From cf76a82a085d3ac59962d8a57795d68015525a25 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 13:31:35 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 01/36] Update 19.usfm --- 23-ISA/19.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/23-ISA/19.usfm b/23-ISA/19.usfm index 3fff54fd..582cd111 100644 --- a/23-ISA/19.usfm +++ b/23-ISA/19.usfm @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ \v 20 It will be as a sign and a witness to Yahweh of hosts in the land of Egypt. When they cry to Yahweh because of oppressors, he will send them a savior and a defender, and he will deliver them. \s5 -\v 21 Yahweh will be known to Egypt, and the Egyptians will know Yahweh in that day. They will worship with sacrifices and offerings, and will make vows to Yahweh and fulfill them. +\v 21 Yahweh will become known to Egypt, and the Egyptians will acknowledge Yahweh on that day. They will worship with sacrifices and offerings, and will make vows to Yahweh and fulfill them. \v 22 Yahweh will afflict Egypt, afflicting and healing. They will return to Yahweh; he will hear their prayer and will heal them. \s5 From 3eb9ae8803a3ef1bc7b02884653f933580284b02 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 13:52:35 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 02/36] Update 02.usfm --- 49-GAL/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/02.usfm b/49-GAL/02.usfm index ec36b018..0c7aab9b 100644 --- a/49-GAL/02.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/02.usfm @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ \s5 \v 3 But not even Titus, who was with me and who was a Greek, was forced to be circumcised. -\v 4 The false brothers came in secretly to spy on the liberty we have in Christ Jesus. They desired bring us into slavery, +\v 4 The false brothers came in secretly to spy on the liberty we have in Christ Jesus. They desired to reduce us to slavery, \v 5 but we did not yield in submission to them for a moment, so that the truth of the gospel would remain with you. \s5 From 18ebef79a1eb37b10cbb5df3b001854c9394a58d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 17:07:47 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 03/36] Pro 23:14, 19 Bringing out emphasis. --- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index 2301279d..9d4ef886 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -55,9 +55,9 @@ \v 13 Do not withhold discipline from a child, \q for if you beat him with a rod, he will not die. \q -\v 14 If you beat him with the rod, -\q you will save his soul from Sheol. - +\v 14 It is you who must beat him with the rod +\q and save his soul from Sheol. + \s5 \q \v 15 My son, if your heart is wise, @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 19 Hear, my son, and be wise +\v 19 Hear—you!—my son, and be wise \q and direct your heart in the way. \q \v 20 Do not associate with drunkards, From 2e4976ed7ed12177cfa49ae24d83a1e8f894298b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 17:14:05 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 04/36] magic --- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index 9d4ef886..48fd60fe 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ \q \v 14 It is you who must beat him with the rod \q and save his soul from Sheol. - + \s5 \q \v 15 My son, if your heart is wise, From 5f76c61ad896840ba8c477b23b6cb9309a8d20be Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 17:44:59 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 05/36] Pro 23:24 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit de-UDB’d --- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index 48fd60fe..42fb643d 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -94,12 +94,12 @@ \s5 \q -\v 24 The father of the one who does right will greatly rejoice +\v 24 The father of the righteous will greatly rejoice \q and he that begets a wise child will be glad in him. \q \v 25 Let your father and your mother be glad \q and let her that bore you rejoice. - + \s5 \q \v 26 My son, give me your heart From deb3997bdc073006e31723fe544057f4ce7d7f96 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 17:46:10 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 06/36] comma needed --- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index 42fb643d..3334fbfb 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -94,12 +94,12 @@ \s5 \q -\v 24 The father of the righteous will greatly rejoice +\v 24 The father of the righteous will greatly rejoice, \q and he that begets a wise child will be glad in him. \q \v 25 Let your father and your mother be glad \q and let her that bore you rejoice. - + \s5 \q \v 26 My son, give me your heart From 886baacd63d3e7e4f46502c378470a604e2645fa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 17:46:57 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 07/36] magic --- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index 3334fbfb..f5f6233c 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ \q \v 25 Let your father and your mother be glad \q and let her that bore you rejoice. - + \s5 \q \v 26 My son, give me your heart From f1e82f55f249675641cfffbfc5bbd7e91e4496e9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 17:51:52 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 08/36] personalized relative pronouns --- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index f5f6233c..cab7173d 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -95,11 +95,11 @@ \s5 \q \v 24 The father of the righteous will greatly rejoice, -\q and he that begets a wise child will be glad in him. +\q and he