not, I will quickly come to you, and I will wage war against them with the sword in my mouth.
-\v 17 Let the one who has an ear, hear to what the Spirit is saying to the churches. To the one who conquers, I will give some of the hidden manna, and I will give a white stone with a new name written on the stone, a name which no one knows but the one who receives it."'"
+\v 17 Let the one who has an ear, hear what the Spirit is saying to the churches. To the one who conquers, I will give some of the hidden manna, and I will give a white stone with a new name written on the stone, a name which no one knows but the one who receives it."'"
 
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 \v 21 The one who conquers, I will give him the right to sit down with me on my throne, just as I also conquered and sat down with my Father on his throne.
-\v 22 Let the one who has an ear, hear to what the Spirit is saying to the churches."'"
+\v 22 Let the one who has an ear, hear what the Spirit is saying to the churches."'"
 
 
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