Commit Graph

1430 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Hanker10 7be4104d54 1 Cor 4:3 change wording
1 Cor 4:3 change wording. Paul does not say he is not able to judge himself. He does not bother judging himself.
2016-07-12 17:12:05 -04:00
Hanker10 f160bd67ce 1 Cor 3:13 change wording
1 Cor 3:13 change wording, "how hard we worked for him" to what you see.
2016-07-12 16:54:07 -04:00
Hanker10 4b3ee1d0dd 1 Cor 3:10 change wording
1 Cor 3:10 change wording to correct idea about Paul's giftedness.
2016-07-12 16:50:44 -04:00
Henry Whitney 828a4fd1f2 typo 2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
Henry Whitney ab1a8ca559 typo 2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
Hanker10 b29e30e7dd 1 Cor 3:4 change wording
1 Cor 3:4 change wording: "tearing the church into pieces" is an assumption here. This is probably true, but Paul is working up to this evaluation of the Corinthians. It is too early to let that cat out of the bag here.
2016-07-12 15:57:30 -04:00
Hanker10 c1ceab7596 1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
2016-07-12 15:53:39 -04:00
Hanker10 eccbb0a764 1 Cor 2:15 change one word
1 Cor 2:15 change one word: "judgment" to "evaluate" since this will avoid the connotation (at least for English speakers) of patronizing dominance over others.
2016-07-12 15:50:30 -04:00
Hanker10 45b66a3ef9 1 Cor 2:3 change wording
1 Cor 2:3 change wording since there is no indication the weakness was physical. There is also no indication that Paul's trembling was because of enemies. Many say it was because of the awesome  responsibility he felt weighing on him and/or because he had just come from Athens where his presentation bombed.
2016-07-12 15:12:16 -04:00
Henry Whitney 54279cf480 κοπιαω has element of difficulty absent in UDB 2016-07-12 14:17:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney 3f2d3b6613 resolved ambiguity of "look" 2016-07-12 14:16:37 -04:00
Hanker10 6c66e17fcb 1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording
1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording. God is not foolish or weak but appears so to the worldly.
2016-07-12 13:57:32 -04:00
Hanker10 aa98f27228 1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
2016-07-12 13:51:33 -04:00
Hanker10 b24ab0ccef 1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
2016-07-12 13:49:51 -04:00
Hanker10 8793409dce 1 Cor 1:10 change wording
1 Cor 1:10 change wording. "this" to "your" since there is no prior reference to what the argument is.
2016-07-12 13:36:54 -04:00
Hanker10 36ee701aa5 1 Cor 1:9 change wording
1 Cor 1:9 change wording to avoid the connotation that God's keeping of the promise is only in the future. The original is a statement of fact.
2016-07-12 13:32:29 -04:00
Hanker10 c781d3c30a 1 Cor 1:7 change wording
1 Cor 1:7 change wording to avoid the connotation that
2016-07-12 13:28:07 -04:00
Hanker10 c488916e01 1 Cor 1:6 change wording
1 Cor 1:6 change wording to avoid the idea that the confirmation was done by the Corinthians
2016-07-12 13:23:01 -04:00
Hanker10 f29116fbe7 1 Cor 1:5 change wording
1 Cor 1:5 change wording at the end of the verse. "to speak his truth and to know God" is too restrictive. The speech and the knowledge are general, not just theological.
2016-07-12 10:49:12 -04:00
Tom Warren 43dde8ed89 changes 2016-07-12 10:24:10 -04:00
Tom Warren 505515d287 passive to active voice 2016-07-12 09:07:43 -04:00
Tom Warren 6d6ae7a4a5 like the ULB 2016-07-12 09:05:08 -04:00
Tom Warren 5b568d6b85 Added missing
who was sitting on the cloud
2016-07-12 08:56:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney 2e2e55f7f6 corrected correction 2016-07-11 16:45:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney 75771b7f2c removed passive 2016-07-11 16:45:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney f6f427fa00 3:21-22 clarification 2016-07-11 16:20:54 -04:00
pohlig 7b4f4901ab Update 14.usfm 2016-07-11 15:30:05 -04:00
pohlig ee3b7873f2 Update 14.usfm 2016-07-11 15:28:13 -04:00
Henry Whitney 62b8179b53 3:18-19 cleanup 2016-07-11 15:26:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney ccb4d3a6b9 zapped bad commas 2016-07-11 15:22:29 -04:00
Henry Whitney 7a4171025d 3:15 made complete sentence 2016-07-11 15:19:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney bd9f6e6b98 3:14-15 explicating logic 2016-07-11 15:17:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5988458b9e building materials 2016-07-11 14:30:55 -04:00
Tom Warren 9c110aa968 farmeRs 2016-07-11 14:23:23 -04:00
Tom Warren ad2d8d517b Christ's authority 2016-07-11 14:18:29 -04:00
Tom Warren e8e26089a1 assorted fixes 2016-07-11 13:46:14 -04:00
Tom Warren a687f49e3e pigeons throughout 2016-07-11 13:01:52 -04:00
Tom Warren 49740c2647 doves to pidgeons 2016-07-11 13:00:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney c2158424e7 the "building" is not a "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney 6097f7a528 concretized "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney bc950793f1 connectors 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney 370db91ffc smoothed out clauses 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Tom Warren de552993f4 Revision to who is doing what to whom 2016-07-11 12:21:31 -04:00
Tom Warren c526d3038d Revised who stayed in Jerusalem 2016-07-11 12:11:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney d4d6f599de more concrete vocabulary 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney 0e1c52d7a8 "of glory" modifies "lord" rather than telling what people would do 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Tom Warren 5623d1ba30 chaste to not having sexual relations 2016-07-11 11:40:32 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5078809e1c Attempted de-figurativization 2016-07-11 10:24:00 -04:00
Henry Whitney a496fe9cc9 2:3 Restructured to remove awkwardness 2016-07-11 09:56:33 -04:00
hharrissWA c422807b58 Update 03.usfm
v. 10
comma added between clauses
2016-07-10 15:21:43 -05:00