Commit Graph

193 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
hharrissWA fb30d84444 difficult punctuation modifications 2016-06-09 21:53:48 -06:00
BramvandenHeuvel e0ced68ee7 V43-44 rewrite 2016-06-09 17:27:18 -04:00
hharrissWA df314e9fd4 colon instead of semicolon before a listing 2016-06-09 15:42:35 -06:00
BramvandenHeuvel a325bd5b65 V38 delete "special" 2016-06-09 16:36:51 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 87685ec3df V35, 37 rewrite 2016-06-09 16:14:26 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel c3a22f7bda V25, 26 rewrite 2016-06-09 13:43:38 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel b966142665 V18 rewrote 2016-06-09 13:23:51 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel b81427b5af V13 rewrite 2016-06-09 13:14:38 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 50ae832f18 V28 split in two questions 2016-06-09 12:46:37 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 5aa7dceb80 V24-25 rewrite 2016-06-09 12:40:50 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 12e96334be V23 rewrite 2016-06-09 12:32:59 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel c2ec5933e8 V18-19 rewrite 2016-06-09 11:58:05 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 1c82a1f7e3 V15 rewrite 2016-06-09 11:32:27 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 51ac03fa58 V13, 14 rewrite 2016-06-09 11:25:00 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 0accfb6b80 V11 rewrite 2016-06-09 10:43:19 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 818ae1a333 V5 update 2016-06-09 10:31:38 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 88e843a661 V3 typo 2016-06-09 10:15:14 -04:00
hharrissWA a6d8223c67 corrections to quotation marks 2016-06-09 07:24:48 -06:00
hharrissWA 797867ec99 removed a misplace quotation mark 2016-06-09 07:17:56 -06:00
hharrissWA 00c722d992 modified position single quotation marks
OT quotation seems to end after the first occurrence of "one flesh."
2016-06-09 07:09:43 -06:00
hharrissWA 2f4790e907 to test him 2016-06-09 06:46:33 -06:00
hharrissWA d5c4c98494 moved "to test him" for reading clarity 2016-06-09 06:39:41 -06:00
hharrissWA 16f01b72fe second attempt to correct "first" 2016-06-09 06:14:30 -06:00
hharrissWA c838998305 "furst" changed to "first" 2016-07-26 07:11:08 -06:00
hharrissWA b70a22ae2c changed "round" to "around" 2016-07-26 07:07:35 -06:00
hharrissWA f4168e8322 spelling corrected: now to know 2016-07-26 07:04:48 -06:00
hharrissWA 4326904cef unnecessary comma removed 2016-06-08 20:58:23 -06:00
hharrissWA 0a4c5739f2 space place between quotation marks 2016-06-08 20:29:21 -06:00
hharrissWA be3abd105f comma edits 2016-06-08 14:59:05 -06:00
BramvandenHeuvel 729bd3133a V51, 52 rewrite 2016-06-08 15:04:00 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 96e7d3cef0 V46-47 rewrite 2016-06-08 14:13:17 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 99a59ae56d V32 a rewrite 2016-06-08 14:00:21 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 1ad7ed5a51 V29-30 punctuation 2016-06-08 13:50:03 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel c78f79dc4e V28 look 2016-06-08 13:28:36 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 0db5e77b88 V22 rewrite 2016-06-08 13:27:05 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel e79de8542f V17 rewrite 2016-06-08 13:18:39 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 6a89441396 V2, 13, 14 rewrite 2016-06-08 12:24:24 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 057ffe92d9 V39 rewrite 2016-06-08 10:08:19 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 927dfe9402 V36-37 review 2016-06-07 18:37:28 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 392bda32ea V33, 35 rewrite 2016-06-07 17:53:09 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 43572e8a9e V30 update 2016-06-07 17:04:01 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel a04b83ecee V26 rewrite 2016-06-07 16:51:43 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel ddc4a0cfb9 V17 rewrite 2016-06-07 16:45:46 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel c1304605b0 v 14, 15 rewrite 2016-06-07 11:25:21 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 37b61747f2 V12 rewrite 2016-06-07 11:03:52 -04:00
Tom Warren abf566bdff smart quote removed 2016-06-07 10:21:15 -04:00
Tom Warren 9a256bbeb1 smart quote removed 2016-06-07 10:21:15 -04:00
hharrissWA 949d36d68c comma for semicolon 2016-06-07 08:12:00 -06:00
hharrissWA 90b2de19ef connecting word edit for smoothness of reading 2016-06-07 07:42:11 -06:00
hharrissWA 9a2404e2af comma removed 2016-06-07 05:13:37 -06:00