Tom Warren
70b1063dbe
other fixes
2016-09-28 11:21:04 -04:00
Dave Statezni
817acb9aff
Updates from Reader Reviews
2016-09-27 23:49:59 -05:00
Henry Whitney
ad24abef6a
magic
2016-09-27 16:13:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney
a1e97c7b14
Deu 4:25
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errant pronoun
2016-09-27 16:12:46 -04:00
Henry Whitney
788a9d47fb
Revert "Deu 4:25"
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This reverts commit 049c7a56a9480d638b88d82d8a9ebcf2beb07df0.
2016-09-27 16:12:46 -04:00
Henry Whitney
7db799724e
Deu 4:25
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Errant pronoun
2016-09-27 16:12:46 -04:00
Henry Whitney
e157775cfe
magic
2016-09-27 15:03:00 -04:00
Henry Whitney
c8dbd97aff
Deut 4:21
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Word eliminated as per UBS HB.
2016-09-27 15:01:57 -04:00
Henry Whitney
3267ac9bfe
magic
2016-09-27 11:18:13 -04:00
Henry Whitney
0bd7f4b701
magic
2016-09-27 11:17:45 -04:00
Henry Whitney
f0588b0803
magic
2016-09-27 11:16:43 -04:00
Henry Whitney
12b4f7d515
Deu 4:15
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De-awkwarded.
2016-09-27 11:16:25 -04:00
Henry Whitney
e1e59d64c8
magic
2016-09-27 11:02:16 -04:00
Henry Whitney
c0525a3881
Deu 4:14
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rewording to more accurate
2016-09-27 11:01:19 -04:00
Henry Whitney
165d062beb
magic
2016-09-27 10:30:31 -04:00
Henry Whitney
25a797f105
magic
2016-09-27 10:29:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney
7c4f76332f
Deu 4:14
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Awkward English fixed. "of which you are passing over to take
possession" seems needlessly pedantic and less clear than allowing the
preposition to dangle its feet in the cool stream amidst a parched land.
2016-09-27 10:28:44 -04:00
Henry Whitney
896e019fbf
magic
2016-09-26 17:45:09 -04:00
Henry Whitney
200a3a04c6
Deu 8:3-17
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Tried to make consistent with the way parenthetical material is handled
in earlier parts of the speech.
2016-09-26 17:44:56 -04:00
Henry Whitney
a3cfbbe50e
magic
2016-09-26 17:07:18 -04:00
Henry Whitney
3d232caf16
typo
2016-09-26 17:06:47 -04:00
Henry Whitney
e29fd48ad1
magic
2016-09-26 17:05:41 -04:00
Henry Whitney
0b78d2dbad
Deu 3:11
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Tweaked punctuation.
2016-09-26 17:04:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney
258e325457
magic
2016-09-26 14:26:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney
cd0ca19162
Deu 3:8
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Personified relative pronoun
2016-09-26 14:25:30 -04:00
Henry Whitney
b49d8ddbf1
magic
2016-09-26 14:06:09 -04:00
Henry Whitney
21da574685
Deu 3:6
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Concord to 2:34.
2016-09-26 14:05:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
6df4d0733b
magic
2016-09-26 13:17:48 -04:00
Henry Whitney
a3af00aa54
Deu 3:3
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Errant conjunction.
2016-09-26 13:17:20 -04:00
Henry Whitney
f3021e0261
magic
2016-09-26 12:21:44 -04:00
Henry Whitney
82d3f23462
Deu 2:34
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Changed to match versions.
2016-09-26 12:21:01 -04:00
Henry Whitney
6b609f3564
magic
2016-09-26 09:36:18 -04:00
Henry Whitney
1ea5abd9a1
Deu 2:22
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English needs perfect here.
2016-09-26 09:34:48 -04:00
Tom Warren
2321bb36b4
Remove "lest"
2016-09-26 09:21:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney
a46b5d99fc
magic
2016-09-24 12:15:06 -04:00
Henry Whitney
c4a73b5f75
Deu 2:19
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Errant nor.
2016-09-24 12:14:17 -04:00
Henry Whitney
4ce43366e0
Deu 1:40
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errant comma
2016-09-24 09:09:08 -04:00
Henry Whitney
19feb3a9fb
magic
2016-09-24 08:31:16 -04:00
Henry Whitney
b7861468c1
magic
2016-09-24 08:30:33 -04:00
Henry Whitney
98396e3eb6
magic
2016-09-24 08:29:03 -04:00
Henry Whitney
d9259e08dd
Deu 1:41
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subject agreement
2016-09-24 08:28:39 -04:00
Henry Whitney
52bdf13de8
magic
2016-09-23 17:52:38 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5834eb4fdb
Deu 1:38
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De-UDB’d.
2016-09-23 17:51:50 -04:00
Henry Whitney
8790624e01
magic
2016-09-23 17:48:39 -04:00
Henry Whitney
dc383fbaf3
magic
2016-09-23 17:48:06 -04:00
Henry Whitney
f315a08764
magic
2016-09-23 17:47:05 -04:00
Henry Whitney
f46692b9cf
Deu 1:37
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Connotation is negative, not positive.
2016-09-23 17:46:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney
418a1f2506
magic
2016-09-23 17:25:10 -04:00
Henry Whitney
fb40ce58e9
magic
2016-09-23 17:24:46 -04:00
Henry Whitney
0aabaa5dd3
magic
2016-09-23 17:24:02 -04:00