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 # Connecting Statement:
 
-The list of Solomon's officials continues, and the list of the areas of which they were in charge begins.
+The list of Solomon's officers continues.
 
-# Ben-Abinadab ... Ben-Geber ... Jair ... Manasseh ... Ahinadab ... Iddo
+# Ben-Abinadab
 
-men's names (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+This is the name of a man. Note that "Ben" before a name means "son of" so "Ben-Abinadab" means "the son of Abinadab." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
-# in all Naphoth Dor ... in Taanach ... in Ramoth Gilead ... in Mahanaim
+# in all Naphoth Dor
 
-"who was the officer in charge of all Naphoth Dor ... who was the officer in charge of Taanach ... who was the officer in charge of Ramoth Gilead ... who was the officer in charge of Mahanaim"
+"who was the officer in charge of all Naphoth Dor"
+
+# Naphoth Dor
+This is the name of a place. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
 # Taphath
 
-woman's name (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
-
-# Dor ... Beth Shan ... Zarethan ... Jezreel ... Beth Shan to Abel Meholah ... Jokmeam ... Ramoth Gilead ... Argob ... Bashan ... Mahanaim
-
-place names (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
-
+This is a woman's name. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])