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-\v 28-29 All these things happened to King Nebuchadnezzar in twelve months. He was walking at the royal palace in Babylon.
-\v 30 The king was saying, "Is this not the great Babylon, which I have built for my royal residence, for the glory of my majesty?"
+\v 28-29 All these things happened to King Nebuchadnezzar. Twelve months later he was walking on the roof of the royal palace in Babylon,
+\v 30 and he said, "Is this not the great Babylon, which I have built for my royal residence, for the glory of my majesty?"
 
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-\v 31 While the king was still saying this, a voice came from heaven: "King Nebuchadnezzar, it has been decreed against you that this kingdom no longer belongs to you.
+\v 31 While the words were still on the lips of the king, a voice came from heaven: "King Nebuchadnezzar, it is announced to you that this kingdom has been taken away from you.
 \v 32 You will be driven away from people, and your home will be with the wild animals in the fields. You will be made to eat grass like an ox. Seven years will pass until you acknowledge that the Most High rules over the kingdoms of people and he gives them to anyone he wishes."
 
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