More checks of the self-reference project

02-EXO/29.usfm

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 \v 22 You must take the ram's fat, the fat tail, the fat that covers the inner parts, the covering of the liver, the two kidneys and the fat on them, and the right thigh—for this ram is for the priests' consecration to me.
-\v 23 Take one loaf of bread, one cake of bread made with oil, and one wafer out of the basket of bread without yeast that will be before me, Yahweh.
+\v 23 Take one loaf of bread, one cake of bread made with oil, and one wafer out of the basket of bread without yeast that is before Yahweh.
 
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 \v 24 You must put these in Aaron's hands and in the hands of his sons and wave them before me for a wave offering before Yahweh.

02-EXO/30.usfm

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 \v 11 Yahweh spoke to Moses and said,
 \v 12 "When you take a census of the Israelites, then each person must give a ransom for his life to Yahweh. You must do this after you count them, so that there will be no plague among them when you count them.
-\v 13 Everyone who is counted in the census is to pay half a shekel of silver, according to the weight of the shekel of the sanctuary (a shekel is the same as twenty gerahs). This half shekel will be an offering to me, Yahweh.
+\v 13 Everyone who is counted in the census is to pay half a shekel of silver, according to the weight of the shekel of the sanctuary (a shekel is the same as twenty gerahs). This half shekel will be an offering to Yahweh.
 \v 14 Everyone who is counted, from twenty years old and up, must give this offering to me.
 
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10-2SA/23.usfm

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 \v 15 David was longing for water and said, "If only someone would give me water to drink from the well at Bethlehem, the well that is by the gate!"
 \v 16 So these three mighty men broke through the army of the Philistines and drew water out of the well of Bethlehem, the well at the gate. They took the water and brought it to David, but he refused to drink it. Instead, he poured it out to Yahweh.
-\v 17 Then he said, "Far be it from me, Yahweh, that I should drink this. Should I drink the blood of men who have risked their lives?" So he refused to drink it.
+\v 17 Then he said, "Yahweh, far be it from me, that I should do this. Should I drink the blood of men who have risked their lives?" So he refused to drink it.
-\p These are things the three mighty men did.
+\m These things were done by the three mighty.
 
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13-1CH/11.usfm

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 \v 18 So these three mighty men broke through the army of the Philistines and drew water out of the well of Bethlehem, the well at the gate. They took the water and brought it to David, but he refused to drink it. Instead, he poured it out to Yahweh.
-\v 19 Then he said, "Far be it far from me, Yahweh, that I should drink this. Should I drink the blood of men who have risked their lives?" Because they had put their lives at risk, he refused to drink it. These are things the three mighty men did.
+\v 19 Then he said, "Yahweh, far be it far from me, that I should drink this. Should I drink the blood of men who have risked their lives?" Because they had put their lives at risk, he refused to drink it. These are things the three mighty men did.
 
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24-JER/15.usfm

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 \v 15 Yahweh, you know! Remember me and help me. Bring vengeance for me against those who persecute me.
 \q You are patient, but do not allow them to take me away; know that I suffer reproach for your sake. 
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-\v 16 Your words have been found, and I consumed them. Your words were a joy to me,
+\v 16 Your words have been found, and I consumed them. Your words became to me a joy
-\q a joy to my heart, for your name is proclaimed on me, Yahweh God of hosts.
+\q and the delight of my heart, 
+\q for I bear your name, Yahweh, God of hosts.
 
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24-JER/50.usfm

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 \v 23 How the hammer of all the lands has been cut apart and destroyed.
 \q How Babylon has become a horror among the nations.
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-\v 24 I have set a trap for you. You were captured, Babylon, and you did not know it!
+\v 24 I have set a trap for you and you were taken, Babylon, and you did not know it!
-\q You were found and seized, since you challenged me, Yahweh.
+\q You were found and captured, because you opposed Yahweh.
 
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