* **receive the crown of life** - "crown of life" is a figurative expression for God giving the person eternal life as his reward. AT: "receive his reward of eternal live".
* **has been promised to those who love God** - "God has promised the crown of life to those who love him" (See: [[en:ta:vol2:translate:figs_activepassive]])
* **when he is tempted** - "when he has the desire to do something evil"
* **This temptation is from God** - "God is trying to make me do something evil"
* **God is not tempted by evil** - "God does not desire to do evil"
* **God ... does not tempt anyone** - "God does not try to make a person do something evil"