Henry Whitney
be55ca7555
comma needed
2016-06-28 13:41:17 -04:00
Henry Whitney
4309ecefc4
restrictive to nonrestrictive
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Paul’s readers knew which good news he meant, so the restrictive "that"
is inappropriate (and wrong following a comma anyway).
2016-06-28 13:36:18 -04:00
3c16189f5a
Matthew 19:28 change wording
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Matthew 19:28 change wording "my magnificent throne" to what you see. The idea is that the throne is not glorious, but Jesus' status and exaltation is glorious.
2016-06-28 11:52:53 -04:00
033c16402b
Matthew 19:15 cut "and asked God"
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Matthew 19:15 cut "and asked God" - not in the text at all and is an assumption that this included a prayer. Jesus had the authority to bless.
2016-06-28 11:23:15 -04:00
61e68f0f84
Matthew 19:14 change wording
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Matthew 19:14 change wording of "When Jesus saw us scolding them, he said to us" to what you see.
2016-06-28 11:21:42 -04:00
0b4605f8ce
Matthew 18:24 change wording
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Matthew 18:24 change wording "who were brought " to what you see.
2016-06-28 11:10:13 -04:00
d716539553
Matthew 18:23 cut & rephrase
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Matthew 18:23 cut & rephrase the opening sentence, "In order to illustrate why you should do this, I will tell you a parable." since this far too dynamic and would tend to confuse the MTTs rather than help.
Also, the next sentence, "That king told some of his servants that" changed to cut the wording that is too far from the original.
2016-06-28 11:06:05 -04:00
Henry Whitney
a22624ffb1
fixed misc
2016-06-28 11:00:01 -04:00
Henry Whitney
b4f9a2fc91
fixed punctuation
2016-06-28 10:55:10 -04:00
Tom Warren
b40fb2f8f3
Cutting down
2016-06-28 10:52:29 -04:00
Tom Warren
034c8e5661
Rework of Jesus teaching about
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Messiah and David's son
2016-06-28 10:25:12 -04:00
Tom Warren
86a6369c6a
Reworked David's prediction of Messiah
2016-06-28 10:16:15 -04:00
93d63863ca
Matthew 18:22 cut extra clause
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Matthew 18:22 cut extra clause "--there is no end to the number of times" since this is not at all in the original, is interpretive and is explained in the notes.
2016-06-28 10:04:14 -04:00
2f9950c819
Matthew 18:19 cut extra word
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Matthew 18:19 cut extra two words "God" after "whatever you ask ... " since these are assumed and not necessary here. The next phrase, "my Father" says this adequately.
2016-06-28 10:00:54 -04:00
ab7fb63b79
Matthew 18:3 change wording
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Matthew 18:3 change wording. Eliminate "the way you think" after "change" because this is not in the original and limits the concept from "turn" to a mental process. What Jesus means is a lot more than that and is stated implicitly and should not be limited.
2016-06-28 08:12:14 -04:00
Tom Warren
b567b6cb5f
Simplify
2016-06-28 06:47:02 -04:00
Tom Warren
0feca203e8
Sea of Reeds
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continuity
2016-06-28 04:12:11 -04:00
Tom Warren
6c1d20ab65
Removed remnant of a conflict
2016-06-28 00:20:10 -04:00
Tom Warren
c1e94871bd
Rev 2:7 revision for UDB
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From Perry Oakes
2016-06-28 00:15:43 -04:00
Tom Warren
1318383041
eleven to Eleven
2016-06-28 00:15:43 -04:00
1d43200d38
Update 02.usfm
2016-06-27 16:03:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney
1972cc6b91
zapped stray comma
2016-06-27 14:27:18 -04:00
Henry Whitney
c3122cd722
added v. 20, which was missing
2016-06-27 10:51:24 -04:00
Tom Warren
7ea87fce88
Passover Celebration
2016-06-27 10:35:06 -04:00
Henry Whitney
326474a9bb
corrected correction
2016-06-27 10:33:08 -04:00
Henry Whitney
e0e517709c
children to sons
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one component of the passage is inheritance, which only passed through
sons
2016-06-27 10:17:45 -04:00
Henry Whitney
1c915305ea
corrected typo in correction
2016-06-27 10:01:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney
45fdf5bfc7
As per email from Tom W
2016-06-27 09:41:12 -04:00
6e5c0488b7
Luk 22:3 UDB - added missing space between words
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Iscariot,who
2016-06-27 09:05:21 -04:00
Tom Warren
62740ef38b
Comma
2016-06-27 06:31:36 -04:00
Tom Warren
564cd91197
John 17
2016-06-27 06:25:36 -04:00
Tom Warren
48bd876054
John 17
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Rewrite
2016-06-27 06:25:13 -04:00
Tom Warren
eab868e1e3
DENIAL
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check
2016-06-27 01:26:47 -04:00
Tom Warren
1a79dc7720
Jhn 15:3
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I remain joined to you (NOT I remained joined to my Father)
2016-06-27 00:02:21 -04:00
Tom Warren
65a4813848
Jhn 15:3
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bear fruit ...
2016-06-26 23:51:55 -04:00
Tom Warren
195fb1a3c9
Subject changed
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Not our ancestors, but "we" and "us"
2016-06-26 23:51:55 -04:00
dcec6b4760
Matthew 18:6 change pronouns
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Matthew 18:6 change pronouns from "you" to "a person" to duplicate more closely the "whoever" of the original.
2016-06-26 21:51:17 -04:00
Tom Warren
04166d842b
Mat 5:19 Tweaks
2016-06-26 07:27:04 -04:00
Tom Warren
20ff5f9c81
Mat 5:20
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following the Greek text and keeping passive voices at bay
2016-06-26 07:23:11 -04:00
Tom Warren
e3b3f7bfa6
Unclear made to be clear
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Mat 5:18
2016-06-26 07:09:50 -04:00
Tom Warren
98591e0c3c
Torn out
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changed from gouged (too difficult)
2016-06-26 04:40:00 -04:00
Tom Warren
1348eed7d5
Redo vs 19
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clear
2016-06-26 00:23:37 -04:00
Tom Warren
ebb9a73271
Passive voice to active
2016-06-26 00:09:44 -04:00
c64a374fcb
Matthew 16:26 cut "to God"
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Matthew 16:26 cut "to God" because this is interpretation. The statement is meant to include anything a person will give to anyone for his life.
2016-06-25 16:12:10 -04:00
481db4780b
Matthew 16:18 change wording
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Matthew 16:18 change wording to reflect intention of original.
2016-06-25 16:07:55 -04:00
bb76a54d02
Matthew 15:37-38 change versification
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Matthew 15:37-38 change versification. The ideas can be separated even if they are not clearly sequential chronologically.
2016-06-25 15:54:58 -04:00
1da5343447
Matthew 15:24 cut extra sentence
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Matthew 15:24 cut extra sentence that is not at all in the text, but serves as an explanatory interpretation, "They do not know how to get to heaven."
2016-06-25 15:48:27 -04:00
e27dec9ad1
Matthew 15:17 cut extra sentence
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Matthew 15:17 cut extra sentence, "What people eat does not cause God to reject them." This certainly is true, but this is not in the text at all and is explained in the next chunk.
2016-06-25 15:44:18 -04:00
9257ed8a24
Matthew 15:11 change wording
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Matthew 15:11 change word, "causes God to not accept him." to what you see.
2016-06-25 15:38:44 -04:00
f11a594c45
Matthew 15:9 change wording
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Matthew 15:9 change wording to better render the meaning here.
2016-06-25 15:32:08 -04:00
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