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 \v 8 Then he said, "By which way should we attack?" Jehoshaphat answered, "By way of the wilderness of Edom."
 
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-\v 9 So the kings of Israel, Judah, and Edom marched in a semicircle for seven days. There was no water found for their army, nor for their horses or other animals.
+\v 9 So the king of Israel went with the king of Judah and the king of Edom. They wandered around for seven days, and then there was no water for the army or for the animals that followed them.
 \v 10 So the king of Israel said, "What is this? Has Yahweh called three kings to give them into the hand of Moab?"
 
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