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Hanker10 48caf478c1 Romans 8:17 change wording 
Romans 8:17 change wording for clarity
 2016-07-08 16:27:32 -04:00
Hanker10 639ce2bead Romans 8:13 change wording 
Romans 8:13 change wording
 2016-07-08 16:24:20 -04:00
Hanker10 14a84f76df Romans 8:12 change wording 
Romans 8:12 change wording
 2016-07-08 16:22:42 -04:00
Hanker10 61563abcc2 Romans 8:6-8 change wording of "nature" 
Romans 8:6-8 change wording of "nature"
 2016-07-08 15:53:03 -04:00
Hanker10 aa957ff7c1 Romans 8:4-5 change wording 
Romans 8:4-5 change wording
 2016-07-08 15:51:12 -04:00
Hanker10 fa8192635e Romans 7:25 cut the application wording 
Romans 7:25 cut the application wording, "you and I"
 2016-07-08 15:45:14 -04:00
Hanker10 b7988aed54 Romans 7:23 change one word 
Romans 7:23 change one word
 2016-07-08 15:24:13 -04:00
Hanker10 af044741ad Romans 7:22 change one word 
Romans 7:22 change one word
 2016-07-08 15:21:28 -04:00
Hanker10 61db8f8861 Romans 7:20 change wording 
Romans 7:20 change wording
 2016-07-08 15:20:07 -04:00
Hanker10 78645d570a Romans 7:18 change wording 
Romans 7:18 change wording
 2016-07-08 15:16:58 -04:00
Hanker10 4f4c9efaec Romans 7:16 change wording 
Romans 7:16 change wording
 2016-07-08 15:13:55 -04:00
Hanker10 1ce2e0c1f5 Romans 7:14 change wording 
Romans 7:14 change wording
 2016-07-08 15:10:39 -04:00
Hanker10 5a6ec4ebbb Romans 7:13 cut dialog 
Romans 7:13 cut dialog
 2016-07-08 15:05:50 -04:00
Hanker10 0039aff789 Romans 7:7 cut dialog 
Romans 7:7 cut dialog
 2016-07-08 15:03:59 -04:00
Hanker10 4473c3f7ce Romans 6:19 change wording for clarity 
Romans 6:19 change wording for clarity
 2016-07-08 14:47:41 -04:00
Hanker10 a1f2687e5e Romans 6:16 change wording for clarity 
Romans 6:16 change wording for clarity
 2016-07-08 14:42:25 -04:00
Hanker10 8d09eab5c0 Romans 6:15 cut dialog and change wording 
Romans 6:15 cut dialog and change wording
 2016-07-08 14:35:17 -04:00
Hanker10 4b9a2c0ace Romans 6:13 change wording 
Romans 6:13 change wording
 2016-07-08 14:29:58 -04:00
Hanker10 82ee15e3fb Romans 6:11 change word 
Romans 6:11 change word
 2016-07-08 14:18:40 -04:00
Hanker10 a911e36b8d Romans 6:1-2 change wording 
Romans 6:1-2 change wording
 2016-07-08 13:49:58 -04:00
Hanker10 f2fce5e102 Update 05.usfm 2016-07-08 13:47:19 -04:00
Hanker10 2e411b65c1 Romans 5:18 change wording 
Romans 5:18 change wording to avoid limiting Christ's obedience to only his death.
 2016-07-08 13:44:17 -04:00
Hanker10 22c556723a Romans 5:13 change wording 
Romans 5:13 change wording
 2016-07-08 13:38:50 -04:00
Hanker10 9a1fbb55c9 Romans 5:12 cut narrative not in text 
Romans 5:12 cut narrative not in text
 2016-07-08 13:36:23 -04:00
Hanker10 98c3276857 Romans 5:10 change wording 
Romans 5:10 change wording
 2016-07-08 13:32:52 -04:00
Hanker10 9e2595734d Romans 5:9 simplify wording 
Romans 5:9 simplify wording and sentence structure
 2016-07-08 13:29:09 -04:00
Hanker10 0d39e8372d Romans 4:25 change wording 
Romans 4:25 change wording
 2016-07-08 13:16:59 -04:00
Hanker10 fcc29bf063 Romans 4:21 change wording 
Romans 4:21 change wording
 2016-07-08 13:13:38 -04:00
Hanker10 5ceb5c03ac Romans 4:18 simplify wording & order 
Romans 4:18 simplify wording & order of ideas
 2016-07-08 13:11:38 -04:00
Hanker10 262e463f19 Romans 4:17 change separate paragraph 
Romans 4:17 change separate paragraph to become part of verse 17. Also simplified the wording.
