From fea619ed1ee1173cafea041d85c3493acbd2ffdb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 31 May 2016 09:09:40 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 01/10] Reworked Act 2:16-18 for clarity --- 45-ACT/02.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/45-ACT/02.usfm b/45-ACT/02.usfm index f6bbfed4..ebc63f06 100644 --- a/45-ACT/02.usfm +++ b/45-ACT/02.usfm @@ -38,11 +38,11 @@ \s5 \v 16 Instead, what has happened to us is the miraculous thing that the prophet Joel wrote about long ago. He wrote: \p God says, -\v 17 'During the last days everywhere. I will give my Holy Spirit to all and as a result, your sons and daughters will tell people messages from me, the young men among you will see visions from me, and the old men among you will have dreams that I will give them. +\v 17 'During the last days, I will give my Holy Spirit to all people, and your sons and daughters will tell people my messages, and I will give visions to the young men and I will give the old men dreams. \s5 -\v 18 During those days I will give my Holy Spirit to my servants, so they can tell people messages from me. -\v 19 I will cause amazing things to happen in the sky, and I will do miracles on the earth to show that important things will happen. Here on the earth there will be blood, fire, and smoke everywhere. +\v 18 During those days I will give my Holy Spirit to my servants, so they can tell people my messages. +\v 19 I will cause amazing things to happen in the sky, and I will do miracles on the earth to show that important and amazing things will happen. Here on the earth there will be blood, fire, and smoke everywhere. \s5 \v 20 In the sky the sun will appear dark to people and the moon will appear red to them. Those things will happen before I, the Lord God, will come to judge everyone. From 3d2159bfe4d90921090a6fbff73170ec6b41c333 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 31 May 2016 09:11:49 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 02/10] Tweek --- 45-ACT/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/45-ACT/02.usfm b/45-ACT/02.usfm index ebc63f06..86351618 100644 --- a/45-ACT/02.usfm +++ b/45-ACT/02.usfm @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ \s5 \v 16 Instead, what has happened to us is the miraculous thing that the prophet Joel wrote about long ago. He wrote: \p God says, -\v 17 'During the last days, I will give my Holy Spirit to all people, and your sons and daughters will tell people my messages, and I will give visions to the young men and I will give the old men dreams. +\v 17 'During the last days, I will give my Holy Spirit to all people, and your sons and daughters will tell people my messages, and I will give visions to the young men and I will dreams to the old men. \s5 \v 18 During those days I will give my Holy Spirit to my servants, so they can tell people my messages. From 6e88374367d7064146bf550b44fae5be38cdec7f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 31 May 2016 09:12:57 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 03/10] Fussing with this section --- 45-ACT/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/45-ACT/02.usfm b/45-ACT/02.usfm index 86351618..3a49e4e1 100644 --- a/45-ACT/02.usfm +++ b/45-ACT/02.usfm @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ \s5 \v 16 Instead, what has happened to us is the miraculous thing that the prophet Joel wrote about long ago. He wrote: \p God says, -\v 17 'During the last days, I will give my Holy Spirit to all people, and your sons and daughters will tell people my messages, and I will give visions to the young men and I will dreams to the old men. +\v 17 'During the last days, I will give my Holy Spirit to all people, and your sons and daughters will tell people my messages, and I will give visions to the young men and I will give dreams to the old men. \s5 \v 18 During those days I will give my Holy Spirit to my servants, so they can tell people my messages. From 1cb9ae45fc6b116745643b52d17243efd65fd657 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 31 May 2016 10:39:28 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 04/10] Act 2 abandoned --- 45-ACT/02.usfm | 6 +----- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/45-ACT/02.usfm b/45-ACT/02.usfm index 3a49e4e1..efa58261 100644 --- a/45-ACT/02.usfm +++ b/45-ACT/02.usfm @@ -11,8 +11,6 @@ \v 4 Then all of the believers were filled with the Holy Spirit and began to speak different languages, in the way that the Spirit made each one able to. \s5 - - \p \v 5 At that time many Jews were staying in Jerusalem to celebrate the Pentecost festival. They were Jewish people who always worshiped God. They had come from many different countries. \v 6 When they heard the loud noise like a wind, a crowd of them came together at the place where the believers were. The crowd was amazed because each of them was hearing one of the believers speaking in his own language. @@ -74,11 +72,9 @@ \p \v 29 Peter continued, "My fellow Jews, I am sure that our forefather, King David, died, and that the people buried him. And the place where they buried his body is still here today. \v 30 King David was a prophet and he knew that God promised to him that one of his descendants would become king. -\v 31 A long time ago, David knew what God would do, so said that God would cause Jesus the Messiah to live again after he died. He said that God would not make Jesus the Messiah remain in the place of the dead, nor let his body waste away." +\v 31 A long time ago, David knew what God would do. He said that God would cause Jesus the Messiah to live again after he died. God would not allow him to remain in a grave, and he would not let his body waste away." \s5 - - \p \v 32 "After this man Jesus had died, God caused him to become alive again. All of us, his followers, know this because we saw him. \v 33 God has greatly honored Jesus by placing him at his right hand to rule with him, his Father. He has given us the Holy Spirit, and that is what you are seeing and hearing here today. From 886a5b9b67ecf8d551cad77999c6fce8dea69d75 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 31 May 2016 11:04:58 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 05/10] Update 07.usfm --- 46-ROM/07.