Update 07.usfm

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-\v 1 My son, hold on to the words I speak to you,
+\v 1 My son, obey the words I say to you;
-\q2 and remember all my orders.
+\q2 remember all my orders.
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-\v 2 Obey my commands,
+\v 2 If you obey my commands, you will live.
-\q2 and you will live.
+\q1 Consider my commands to be the most precious thing you possess, and obey them.
-\q1 Consider my commands to be the most precious thing you possess.
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-\v 3 Write down my commands and tie them to your fingers to remind youreself;
+\v 3 Write down my commands and tie them to your fingers to remind youreself of them;
-\q2 write them on a tablet, as Moses wrote the law, in your inner self.
+\q2 let it be as if you had written them in your inner self.
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-\v 4 Speak to wisdom and say to her, "You are my sister,"
+\v 4 Speak to wisdom and say to her, "You are my sister;"
-\q2 and speak to understanding and say, "You are a member of my family,"
+\q2 speak to understanding and say, "You are a member of my family."
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-\v 5 and they will keep you away from the woman who desires to commit adultery with you,
+\v 5 Then they will keep you away from any women who want to commit adultery with you,
-\q2 the woman who would draw you to herself with her inviting words. Do not listen to her.
+\q2 women who would say things to you in order to attract you to themselves. Do not listen to them.
 
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