who begets a wise child will be glad in him. \q \v 25 Let your father and your mother be glad -\q and let her that bore you rejoice. - +\q and let her who bore you rejoice. + \s5 \q \v 26 My son, give me your heart From 84f0cc6185ebfcc3f7900399c2880d5f21130dd0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 19:44:58 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 09/36] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index aca85b34..262a5136 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ \q I paid my vows, \q \v 15 so came I out to meet you, -\q to eagerly seek your face and I have found you. +\q to eagerly seek your face, and I have found you. \s5 \q From 007738195293b11ad2e28e8dcdb291548ad10f5b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2016 20:24:52 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 10/36] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index 262a5136..5cf4e092 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -63,11 +63,11 @@ \v 16 I have spread coverings on my bed, \q colored linens from Egypt. \q -\v 17 I have perfumed my bed +\v 17 I have sprinkled my bed \q with myrrh, aloes, and cinnamon. \q -\v 18 Come, let us take our fill of love till morning; -\q let us take great pleasure in different acts of love-making. +\v 18 Come, let us drink our fill of love until morning; +\q let us take great pleasure in acts of love. \s5 \q From f19369fd1b51bedac8904adaedf034cb26e9673a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Wed, 21 Dec 2016 08:50:25 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 11/36] pro 23:27 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit a באר is a well, not a pit --- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index cab7173d..01b0382e 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -106,11 +106,11 @@ \q and let your eyes observe my ways. \q \v 27 For a prostitute is a deep pit, -\q and another man's wife is a narrow pit. +\q and another man's wife is a narrow well. \q \v 28 She lies in wait like a robber \q and she increases the number of traitors among humanity. - + \s5 \q \v 29 Who has woe? Who has sorrow? Who has fights? From be057a57bb9333517763d26805b335953c92e666 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Wed, 21 Dec 2016 09:34:49 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 12/36] Pro 23:28 Concord with rest of book. --- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index 01b0382e..c21120d9 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -109,8 +109,8 @@ \q and another man's wife is a narrow well. \q \v 28 She lies in wait like a robber -\q and she increases the number of traitors among humanity. - +\q and she increases the number of the treacherous among humanity. + \s5 \q \v 29 Who has woe? Who has sorrow? Who has fights? From 47b13e37e22e6c80c47f223ed3f1a0e7cbb6c1db Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 21 Dec 2016 14:13:26 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 13/36] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index 5cf4e092..3ef4aa5f 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -71,14 +71,14 @@ \s5 \q -\v 19 My husband is not at home; -\q he is away on a long journey. +\v 19 For my husband is not at his house; +\q he has gone on a long journey. \q \v 20 He took a bag of money with him; \q he will return on the day of the full moon." \q -\v 21 With her seductive talk she persuaded him, -\q and with her smooth talk she compelled him. +\v 21 With much talk she turned him; +\q with her smooth lips she mislead him. \s5 \q From 348f7d4afb998326245916fe1d9e113bb9446235 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 21 Dec 2016 14:40:27 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 14/36] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index 3ef4aa5f..1e5f043e 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -82,12 +82,12 @@ \s5 \q -\v 22 He walked after her -\q like an ox going to the slaughter, -\q or like a deer caught in a trap +\v 22 He went after her suddenly +\q like an ox going to slaughter, +\q like a deer tightly caught, \q -\v 23 until an arrow pierces through its liver— -\q or like bird rushing into a snare, +\v 23 until an arrow pierces through its liver. +\q He was like a bird rushing into a snare, \q not knowing it would cost him his life. \s5 \q From a59c41712cfba4211880de31f17ed6537fd58534 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 21 Dec 2016 14:42:26 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 15/36] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index 1e5f043e..dfbdb318 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -87,8 +87,8 @@ \q like a deer tightly caught, \q \v 23 until an arrow pierces through its liver. -\q He was like a bird rushing into a snare, -\q not knowing it would cost him his life. +\q He was like a bird rushing into a snare. +\q He did not know that it would cost his life. \s5 \q \v 24 And now, my sons, listen to me; From 5b2a3c752dfd482d6a2a1e571ff69e02100cb3a7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 21 Dec 2016 15:57:27 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 16/36] Update 54.usfm --- 23-ISA/54.