119 Commits

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83d694e039 From Reader Reports 2016-09-01 10:11:33 -04:00
f780e41bae variation 2016-08-18 19:33:35 -04:00
04ea7166a7 Added "be" in "will be used" 2016-08-18 15:59:56 -05:00
b928b8d36b unclean 2016-08-18 14:27:26 -04:00
9fbf97f057 unclean 2016-08-18 14:26:49 -04:00
c087e23238 CLOSE QUOTATION 2016-08-18 12:15:38 -04:00
c847c8e86e so why? 2016-08-18 12:14:13 -04:00
lrsallee
dd22ca371b Jdg 7:5 ULB - "must" to "may"
No razor must come onto his head,
2016-08-18 11:00:29 -04:00
lrsallee
b347da52fc Jdg 8:8 ULB - fixed RQ
The original missed the negativity in the question.

We do not know why we should give bread to your army.
2016-08-18 10:52:28 -04:00
bbc72718dc Update 03.usfm 2016-08-17 15:07:19 -05:00
63ebf9b7bf Update 16.usfm 2016-08-16 16:26:02 -05:00
321e1cb8c7 Update 03.usfm 2016-08-16 14:46:14 -05:00
85af2e70fc "Attack" in vv. 1, 2, 4
The language of "going up" when referring to battle is everywhere else in the book rendered as "attack" or something similar. This brings these verses into conformity with the rest of the book. See also 20:18, which is parallel to 1:1-2.
2016-08-16 14:03:30 -05:00
fd28863a39 Rev
Stray lines

Moved "Almighty" to ULB so can match tW list and UDB rendering to UDB.
2016-08-11 17:41:10 -04:00
Hanker10
df294949a0 Judges 15:19 change voice from passive to active
Judges 15:19 change voice from passive to active in the second sentence. Either rendering is equally valid in the Hebrew.
2016-08-09 21:02:38 -04:00
Hanker10
a867d223e3 Judges 15:18 change sentence to question
Judges 15:18 change sentence to question. Both are valid renderings of the Hebrew but the question is preferred in most translations.
2016-08-09 20:57:55 -04:00
Hanker10
a60ee78460 Judges 15:17 change agent to active voice
Judges 15:17 change agent to active voice. This is an equally valid rendering of the Hebrew and clearer to the MTTs.
2016-08-09 20:52:13 -04:00
Hanker10
be3e85a43c Judges 15:13 correct word order
Judges 15:13 correct word order in phrase "to over them" to what you see.
2016-08-09 20:38:56 -04:00
Hanker10
5e94682de0 Judges 15:6 drop comma
Judges 15:6 drop comma that was not necessary and disturbed flow of discourse.
2016-08-09 20:28:22 -04:00
9c11d8e66c spaces 2016-08-08 14:58:39 -04:00
70c7a69bf5 Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/master'
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2016-08-08 14:57:50 -04:00
01654301c0 double spaces 2016-08-08 14:52:12 -04:00
Hanker10
331dda4687 Judges 20:8 cut extra word "to"
Judges 20:8 cut extra word "to"
2016-08-08 14:46:48 -04:00
Hanker10
dcfaec9c1e Judges 20:3 change punctuation
Judges 20:3 change punctuation
2016-08-08 14:42:16 -04:00
Hanker10
eac89efdbf Judges 21:23 change punctuation
Judges 21:23 change punctuation and separate into two sentences
2016-08-04 14:14:33 -04:00
Hanker10
54cf0ec873 Judges 21:18 change punctuation
Judges 21:18 change punctuation and combine two sentences
2016-08-04 14:13:29 -04:00
Hanker10
5a19322218 Judges 21:14 change wording
Judges 21:14 change wording: drop the introductory "For" and combine two sentences.
2016-08-04 14:10:54 -04:00
Hanker10
a06bd5fbf4 Judges 20:48 change wording
Judges 20:48 change wording from "And they burned down..." to what you see.
2016-08-04 14:07:35 -04:00
Hanker10
0f9a10c337 Judges 20_ 2016-08-04 14:05:04 -04:00
Hanker10
9ee64f454f Judges 20:38 delete "Now" as first word
Judges 20:38 delete "Now" as first word of the sentence
2016-08-04 14:02:30 -04:00
Hanker10
582046d9ba Judges 20:37 change punctuation
Judges 20:37 change punctuation
2016-08-04 13:59:20 -04:00
Hanker10
7c439428f3 Judges 20:31 change punctuation
Judges 20:31 change punctuation
2016-08-04 13:56:20 -04:00
Hanker10
f9d80bf175 Judges 20:15 & 16 change punctuation
Judges 20:15 & 16 change punctuation
2016-08-04 13:53:07 -04:00
Hanker10
edc76698dc Update 19.usfm 2016-08-04 13:50:37 -04:00
Hanker10
1a0152b078 Judges 18:30 change punctuation
Judges 18:30 change punctuation
2016-08-04 13:36:58 -04:00
Hanker10
a758d22a0b Judges 18:1 change "were" to "was"
Judges 18:1 change "were" to "was" to correct verb number
2016-08-04 13:32:01 -04:00
Hanker10
d9c7d9746c Judges 16:31 change punctuation
Judges 16:31 change punctuation
2016-08-04 13:28:52 -04:00
Hanker10
eae3e54131 Judges 16:23 delete "For"
Judges 16:23 delete "For" to start the second sentence
2016-08-04 13:24:28 -04:00
Hanker10
31c778764a Judges 16:17 delete "so"
Judges 16:17 delete "so" from "and she __ pressured him"
2016-08-04 13:21:22 -04:00
Hanker10
06fafa24d7 Judges 16:6 delete "so"
Judges 16:6 delete "so" after "And" to follow Hebrew more closely
2016-08-04 13:18:49 -04:00
Hanker10
e93dec56d5 Judges 15:16 change punctuation
Judges 15:16 change punctuation
2016-08-04 13:11:10 -04:00
Hanker10
77f06a1c7c Judges 15:10 change wording
Judges 15:10 change wording of clause connectors
2016-08-04 13:09:27 -04:00
Hanker10
aae0acab76 Judges 14:5b added "look,"
Judges 14:5b added "look," for the Hebrew original
2016-08-04 11:53:41 -04:00
Hanker10
70a7e6dd8b Judges 14:8b added "look,"
Judges 14:8b added "look,"  for the Hebrew wording
2016-08-04 11:52:05 -04:00
Hanker10
bfc8411484 Judges 14:3 cut "but" as first word
Judges 14:3 cut "but" as first word as first word of sentence
2016-08-04 11:33:38 -04:00
Hanker10
0f21613699 Judges 13:12 cut "But"
Judges 13:12 cut "But" from start of second sentence
2016-08-04 11:12:34 -04:00
Hanker10
1c251923c7 Judges 12:12 & 15 cut commas
Judges 12:12 & 15 cut commas
2016-08-04 11:08:01 -04:00
Hanker10
be0b7647a4 Update 11.usfm 2016-08-04 11:03:13 -04:00
Hanker10
9150a7c0f8 Update 05.usfm 2016-08-04 10:50:26 -04:00
Hanker10
53f9bdb0f9 Update 04.usfm 2016-08-04 10:48:56 -04:00