BramvandenHeuvel
9461dbc12f
Rewrite V13, 15
2016-05-25 15:15:55 -04:00
Hanker10
7ac6831325
Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
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Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:14:59 -04:00
Hanker10
59e7640236
Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
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Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:13:38 -04:00
Hanker10
5f0e04da34
Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
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Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:12:27 -04:00
Hanker10
b219692814
Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
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Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:11:17 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
cea9da7045
V8, 9 rewrite
2016-05-25 14:46:52 -04:00
Hanker10
97a5260ffa
Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
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Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
2016-05-25 14:43:19 -04:00
Hanker10
70f3d56c7f
Hebrews 11:19 change wording
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Hebrews 11:19 change wording to smooth it out and connect "from the dead" closer to Abraham's "receiving him back.
2016-05-25 14:40:54 -04:00
Hanker10
c75401e950
Hebrews 6:3 change wording number
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Hebrews 6:3 change wording number from plural to singular "these things" to "this"
2016-05-25 14:29:25 -04:00
Hanker10
9bc5cb01bd
James 1:17 change wording
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James 1:17 change "He does not change like shifting shadows." to what you see because he does not change AT ALL.
2016-05-25 14:18:23 -04:00
Hanker10
811d6165c5
James 1:8 removed redundant "person"
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James 1:8 removed redundant "person" after "double-minded" and "a" from before "double-minded"
2016-05-25 14:08:23 -04:00
Hanker10
323fb0b4e6
James 1:5 removed the word "it"
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James 1:5 removed the word "it" from the second use "the one who gives IT generously" since the original shows God as giving EVERYTHING generously, not just "it" = wisdom.
2016-05-25 14:06:39 -04:00
Hanker10
23ce30a274
James 5:6 change wording
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James 5:6 changed "the righteous man, the one who does not" to what you see because the Greek does not put a word for "man" or "person" in that position.
2016-05-25 14:02:46 -04:00
Hanker10
17bb11d545
James 4:1 change wording
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James 4:1 change "among your fellow believers" to "in your members" since this is more literal with the Greek and less interpretive which the UDB does adequately.
2016-05-25 13:58:10 -04:00
Tom Warren
3e304cce55
Corrected
2016-05-25 13:54:35 -04:00
Tom Warren
3f6b7f3fb5
Test
2016-05-25 13:53:22 -04:00
pohlig
17eb9f90e0
edit punctuation
2016-05-25 13:52:45 -04:00
pohlig
1b970877fe
Update 08.usfm
2016-05-25 13:27:47 -04:00
pohlig
70e94e1c81
Update 07.usfm
2016-05-25 13:23:52 -04:00
pohlig
c30c7c6cb3
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 13:14:31 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
9930343aaf
V5 rewrite
2016-05-25 13:03:13 -04:00
pohlig
cd4cad4bd9
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 13:00:19 -04:00
pohlig
b42a60cf64
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 12:59:51 -04:00
pohlig
9d5c905e46
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 12:55:09 -04:00
pohlig
080a07c44e
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 12:44:00 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
e9b20c195d
Update 04.usfm
2016-05-25 12:42:45 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
c810742bae
V1, 2 rewrite
2016-05-25 12:42:35 -04:00
pohlig
38fcd1d997
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 12:34:34 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
3e5549ac1e
V31, 32 rewrite
2016-05-25 11:44:42 -04:00
pohlig
4cbb823853
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 11:39:54 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
9534cf20a6
V28, 29 rewrite
2016-05-25 11:36:40 -04:00
pohlig
f7cc689b1f
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-25 11:35:35 -04:00
Tom Warren
c42e2ee0f2
Greetings continuity
2016-05-25 11:22:21 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
3a69e56257
V27b rewrite
2016-05-25 11:13:52 -04:00
Hanker10
0df85c58a8
Colossians 2:15 change wording
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Colossians 2:15 change wording from "led them in a victory procession" to what you see because "victory procession" is too interpretive. The Greek word only signifies "celebrate a triumph over"
2016-05-25 10:53:11 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
b34f2d22a8
V20 rewrite
2016-05-25 10:43:01 -04:00
pohlig
f75981ee6e
Update 01.usfm
2016-05-25 09:55:43 -04:00
pohlig
e0657c5fb1
Update 01.usfm
2016-05-25 09:55:01 -04:00
pohlig
7d231ec928
Update 01.usfm
2016-05-25 09:54:31 -04:00
pohlig
b18fa17234
Update 01.usfm
2016-05-25 09:53:49 -04:00
Hanker10
d1c7affe60
Colossians 1:24 change wording
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Colossians 1:24 change "for his body's sake, which is the church." to "for the sake of his body, which is the church."
2016-05-24 21:54:36 -04:00
Hanker10
3a8c9ed2d6
Colossians 1:22 change wording
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Colossians 1:22 change wording: "God has reconciled" to "he has reconciled" since "God" here is an interpretive insertion.
Also, "in the body of Christ's flesh" becomes "by his physical body,"
Also, "before himself. \v 23 This is providing that you" becomes as you see.
2016-05-24 21:48:21 -04:00
Hanker10
405b1b23e5
Colossians 1:18 change wording
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Colossians 1:18 change wording from "He is the originating authority, the firstborn from of the dead ones, so he has first place among all things." to what you see now. This is closer to the Greek. The phrase "originating authority" is interpretive and not literal.
2016-05-24 21:17:44 -04:00
Hanker10
1a3eceba2a
Colossians 1:18 change wording
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Colossians 1:18 change wording from "head of the church, his body" to "head of the body, the church."
2016-05-24 21:10:47 -04:00
pohlig
cd3daba668
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-24 20:33:27 -04:00
pohlig
300a478a64
Update 05.usfm
2016-05-24 20:30:38 -04:00
Hanker10
3207db79a4
Colossians 1:6 change sentence structure and comma
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Colossians 1:6 change sentence structure and omit comma
2016-05-24 20:01:54 -04:00
pohlig
b6bc7719d7
Update 04.usfm
2016-05-24 19:59:09 -04:00
Hanker10
4aa1d36cd6
Colossians 1:5 change wording
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Colossians 1:5 original wording: "You first heard about this confident expectation in the word of truth, the gospel." This fits the Greek better specifically the aorist.
2016-05-24 19:57:18 -04:00
pohlig
b289e52d36
Update 04.usfm
2016-05-24 19:54:12 -04:00