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/23-ISA/54.usfm b/23-ISA/54.usfm index d70e1d4d..186d8ce1 100644 --- a/23-ISA/54.usfm +++ b/23-ISA/54.usfm @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ your God. \q1 \v 17 No weapon that is formed against you will succeed; \q1 and you will condemn everyone who accuses you. -\q1 This is the heritage of the servants of Yahweh, and their vindication from me—this Yahweh's declaration." +\q1 This is the heritage of the servants of Yahweh, and their vindication from me—this is Yahweh's declaration." From 66674e868f72de333907812de17cc541182e2f06 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 21 Dec 2016 17:14:55 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 17/36] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index dfbdb318..f4b8c74e 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -92,15 +92,15 @@ \s5 \q \v 24 And now, my sons, listen to me; -\q pay attention to what I say. +\q pay attention to the words of my mouth. \q -\v 25 Do not let your heart turn aside to her ways; -\q do not go astray into her paths. +\v 25 May your heart not turn aside onto her paths; +\q do not be led astray onto her paths. \s5 \q -\v 26 She has brought down many victims; -\q they cannot be counted. +\v 26 She has caused many people to fall down pierced; +\q her killed people are very many. \q \v 27 Her house is on the road to Sheol; \q it goes down to the rooms of death. From 0bd16bf8e6d1d655954481ce3cf34a8cd98e73aa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2016 11:29:01 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 18/36] Pro 23:34 "Rigging" is not a count noun, and the original implies that the rigging is on the deck. Followed many versions. --- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index c21120d9..7a28cc65 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -130,11 +130,11 @@ \q \v 33 Your eyes will see strange things \q and your heart will utter perverse things. - + \s5 \q \v 34 You will be as one who sleeps on the high seas -\q or lies on the top of a rigging. +\q or lies on the top of a mast. \q \v 35 "They hit me!" you will say, "but I was not hurt. \q They beat me, but I did not feel it. From a265ef17d93f5ccef8e6bb555fb3e6ea46a5eb99 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2016 11:39:35 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 19/36] magic --- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index 7a28cc65..fb83dfd0 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ \q \v 33 Your eyes will see strange things \q and your heart will utter perverse things. - + \s5 \q \v 34 You will be as one who sleeps on the high seas From 4cf16cca9f6961bb986a5b44b5619bad22153722 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2016 11:43:45 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 20/36] punctuation --- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index fb83dfd0..5b03ccf9 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -130,13 +130,13 @@ \q \v 33 Your eyes will see strange things \q and your heart will utter perverse things. - + \s5 \q \v 34 You will be as one who sleeps on the high seas \q or lies on the top of a mast. \q -\v 35 "They hit me!" you will say, "but I was not hurt. +\v 35 "They hit me," you will say, "but I was not hurt. \q They beat me, but I did not feel it. \q When will I wake up? I will seek another drink." From 075357c4f4ad62a0021d945bfad0d8fa05857cd9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2016 11:44:27 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 21/36] magic --- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index 5b03ccf9..15e6b813 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ \q \v 33 Your eyes will see strange things \q and your heart will utter perverse things. - + \s5 \q \v 34 You will be as one who sleeps on the high seas From 0aeaafc5be3c0a2f722703077455c1e734d3b14b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2016 12:42:14 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 22/36] Pro 24:5-6 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit de-UDB’d --- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index edb5eb72..f0a81836 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -16,13 +16,13 @@ \q \v 4 By knowledge the rooms are filled \q with all precious and pleasant riches. - + \s5 \q -\v 5 A wise man proves to be strong -\q and a person who has knowledge is better than one who is strong; +\v 5 A warrior of wisdom is strong, +\q and a man of knowledge increases his strength; \q -\v 6 for by wise directions you can wage your war +\v 6 for by wise direction you can wage your war \q and with many advisors there is victory. \s5 From 03d134bc9edbb502c68d09426f0a1d38ced33031 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2016 12:43:43 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 23/36] magic --- 20-PRO/21.usfm | 6 +++--- 20-PRO/22.usfm | 2 +- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 6 +++--- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 2 +- 4 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/21.usfm b/20-PRO/21.usfm index b350cf61..c5674b6e 100644 --- a/20-PRO/21.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/21.usfm @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ \q \v 24 The proud and haughty person—"Mocker" is his name— \q acts with arrogant pride. - + \s5 \q \v 25 The desire of the lazy kills him, @@ -110,13 +110,13 @@ \q \v 28 A false witness will perish, \q but the one who listens will speak for all time. - + \s5 \q \v 29 A wicked man makes his face hard, \q but an upright person is certain about his ways. \f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa but an upright person thinks about his way \fqb . \f* - + \s5 \q \v 30 There is no wisdom, there is no understanding, and there is no advice diff --git a/20-PRO/22.usfm b/20-PRO/22.usfm index e9e9a289..28eb1c9c 100644 --- a/20-PRO/22.