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-# made sure that they receive all that was collected
+# that they receive all that was collected
 
-Paul speaks of the money he is taking to Jerusalem as if it were a fruit that was collected for them. Alternate translation: "and have safely delivered this offering to them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+Here "they" refers to the Christians in Jerusalem. The phrase "was collected" can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "that the Christians in Jerusalem receive all the gifts that other Christians gave to them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])