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-# for him who traveled away, nor for him who traveled to here
+# for him who went out or for him who came in
 
 This phrase is an idiom that refers to a person who travels anywhere away from home. Alternate translation: "for the person who traveled anywhere" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]])
 
-# great troubles were on all the inhabitants of the lands
+# for there were great disturbances on all the inhabitants of the lands
 
-The people experiencing great troubles is spoken of as if those troubles were objects that were on the people. Alternate translation: "all the inhabitants of the lands experienced great troubles" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+The people experiencing great disturbances is spoken of as if those disturbances were objects that were on the people. Alternate translation: "for all the inhabitants of the lands experienced great disturbances" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+
+# great disturbances
+"great troubles"