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/22.usfm @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ \q \v 16 The one who oppresses poor people to increase his wealth, \q or gives to rich people, will come to poverty. - + \s5 \q \v 17 Incline your ear and listen to the words of the wise diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index 15e6b813..d00a5c36 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ \q It will be gone, \q for it will surely take up wings like an eagle \q and fly off to the sky. - + \s5 \q \v 6 Do not eat the food of one with an evil eye— @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ \q \v 8 You will vomit up the little you have eaten \q and you will have wasted your compliments. - + \s5 \q \v 9 Do not speak in the hearing of a fool, @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ \q \v 11 for their Redeemer is strong \q and he will plead their case against you. - + \s5 \q \v 12 Apply your heart to instruction diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index f0a81836..21c93005 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ \q \v 4 By knowledge the rooms are filled \q with all precious and pleasant riches. - + \s5 \q \v 5 A warrior of wisdom is strong, From a1c34528a0f3c2800bcad5bd7b1e6038e135ab2a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2016 16:01:12 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 24/36] Pro 24:10 Eliminated abstract not found in Heb. --- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index 21c93005..5fa481b4 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -40,9 +40,9 @@ \s5 \q -\v 10 If you show your cowardice in the day of trouble, +\v 10 If you become weak with fear in the day of trouble, \q then your strength is small. - + \s5 \q \v 11 Rescue those who are being taken away to death From 10b5a1f5910e4d0b8bffcb14d09bb672db0bb862 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2016 16:06:26 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 25/36] punctuation and errant capitalization --- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index 5fa481b4..323321d0 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -48,11 +48,11 @@ \v 11 Rescue those who are being taken away to death \q and hold back those who are staggering to the slaughter. \q -\v 12 If you say, "There! We knew nothing about this." -\q Does not the One who weighs the heart understand what you are saying? -\q And the One who guards your life, does he not know it? +\v 12 If you say, "Behold, we knew nothing about this," +\q does not the one who weighs the heart understand what you are saying? +\q And the one who guards your life, does he not know it? \q And will God not give to each one what he deserves? - + \s5 \q \v 13 My son, eat honey because it is good, From 46ecf7a8d9412dab18ff0de35f893358523c0f6b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2016 09:31:02 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 26/36] Pro 24:13 article needed --- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index 323321d0..a59cd7b4 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ \q \v 10 If you become weak with fear in the day of trouble, \q then your strength is small. - + \s5 \q \v 11 Rescue those who are being taken away to death @@ -52,11 +52,11 @@ \q does not the one who weighs the heart understand what you are saying? \q And the one who guards your life, does he not know it? \q And will God not give to each one what he deserves? - + \s5 \q \v 13 My son, eat honey because it is good, -\q because the drippings of honeycomb are sweet to your taste. +\q because the drippings of the honeycomb are sweet to your taste. \q \v 14 Such is wisdom for your soul— \q if you find it, there will be a future From defccada0386958a960bab9530848df14dd57794 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2016 09:32:15 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 27/36] magic --- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index a59cd7b4..ea4d30b0 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -1,5 +1,4 @@ - \s5 \c 24 \q @@ -52,7 +51,7 @@ \q does not the one who weighs the heart understand what you are saying? \q And the one who guards your life, does he not know it? \q And will God not give to each one what he deserves? - + \s5 \q \v 13 My son, eat honey because it is good, From 3759b7aa8870787459f74e64936365ff4ff4f05c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2016 09:54:41 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 28/36] Pro 24:16 The contrast seems to be between the garden-variety righteous and the garden-variety wicked, not the people in positions of power implied by "overthrown." --- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 7 +++---- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index ea4d30b0..6479806d 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -67,10 +67,9 @@ \q who attack the house of those who do right. \q Do not destroy his home! \q -\v 16 For if a man who does right falls down seven times, -\q he will rise up again, -\q but the wicked are overthrown by calamity. - +\v 16 For the righteous falls down seven times and rises again, +\q but the wicked are brought down by calamity. + \s5 \q \v 17 Do not celebrate when your enemy falls From fc7ab1f569487d870c7633fd3a95214191547fc4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2016 09:55:45 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 29/36] magic --- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index 6479806d..3fc38702 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ \q does not the one who weighs the heart