And ... Numbers

04-NUM/01.usfm

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 \v 50 Instead, assign the Levites to care for the tabernacle of the covenant decrees, and to care for all the furnishings in the tabernacle and for everything in it. The Levites must carry the tabernacle, and they must carry the tabernacle's furnishings. They must care for the tabernacle and make their camp around it.
 
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-\v 51 When the tabernacle is to move to another place, the Levites must take it down. When the tabernacle is to be set up, the Levites must set it up. And any stranger who comes near the tabernacle must be killed.
+\v 51 When the tabernacle is to move to another place, the Levites must take it down. When the tabernacle is to be set up, the Levites must set it up. Any stranger who comes near the tabernacle must be killed.
 \v 52 When the people of Israel set up their tents, each man must do so near the banner that belongs to his armed group.
 
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04-NUM/03.usfm

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 \v 44 Again, Yahweh spoke to Moses. He said,
-\v 45 "Take the Levites instead of all the firstborn among the people of Israel. And take the Levites' livestock instead of the people's livestock. The Levites belong to me. I am Yahweh.
+\v 45 "Take the Levites instead of all the firstborn among the people of Israel, and take the Levites' livestock instead of the people's livestock. The Levites belong to me—I am Yahweh.
 
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 \v 46 You must collect five shekels for the redemption of each of the 273 firstborn people of Israel who exceed the number of the Levites.

04-NUM/16.usfm

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 \v 44 Then Yahweh spoke to Moses. He said,
-\v 45 "Go away from in front of this community so that I may consume them immediately." And Moses and Aaron lay down with their faces to the ground.
+\v 45 "Go away from in front of this community so that I may consume them immediately." Then Moses and Aaron lay down with their faces to the ground.
 \v 46 Moses said to Aaron, "Take the censer, put fire in it from off the altar, put incense in it, carry it quickly to the community, and make atonement for them, because anger is coming from Yahweh. The plague has begun."
 
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04-NUM/18.usfm

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 \v 22 From now on the people of Israel must not come near the tent of meeting, or they will be responsible for this sin and die.
 
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-\v 23 The Levites must do the work connected to the tent of meeting. They will be responsible for any sin regarding it. This will be a permanent law throughout your people's generations. And among the people of Israel they must have no inheritance.
+\v 23 The Levites must do the work connected to the tent of meeting. They will be responsible for any sin regarding it. This will be a permanent law throughout your people's generations. Among the people of Israel they must have no inheritance.
 \v 24 For the tithes of the people of Israel, which they offer as a contribution to me—it is these that I have given to the Levites as their inheritance. That is why I said to them, 'They must have no inheritance among the people of Israel.'"
 
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04-NUM/20.usfm

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 \v 4 Why have you brought Yahweh's community into this wilderness to die here, we and our animals?
-\v 5 And why did you make us come up out of Egypt to bring us to this horrible place? Here there is no seed, figs, vines, or pomegranates. And there is no water to drink."
+\v 5 Why did you make us come up out of Egypt to bring us to this horrible place? Here there is no seed, figs, vines, or pomegranates, and there is no water to drink."
 
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 \v 6 So Moses and Aaron went away from in front of the assembly. They went to the entrance of the tent of meeting and lay facedown. There Yahweh's brilliant glory appeared to them.

04-NUM/29.usfm

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 \v 3 You must offer with them their grain offering, fine flour mixed with oil, three tenths of an ephah for the bull, two tenths for the ram,
 \v 4 and one-tenth for each lamb of the seven lambs.
-\v 5 And you must offer one male goat as a sin offering to make atonement for yourselves.
+\v 5 You must offer one male goat as a sin offering to make atonement for yourselves.
 
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 \v 6 Make these offerings in the seventh month in addition to all of the offerings you will make on the first of each month: the special burnt offering and the grain offering to go with it. These must be in addition to the regular burnt offering, its grain offering, and its drink offerings. As you make these offerings, you will obey what has been decreed to produce a sweet aroma, an offering made by fire to Yahweh.

04-NUM/30.usfm

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 \v 9 But as for a widow or a divorced woman, everything by which she has bound herself will remain in force against her.
-\v 10 And if a woman made a vow in her husband's house or obligates herself by taking an oath,
+\v 10 If a woman made a vow in her husband's house or obligates herself by taking an oath,
-\v 11 and her husband hears of it but he says nothing to her and he does oppose her, then all her vows must stand and the obligations she made must remain in force.
+\v 11 and her husband hears of it, but he says nothing to her and he does oppose her, then all her vows must stand and the obligations she made must remain in force.
 
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 \v 12 But if her husband cancels them on the day that he heard about them, then whatever came out of her lips about her vows or promises will not remain in force. Her husband has canceled them. Yahweh will release her.
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 \v 14 But if he says nothing at all to her day after day, then he confirms all her vows and binding promises that she has made. He has confirmed them because he has said nothing to her at the time that he heard about them.
 
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-\v 15 And if her husband tries to cancel his wife's vow a long time after he has heard about it, then he will be responsible for her sin."
+\v 15 If her husband tries to cancel his wife's vow a long time after he has heard about it, then he will be responsible for her sin."
 \v 16 These are the statutes that Yahweh commanded Moses to announce—statutes for what is between a man and his wife and between a father and his daughter when she is in her youth in her father's family.
 
 

04-NUM/31.usfm

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 \v 18 But take for yourselves all the young girls who have never slept with a man.
 \v 19 You must camp outside the camp of Israel for seven days. All of you who have killed anyone and or have touched any dead person—you must purify yourselves on the third day and on the seventh day—you and your prisoners.
-\v 20 And purify for yourselves every garment, everything made of animal hide and goats' hair, and everything made of wood."
+\v 20 You must purify every garment and everything made of animal hide and goats' hair, and everything made of wood."
 
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 \v 21 Eleazar the priest said to the soldiers who had gone to war, "This is a decreed law that Yahweh has given to Moses:
 \v 22 The gold, silver, bronze, iron, tin, and lead,
 \v 23 and everything that resists fire, you must put it through the fire, and it will become clean. You must then purify those things with the water of cleansing. Whatever cannot go through the fire you must cleanse with that water.
-\v 24 And you must wash your clothes on the seventh day, and then you will become clean. Afterward you may come into Israel's camp."
+\v 24 You must wash your clothes on the seventh day, and then you will become clean. Afterward you may come into Israel's camp."
 
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