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-# As water disappears from a lake ... and do not rise again
+# Connecting Statement:
 
-The fact that death cannot be reversed is compared to water that dried up and cannot return. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])
+Job finishes comparing growing old and dying with water drying up (verse 11).
 
 # so people lie down
 
@@ -9,8 +9,3 @@ Lying down represents dying. Alternate translation: "so people die" (See: [[rc:/
 # do not rise again
 
 Rising again represents living again. Alternate translation: "do not live again" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
-
-# they will not awake nor be roused out of their sleep
-
-These two phrases mean the same thing and are used together to emphasize that death is final. Sleeping represents dying and awaking represents living again. Alternate translation: "people who die will not live again and be raised from death" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
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