f160bd67ce
1 Cor 3:13 change wording
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1 Cor 3:13 change wording, "how hard we worked for him" to what you see.
2016-07-12 16:54:07 -04:00
4b3ee1d0dd
1 Cor 3:10 change wording
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1 Cor 3:10 change wording to correct idea about Paul's giftedness.
2016-07-12 16:50:44 -04:00
Henry Whitney
828a4fd1f2
typo
2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ab1a8ca559
typo
2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
b29e30e7dd
1 Cor 3:4 change wording
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1 Cor 3:4 change wording: "tearing the church into pieces" is an assumption here. This is probably true, but Paul is working up to this evaluation of the Corinthians. It is too early to let that cat out of the bag here.
2016-07-12 15:57:30 -04:00
c1ceab7596
1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
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1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
2016-07-12 15:53:39 -04:00
eccbb0a764
1 Cor 2:15 change one word
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1 Cor 2:15 change one word: "judgment" to "evaluate" since this will avoid the connotation (at least for English speakers) of patronizing dominance over others.
2016-07-12 15:50:30 -04:00
45b66a3ef9
1 Cor 2:3 change wording
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1 Cor 2:3 change wording since there is no indication the weakness was physical. There is also no indication that Paul's trembling was because of enemies. Many say it was because of the awesome responsibility he felt weighing on him and/or because he had just come from Athens where his presentation bombed.
2016-07-12 15:12:16 -04:00
Henry Whitney
54279cf480
κοπιαω has element of difficulty absent in UDB
2016-07-12 14:17:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney
3f2d3b6613
resolved ambiguity of "look"
2016-07-12 14:16:37 -04:00
6c66e17fcb
1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording
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1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording. God is not foolish or weak but appears so to the worldly.
2016-07-12 13:57:32 -04:00
aa98f27228
1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
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1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
2016-07-12 13:51:33 -04:00
b24ab0ccef
1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
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1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
2016-07-12 13:49:51 -04:00
8793409dce
1 Cor 1:10 change wording
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1 Cor 1:10 change wording. "this" to "your" since there is no prior reference to what the argument is.
2016-07-12 13:36:54 -04:00
36ee701aa5
1 Cor 1:9 change wording
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1 Cor 1:9 change wording to avoid the connotation that God's keeping of the promise is only in the future. The original is a statement of fact.
2016-07-12 13:32:29 -04:00
c781d3c30a
1 Cor 1:7 change wording
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1 Cor 1:7 change wording to avoid the connotation that
2016-07-12 13:28:07 -04:00
c488916e01
1 Cor 1:6 change wording
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1 Cor 1:6 change wording to avoid the idea that the confirmation was done by the Corinthians
2016-07-12 13:23:01 -04:00
f29116fbe7
1 Cor 1:5 change wording
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1 Cor 1:5 change wording at the end of the verse. "to speak his truth and to know God" is too restrictive. The speech and the knowledge are general, not just theological.
2016-07-12 10:49:12 -04:00
Tom Warren
43dde8ed89
changes
2016-07-12 10:24:10 -04:00
Tom Warren
505515d287
passive to active voice
2016-07-12 09:07:43 -04:00
Tom Warren
6d6ae7a4a5
like the ULB
2016-07-12 09:05:08 -04:00
Tom Warren
5b568d6b85
Added missing
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who was sitting on the cloud
2016-07-12 08:56:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney
2e2e55f7f6
corrected correction
2016-07-11 16:45:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
75771b7f2c
removed passive
2016-07-11 16:45:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney
f6f427fa00
3:21-22 clarification
2016-07-11 16:20:54 -04:00
7b4f4901ab
Update 14.usfm
2016-07-11 15:30:05 -04:00
ee3b7873f2
Update 14.usfm
2016-07-11 15:28:13 -04:00
Henry Whitney
62b8179b53
3:18-19 cleanup
2016-07-11 15:26:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ccb4d3a6b9
zapped bad commas
2016-07-11 15:22:29 -04:00
Henry Whitney
7a4171025d
3:15 made complete sentence
2016-07-11 15:19:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
bd9f6e6b98
3:14-15 explicating logic
2016-07-11 15:17:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5988458b9e
building materials
2016-07-11 14:30:55 -04:00
Tom Warren
9c110aa968
farmeRs
2016-07-11 14:23:23 -04:00
Tom Warren
ad2d8d517b
Christ's authority
2016-07-11 14:18:29 -04:00
Tom Warren
e8e26089a1
assorted fixes
2016-07-11 13:46:14 -04:00
Tom Warren
a687f49e3e
pigeons throughout
2016-07-11 13:01:52 -04:00
Tom Warren
49740c2647
doves to pidgeons
2016-07-11 13:00:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
c2158424e7
the "building" is not a "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney
6097f7a528
concretized "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney
bc950793f1
connectors
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney
370db91ffc
smoothed out clauses
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Tom Warren
de552993f4
Revision to who is doing what to whom
2016-07-11 12:21:31 -04:00
Tom Warren
c526d3038d
Revised who stayed in Jerusalem
2016-07-11 12:11:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney
d4d6f599de
more concrete vocabulary
2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney
0e1c52d7a8
"of glory" modifies "lord" rather than telling what people would do
2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Tom Warren
5623d1ba30
chaste to not having sexual relations
2016-07-11 11:40:32 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5078809e1c
Attempted de-figurativization
2016-07-11 10:24:00 -04:00
Henry Whitney
a496fe9cc9
2:3 Restructured to remove awkwardness
2016-07-11 09:56:33 -04:00
c422807b58
Update 03.usfm
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v. 10
comma added between clauses
2016-07-10 15:21:43 -05:00
6458af25ea
Update 02.usfm
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v. 15
A semicolon is not needed because of the presence of the conjunction “and.”
Changed to a comma.
2016-07-10 15:19:46 -05:00
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