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/46-ROM/07.usfm b/46-ROM/07.usfm index 23bf257b..52760f2e 100644 --- a/46-ROM/07.usfm +++ b/46-ROM/07.usfm @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ \s5 \v 11 When I wanted to sin, I thought that I would live forever if I obeyed the law enough. But I was mistaken: I thought I could keep sinning at the same time. In fact, God was going to separate me from him forever because I did not truly obey the law. -\v 12 So we know that the law that God gave to Moses is perfectly good. Everything that God commands us to do is also holy, just, and good. +\v 12 So we know that the law that God gave to Moses is perfectly good. Everything that God commands us to do is also without fault, just, and good. From 63fb133b7e1815bc04cb1a8d89d7df8ac23e8ce7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 31 May 2016 11:12:42 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 06/10] Condition removed If you.... removed now Remain .... --- 44-JHN/15.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/44-JHN/15.usfm b/44-JHN/15.usfm index 8a86cf77..5e898060 100644 --- a/44-JHN/15.usfm +++ b/44-JHN/15.usfm @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ \s5 \v 3 You are already pure because of the message I spoke to you. -\v 4 If you remain joined to me, and I will remain joined to you. As the branch cannot bear any fruit on its own, neither can you unless you stay joined to me and depend upon me for everything. +\v 4 Remain joined to me, and I will remain joined to you. As the branch cannot bear any fruit on its own, neither can you unless you stay joined to me and depend upon me for everything. \s5 \p From f62567055b1b64695dff2a9ad48e70ad120d22b4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 31 May 2016 13:35:36 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 07/10] Conversation confession --- 63-1JN/04.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/63-1JN/04.usfm b/63-1JN/04.usfm index 6c7cb3c7..1a845752 100644 --- a/63-1JN/04.usfm +++ b/63-1JN/04.usfm @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ \v 14 We apostles have seen God's Son, and we solemnly tell others that the Father sent him to save the people in the world from suffering eternally for their sins. \s5 -\v 15 So God remains joined with those who say the truth about Jesus, that he is the Son of God, and they remain joined with God. +\v 15 So God remains joined with those who say the truth about Jesus. They say, "He is the Son of God." And so they remain joined with God. \v 16 We have experienced how God loves us and we believe that he loves us. As a result, we love others. Because God's nature is to love people, those who continue to love others are joined with God, and God is joined with them. \s5 From 7f5196ed24f3fcbc06ae46c73423c45b16b25322 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 31 May 2016 13:58:48 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 08/10] reordered --- 63-1JN/05.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/63-1JN/05.usfm b/63-1JN/05.usfm index 1bf4a764..a9c4ee57 100644 --- a/63-1JN/05.usfm +++ b/63-1JN/05.usfm @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 16 Those who see one of their fellow believers sinning in a way that does not result in eternal separation from God should ask God to help that fellow believer; and as a result God will help that fellow believer and enable him or her to live eternally. But some people sin in a manner that causes them to be separated from God eternally. I am not saying that you should ask God to help people who sin like that. -\v 17 Everyone who does what is wrong is sinning, but a person is not eternally separated from God because of every time that he sins. +\v 17 Everything that is wrong is a sin against God, but not every bad thing we do can separate us from God forever. \s5 \v 18 We know that if a person is a child of God, he does not habitually sin. God protects him so that Satan, the evil one, does not harm him. From df77a082bfa1caad3392af21fb239d6f57f55b08 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 31 May 2016 14:45:52 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 09/10] Cover up sin --- 43-LUK/12.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/43-LUK/12.usfm b/43-LUK/12.usfm index 7056d9fb..97b0f62c 100644 --- a/43-LUK/12.usfm +++ b/43-LUK/12.usfm @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ \v 1 Meanwhile, many thousands of people gathered around Jesus. There were so many that they were stepping on each other. But first he said to his disciples, "Be careful that you do not become like the Pharisees who act religious in public, but do evil things in secret. Just like yeast causes a lump of dough to rise, their evil behavior causes others to be hypocrites like they are. \s5 -\v 2 People will not be able to continue covering up their sins the way they can now. Someday God will let everyone know the things that people hide now. +\v 2 People cannot cover up their sins. Someday God will let everyone know the things that people are trying to hide. \v 3 Everything you say in the dark, someday people will hear in the daylight. Whatever you whisper in your room will someday be as public as if it were shouted from the rooftops." \s5 From 2766923760f4c5d01db27cf3aa15454360fcbd7d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 31 May 2016 15:03:30 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 10/10] 'n changed to "In --- 44-JHN/16.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/44-JHN/16.usfm b/44-JHN/16.usfm index 62df3e3c..084a35b3 100644 --- a/44-JHN/16.usfm +++ b/44-JHN/16.usfm @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ \v 16 In a little while, you will not see me. Then after a little while, you will see me again." \s5 -\v 17 So some of his disciples said to one another, "What does Jesus mean when he says to us, 'n a little while, you will not see me,' and 'after a little while, you will see me again' and what does he mean by 'because I am going back to my Father'?" +\v 17 So some of his disciples said to one another, "What does Jesus mean when he says to us, 'In a little while, you will not see me,' and 'after a little while, you will see me again' and what does he mean by 'because I am going back to my Father'?" \v 18 They kept asking, "What does he mean by saying, 'after a little while'? We do not understand what he is saying." \s5