Commit Graph

1510 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Tom Warren 505515d287 passive to active voice 2016-07-12 09:07:43 -04:00
Tom Warren 6d6ae7a4a5 like the ULB 2016-07-12 09:05:08 -04:00
Tom Warren 5b568d6b85 Added missing
who was sitting on the cloud
2016-07-12 08:56:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney 2e2e55f7f6 corrected correction 2016-07-11 16:45:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney 75771b7f2c removed passive 2016-07-11 16:45:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney f6f427fa00 3:21-22 clarification 2016-07-11 16:20:54 -04:00
pohlig 7b4f4901ab Update 14.usfm 2016-07-11 15:30:05 -04:00
pohlig ee3b7873f2 Update 14.usfm 2016-07-11 15:28:13 -04:00
Henry Whitney 62b8179b53 3:18-19 cleanup 2016-07-11 15:26:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney ccb4d3a6b9 zapped bad commas 2016-07-11 15:22:29 -04:00
Henry Whitney 7a4171025d 3:15 made complete sentence 2016-07-11 15:19:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney bd9f6e6b98 3:14-15 explicating logic 2016-07-11 15:17:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5988458b9e building materials 2016-07-11 14:30:55 -04:00
Tom Warren 9c110aa968 farmeRs 2016-07-11 14:23:23 -04:00
Tom Warren ad2d8d517b Christ's authority 2016-07-11 14:18:29 -04:00
Tom Warren e8e26089a1 assorted fixes 2016-07-11 13:46:14 -04:00
Tom Warren a687f49e3e pigeons throughout 2016-07-11 13:01:52 -04:00
Tom Warren 49740c2647 doves to pidgeons 2016-07-11 13:00:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney c2158424e7 the "building" is not a "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney 6097f7a528 concretized "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney bc950793f1 connectors 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney 370db91ffc smoothed out clauses 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Tom Warren de552993f4 Revision to who is doing what to whom 2016-07-11 12:21:31 -04:00
Tom Warren c526d3038d Revised who stayed in Jerusalem 2016-07-11 12:11:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney d4d6f599de more concrete vocabulary 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney 0e1c52d7a8 "of glory" modifies "lord" rather than telling what people would do 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Tom Warren 5623d1ba30 chaste to not having sexual relations 2016-07-11 11:40:32 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5078809e1c Attempted de-figurativization 2016-07-11 10:24:00 -04:00
Henry Whitney a496fe9cc9 2:3 Restructured to remove awkwardness 2016-07-11 09:56:33 -04:00
hharrissWA c422807b58 Update 03.usfm
v. 10
comma added between clauses
2016-07-10 15:21:43 -05:00
hharrissWA 6458af25ea Update 02.usfm
v. 15
A semicolon is not needed because of the presence of the conjunction “and.” 
Changed to a comma.
2016-07-10 15:19:46 -05:00
Hanker10 8e987aeccb Romans 16:25-27 restore idea of doxology
Romans 16:25-27 restore idea of doxology and follow original wording more closely
2016-07-09 15:01:02 -04:00
Hanker10 183b947655 Romans 16:20 add wording to show meaning
Romans 16:20 add wording to show meaning
2016-07-09 14:47:31 -04:00
Hanker10 8287726878 Romans 16:19 change wording
Romans 16:19 change wording to render original more closely
2016-07-09 14:44:14 -04:00
Hanker10 d06e3ba1b3 Romans 16:18 add wording to reflect original
Romans 16:18 add wording to reflect original better
2016-07-09 14:40:58 -04:00
Hanker10 cf1275aec9 Romans 15:18-19 change wording
Romans 15:18-19 change wording to reflect original
2016-07-09 14:28:14 -04:00
Hanker10 69004058c6 Romans 15:13 reword for the benediction idea
Romans 15:13 reword for the benediction idea
2016-07-09 14:16:41 -04:00
Hanker10 af71ef028e Romans 15:9 change wording for clarity
Romans 15:9 change wording for clarity
2016-07-09 14:13:24 -04:00
Hanker10 d75514a19f Romans 15:5 incorporate the benediction
Romans 15:5 incorporate the benediction concept.
2016-07-09 14:08:11 -04:00
Hanker10 2edf1c3677 Romans 14:20 cut comma
Romans 14:20 cut comma
2016-07-09 13:34:48 -04:00
Hanker10 eb605a6f9b Romans 14:17 change wording
Romans 14:17 change wording to clarify
2016-07-09 13:33:09 -04:00
Hanker10 6eadcb71ff Romans 14:12 change wording
Romans 14:12 change wording
2016-07-09 13:27:47 -04:00
Hanker10 e834d586c0 Romans 14:4 add wording
Romans 14:4 add wording to include the first question of the ULB rendering.
2016-07-09 13:21:45 -04:00
Hanker10 c5bf41cda1 Update 13.usfm 2016-07-09 13:16:31 -04:00
Hanker10 cdea816345 Romans 12:20 change wording
Romans 12:20 change wording to reflect the original meaning better of the metaphor of burning coals.
2016-07-09 13:09:15 -04:00
Hanker10 6516b25867 Romans 12:15 change wording
Romans 12:15 change wording to reflect original more closely.
2016-07-09 13:03:24 -04:00
Hanker10 19767eb826 Romans 12:13 change wording
Romans 12:13 change wording to reflect original more closely
2016-07-09 12:59:44 -04:00
Hanker10 632f2492dd Romans 12:6 change confusing wording
Romans 12:6 change confusing wording
2016-07-09 12:53:30 -04:00
Hanker10 f143130d48 Romans 12:2 change wording
Romans 12:2 change wording to avoid confusion of agency: "and always make it new" implies that the reader will do that but God is the agent to change and to make new the way of thinking.
2016-07-09 12:49:19 -04:00
Hanker10 b8b23e4a60 Romans 11:26 change wording
Romans 11:26 change wording from "will save all the people of Israel" to what you see. Israel is a collective term here not meaning every person.
2016-07-09 12:12:24 -04:00