 2016-07-08 13:05:47 -04:00
Hanker10 e138a20f3c Romans 4:16-17 simplify wording and sentences 
Romans 4:16-17 simplify wording and sentence structure
 2016-07-08 13:03:12 -04:00
Hanker10 e8b2c690d3 Update 04.usfm 2016-07-08 12:54:42 -04:00
Hanker10 86f7a27779 Update 04.usfm 2016-07-08 12:54:06 -04:00
Hanker10 725a53349e Romans 4:11 simplify wording 
Romans 4:11 simplify wording
 2016-07-08 12:52:54 -04:00
Hanker10 46b7fbc721 Romans 3:31 cut the imaginary dialog 
Romans 3:31 cut the imaginary dialog
 2016-07-08 12:34:38 -04:00
Hanker10 b29fd8a5de Romans 3:24 change wording 
Romans 3:24 change wording to reflect the action of Christ for us beyond only his death.
 2016-07-08 12:04:06 -04:00
Hanker10 24b83c7565 Romans 3:21 change wording 
Romans 3:21 change wording for clarity
 2016-07-08 12:01:14 -04:00
Hanker10 e3750f7dc7 Romans 3:19-20 change wording 
Romans 3:19-20 change wording and punctuation for clarity
 2016-07-08 11:54:56 -04:00
Hanker10 a79ddcc9c3 Romans 3:9 cut dialog 
Romans 3:9 cut dialog
 2016-07-08 11:35:58 -04:00
Hanker10 c8cc398737 Romans 3:5-8 clear up dialog 
Romans 3:5-8  clear up dialog
 2016-07-08 11:30:02 -04:00
Hanker10 5a597196f5 Romans 3:3-4 cut dialog 
Romans 3:3-4 cut imaginary dialog since this is not needed and not in the text
 2016-07-08 11:14:21 -04:00
Hanker10 8014f3ca37 Romans 3:1-2 change wording 
Romans 3:1-2  change wording from a direct quote (not in the text) and the imaginary dialog.
 2016-07-08 11:10:57 -04:00
Hanker10 8d89082596 Romans 2:25 correct verb number 
Romans 2:25 correct verb number
 2016-07-08 11:00:34 -04:00
Hanker10 3592323645 Romans 2:24 cut extra sentence 
Romans 2:24 cut extra sentence, "The non-Jews say God must be a hypocrite if he tolerates the behavior of people like you."
 2016-07-08 10:59:33 -04:00
Hanker10 6632df2e73 Romans 2:20 cut extra word 
Romans 2:20 cut extra word "in" and change "what" from "you have __ the law __ teaches you"
 2016-07-08 10:56:32 -04:00
Hanker10 7554a08bb2 Romans 2:16 change wording 
Romans 2:16 change wording to shorten and simplify the sentence structure. The idea of secret is central, not an added feature.
 2016-07-08 10:53:15 -04:00
Hanker10 cbcef77589 Romans 2:12 change wording 
Romans 2:12 change wording to shorten the text.
 2016-07-08 10:43:22 -04:00
Hanker10 195645294f Romans 2:1 cut added wording 
Romans 2:1 cut added wording that is too interpretive and not in the text at all.
 2016-07-08 10:21:44 -04:00
Hanker10 8d9b792854 Romans 1:27 change wording 
Romans 1:27 change wording from, "As a result, God has punished them by sicknesses in their bodies, which is what they deserve." to what you see. To ascribe the agency to God is true ultimately but is too much to read out of the text and is likely offensive to some. The more immediate agency is the physical effects of such behavior that have become obvious in our context as well.