understand what you are saying? \q And the one who guards your life, does he not know it? \q And will God not give to each one what he deserves? - + \s5 \q \v 13 My son, eat honey because it is good, @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ \q \v 16 For the righteous falls down seven times and rises again, \q but the wicked are brought down by calamity. - + \s5 \q \v 17 Do not celebrate when your enemy falls From 34e94aa6ed98948a10ebf5c250c1ab64d90917a3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2016 09:59:43 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 30/36] Pro 24:15 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit de-UDB’d nominalized adjectives --- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index 3fc38702..418c2604 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -63,8 +63,8 @@ \s5 \q -\v 15 Do not lie in wait like wicked people -\q who attack the house of those who do right. +\v 15 Do not lie in wait like the wicked +\q who attack the house of the righteous. \q Do not destroy his home! \q \v 16 For the righteous falls down seven times and rises again, From 14a7feeee2e6f8798da3f9134b079370c5014fec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2016 10:01:21 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 31/36] magic --- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index 418c2604..1e75c875 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ \v 14 Such is wisdom for your soul— \q if you find it, there will be a future \q and your hope will not be cut off. - + \s5 \q \v 15 Do not lie in wait like the wicked From 7486000a5ae1bf3b9528bb25d86c7b32a7c45b2d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2016 15:19:31 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 32/36] Pro 24:19-20 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit de-UDB’d --- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index 1e75c875..a070dcf5 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -80,12 +80,12 @@ \s5 \q -\v 19 Do not worry because of those who do evil things +\v 19 Do not worry because of evildoers, \q and do not envy wicked people, \q \v 20 for the evil person has no future -\q and the lamp of the wicked will go out. - +\q and the lamp of wicked people will go out. + \s5 \q \v 21 Fear Yahweh, and fear the king, my son; From 81453ce296340974bc1dff6cf7f6ddce07d33f71 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2016 15:27:24 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 33/36] magic --- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index a070dcf5..73b24c96 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ \q \v 18 or Yahweh will see and disapprove \q and turn away his wrath from him. - + \s5 \q \v 19 Do not worry because of evildoers, From 0efdef28b046b4e1fa8a528f54583dcdb81b6395 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2016 16:45:53 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 34/36] Pro 6:10,11; 24:34 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit de-UDB’d for concordance --- 20-PRO/06.usfm | 8 ++++---- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/06.usfm b/20-PRO/06.usfm index c94568aa..a6272a92 100644 --- a/20-PRO/06.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/06.usfm @@ -39,12 +39,12 @@ \v 9 How long will you sleep, you lazy person? \q When will you rise from your sleep? \q -\v 10 "A little more sleep, a little more slumber, -\q a little more folding of the hands to rest"— +\v 10 "A little sleep, a little slumber, +\q a little folding of the hands to rest"— \q -\v 11 and your poverty will come to you like a robber +\v 11 and your poverty will come like a robber \q and your needs like an armed soldier. - + \s5 \q \v 12 A worthless person—a wicked man— diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index 73b24c96..46e8fc9f 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -141,8 +141,8 @@ \v 33 A little sleep, a little slumber, \q a little folding of the hands to rest— \q -\v 34 and poverty comes upon you like a robber -\q and your needs will come to you like an armed soldier. +\v 34 and poverty comes marching upon you, +\q and your needs like an armed soldier. From c153af2d677fb8aa336fb3e973426e1dbe4cf7e8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2016 16:50:20 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 35/36] magic --- 20-PRO/24.usfm | 5 +---- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/24.usfm b/20-PRO/24.usfm index 46e8fc9f..7de67a5d 100644 --- a/20-PRO/24.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/24.usfm @@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ \v 31 Thorns had grown up everywhere, \q the ground was covered with nettles, \q and its stone wall was broken down. - + \s5 \q \v 32 Then I saw and considered it; @@ -143,6 +143,3 @@ \q \v 34 and poverty comes marching upon you, \q and your needs like an armed soldier. - - - From 220845fc8b396e4a271925c49fbce2c3293220c6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Phil Hopper Date: Sat, 24 Dec 2016 12:03:16 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 36/36] Fix Ps 119:35 --- 19-PSA/119.usfm | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/119.usfm b/19-PSA/119.usfm index 728a87ad..39e6b14b 100644 --- a/19-PSA/119.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/119.usfm @@ -150,8 +150,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 35 -Guide me in the path of your commandments, +\v 35 Guide me in the path of your commandments, \q for I delight to walk in it. \q \v 36 Direct my heart toward your covenant decrees