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 \v 11 Woe to them! For they have walked in the way of Cain and have plunged into Balaam's error for profit. They have perished in Korah's rebellion.
 
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-\v 12 These people are dangerous reefs at your love feasts, feasting with you shamelessly—shepherds who only feed themselves. They are clouds without rain carried along by winds; autumn trees, without fruit—twice dead, uprooted.
+\v 12 These people are dangerous reefs at your love feasts, feasting with you fearlessly—shepherds who only feed themselves. They are clouds without rain carried along by winds; autumn trees, without fruit—twice dead, uprooted.
 \v 13 They are violent waves in the sea, foaming up their shame; wandering stars, for whom the gloom of complete darkness has been reserved forever.
 
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 \v 14 Enoch, the seventh from Adam, prophesied about them, saying, "Look! The Lord is coming with thousands and thousands of his holy ones.
-\v 15 He is coming to execute judgment on everyone. He is coming to convict all the ungodly of all the works they have done in an ungodly way, and of all the harsh words that ungodly sinners have spoken against him."
+\v 15 He is coming to execute judgment on everyone. He is coming to convict all the ungodly of all the works they have done in an ungodly way, and of all the bitter words that ungodly sinners have spoken against him."
 \v 16 These are grumblers, complainers, following their evil desires. Their mouths speak loud boasts, and for their own profit, they flatter others.
 
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 \v 13 cinnamon, spice, incense, myrrh, frankincense, wine, oil, fine flour, wheat, cattle and sheep, horses and chariots and bodies, and human souls.
 
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-\v 14 The fruit that you longed for with all your might is gone from you. All your luxury and splendor have vanished, never to be found again.
+\v 14 The fruit that you desired with all your might is gone from you. All your luxury and splendor have vanished, never to be found again.
 
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 \v 15 The merchants of these goods who became rich by her will stand away from her at a distance because of the fear of her torment, weeping and mourning loudly.
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-\v 6 Then I heard what sounded like the voice of a great number of people, like the roar of many waters, and like loud crashes of thunder, saying,
+\v 6 Then I heard what sounded like the voice of a great number of people, like the roar of many waters, and like mighty crashes of thunder, saying,
 \q "Praise Yahweh!
 \q For the Lord reigns, our God, the Almighty.
 
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 \v 11 Then I saw heaven open, and I looked and there was a white horse. The one riding it is called faithful and true. It is with justice that he judges and wages war.
 \v 12 His eyes are like a fiery flame, and on his head are many crowns. He has a name written on him that no one knows but himself.
-\v 13 He wears a robe that was dipped in blood, and his name is called the Word of God.
+\v 13 He is clothed with a robe that was dipped in blood, and his name is called the Word of God.
 
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 \v 14 The armies of heaven were following him on white horses, dressed in fine linen, white and clean.
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 \v 10 Then he carried me away in the Spirit to a great and high mountain and showed me the holy city Jerusalem coming down out of heaven from God.
 
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-\v 11 Jerusalem had the glory of God, and its brilliance was like a very precious jewel, like a stone of crystal-clear jasper.
+\v 11 Jerusalem had the glory of God, and its brightness was like a very precious jewel, like a stone of crystal-clear jasper.
 \v 12 It had a great, high wall with twelve gates, with twelve angels at the gates. On the gates were written the names of the twelve tribes of the sons of Israel.
 \v 13 On the east were three gates, on the north three gates, on the south three gates, and on the west three gates.