 2016-07-08 10:14:32 -04:00
Hanker10 23c0c899f7 Rom 1:14 change wording 
Romans 1:14 change the loaded terms "educated and to those who are uneducated" to what you see. There are many MTTs and their readers who may not have much formal education, but still have good discretion and ability to learn. Besides, this does not convey  the idea of "wise" and "foolish" in the text.
 2016-07-08 09:52:45 -04:00
Hanker10 b9825095a1 Romans 1:5 change wording 
Romans 1:5 change wording of "among the non-Jewish people groups" to what you see. The Greek says "all the people groups" and that includes the Jews, of course, and Paul certainly included them in his ministry.
 2016-07-06 09:31:43 -04:00
Tom Warren c36ddc9ebd dead / unable to have children 
matching the ULB
 2016-07-05 22:27:19 -04:00
Tom Warren bc5d64d4f2 2:12 and 13 
Rework in Nepal with MTT
 2016-06-30 04:16:41 -04:00
Hanker10 7273f16096 Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:23:20 -04:00
Hanker10 a4422f8cdb Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition 
Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition of "They strongly desire to ..." and "Many ..."
 2016-06-17 11:21:23 -04:00
Hanker10 1beeba382f Romans 1:18 change referent in clause 
Romans 1:18 change "everyone in the "who" clause to "all" and the number of the verbs "show" and "do" to match. This also matches with the "them" in the next sentence.
 2016-06-17 10:55:26 -04:00
Hanker10 062ee7b7f7 Romans 1:7 added "in Rome" 
Romans 1:7 added "in Rome" since this is in the Greek, helps the idea along, and does not hinder the flow of style.
 2016-06-17 10:30:35 -04:00
Hanker10 9c7ae84fdf Romans 1:1 correct verb number 
Romans 1:1 correct the number (singular) of the the verb "serve(s)"
 2016-06-16 19:57:10 -04:00
pohlig 886a5b9b67 Update 07.usfm 2016-05-31 11:04:58 -04:00
Tom Warren 07ef4887a9 Rewrite 2016-05-23 12:19:22 -04:00
pohlig 0bf056abec Update 06.usfm 2016-05-18 08:15:17 -04:00
pohlig f757a3ee0e Update 06.usfm 2016-05-18 08:10:48 -04:00
Tom Warren 0670505f12 Update 16.usfm 2016-05-17 11:37:35 -04:00
Tom Warren 35c6227079 Footnote 
Following the ULB, the footnote is added for clarity.
 2016-05-17 11:35:08 -04:00
pohlig 2fe958666d Update 06.usfm 2016-05-17 09:55:46 -04:00
pohlig 49f0e3960c Update 06.usfm 2016-05-17 09:54:07 -04:00
pohlig f2a8902b5e Update 06.usfm 2016-05-17 09:52:50 -04:00
Henry Whitney 32ade479c9 Rom 16 
towards to toward
deleted empty lines
 2016-05-02 10:42:18 +05:45
Henry Whitney 9b9292514c Rom 11 
towards to toward
deleted empty lines
 2016-05-02 10:39:49 +05:45
Henry Whitney 58f43cc1ba Towards to toward Rom 9:18 2016-05-02 10:04:41 +05:45
Henry Whitney 4325568620 Towards to toward Rom 5:10 
towards to toward
 2016-05-02 10:02:46 +05:45
Dave Statezni 2de771240d UDB_SQ_1 global replace 2016-04-28 21:29:33 -05:00
pohlig b566d8f1d0 Update 09.usfm 2016-04-18 17:16:08 -04:00
pohlig 60829efe07 Update 02.usfm 2016-04-13 11:54:29 -04:00
Tom Warren 314a0d05d5 Rewrite of vs 34 2016-04-08 09:46:21 -04:00
Apache Production e3fd5a5d05 Added README.md for each book with links to door43.org 2016-04-05 15:56:40 +00:00
Richard Mahn 78b7b614f7 Initial commit from Etherpad 2016-04-01 21:07:40 +00:00