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1471 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Hanker10 58cd312c16 1 Cor 9:3 change wording
1 Cor 9:3 change wording for clarity
2016-07-13 16:23:00 -04:00
Hanker10 410f926034 1 Cor 8:2 improve wording
1 Cor 8:2 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:38:11 -04:00
Hanker10 d86ec39351 1 Cor 7:36 improve wording
1 Cor 7:36 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:32:22 -04:00
Hanker10 d93ff11a0b 1 Cor 7:35 improve wording
1 Cor 7:35 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:31:11 -04:00
Hanker10 412b480445 1 Cor 7:34 change wording
1 Cor 7:34 change wording to keep the ideas closer to the original
2016-07-13 13:28:47 -04:00
Hanker10 053c7eb3a8 1 Cor 7:34 change "girls" to "young ladies"
1 Cor 7:34 change "girls" to "young ladies"
2016-07-13 13:24:49 -04:00
Hanker10 44a4ca5dd5 1 Cor 7:33 change "day to day" to "ordinary"
1 Cor 7:33 change "day to day" to "ordinary"
2016-07-13 13:22:07 -04:00
Hanker10 7764530cfb 1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear"
1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear" to what you see because it is an idiom that could be unfamiliar to many. Also, dropped "or in their hearts" after "joy on their faces" because this is added. Also, "they wanted" after "to buy something." These are all additions that qualify the ideas too far.
2016-07-13 13:18:23 -04:00
Hanker10 9ce09929d4 1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain"
1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain" since not all slaves had to purchase their freedom and this idea is not in the original
2016-07-13 12:55:30 -04:00
Hanker10 107391498f 1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence
1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence, "These are the commands of the Lord." since this is not in the original and is repeated from verse 10 unnecessarily.
2016-07-13 12:43:08 -04:00
Hanker10 df0db16a31 1 Cor 7:6 change wording
1 Cor 7:6 change wording to include the concept of concession (as in ULB)
2016-07-13 12:39:21 -04:00
Tom Warren 9c498b3e5a punctuation 2016-07-13 12:01:43 -04:00
Tom Warren 958aaf2891 twelve 2016-07-13 11:38:06 -04:00
Tom Warren 04f1115835 Twelve to LC twelve 2016-07-13 11:16:28 -04:00
Tom Warren e31afee8df Twelve 2016-07-13 11:01:12 -04:00
pohlig e574daad45 Update 01.usfm 2016-07-13 10:58:22 -04:00
Tom Warren f1f53ba0f8 Clarity 2016-07-13 10:38:28 -04:00
Hanker10 228ebbefa9 1 Cor 6:13 change wording
1 Cor 6:13 change wording: "person" is too broad a term to represent "stomach."
2016-07-13 10:32:16 -04:00
Hanker10 b81aff5ce9 1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording
1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording
2016-07-13 10:23:42 -04:00
Hanker10 e248c2a714 1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom
1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom
2016-07-13 10:20:58 -04:00
Hanker10 4ffcbb6348 1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom
1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom
2016-07-13 10:17:12 -04:00
Hanker10 0f17ab3cf8 1 Cor 6:5 change wording
1 Cor 6:5 change wording to include the idea of shaming
2016-07-13 10:08:42 -04:00
Tom Warren 7859fe9e9a james Royal law 2016-07-13 10:07:01 -04:00
Hanker10 7d2631d626 1 Cor 6:1 change wording
1 Cor 6:1 change wording to include the idea of "daring to" since their practice violated the sanctity of the body of believers
2016-07-13 10:00:34 -04:00
Tom Warren 64ae12ba7f not too many plagues 2016-07-13 09:33:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney 1f33510e85 extra empty paras 2016-07-13 09:30:12 -04:00
Tom Warren 6a1b215cdf wine for wrath 2016-07-13 09:22:37 -04:00
Tom Warren 31c2441998 Therefor into therefore 2016-07-13 09:22:37 -04:00
pohlig 908361235c Update 12.usfm 2016-07-13 08:42:03 -04:00
Tom Warren 0310fec863 consistency turned into blood 2016-07-13 08:40:07 -04:00
Tom Warren 2714546258 what was contained in his bowl 2016-07-13 08:38:18 -04:00
Tom Warren ce80603a29 Reworked 2016-07-13 08:34:20 -04:00
Tom Warren 3f62bc06b6 seeking clarity 2016-07-13 08:28:21 -04:00
Tom Warren 0d2a4d8b0f Comma removed 2016-07-13 08:15:52 -04:00
Hanker10 fb678a8761 1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity
1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity
2016-07-12 21:33:58 -04:00
Hanker10 9b04192d61 1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity
1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity: "be with" becomes "keep company with"
2016-07-12 21:28:43 -04:00
Hanker10 3131be8755 1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity
1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity: "affect" becomes "infect"
2016-07-12 21:26:55 -04:00
Hanker10 0fe2f94a5c 1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity
1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity
2016-07-12 21:24:58 -04:00
Hanker10 0d7361ece1 1 Cor 4:21 change one word
1 Cor 4:21 change one word: "rod" so that the meaning comes out better
2016-07-12 17:22:42 -04:00
Hanker10 88001c8b9a 1 Cor 4:7 correct wrong noun number
1 Cor 4:7 correct wrong noun number
2016-07-12 17:17:17 -04:00
Hanker10 2a4b1db682 1 Cor 4:6 correct bad wording
1 Cor 4:6 correct bad wording
2016-07-12 17:15:33 -04:00
Hanker10 7be4104d54 1 Cor 4:3 change wording
1 Cor 4:3 change wording. Paul does not say he is not able to judge himself. He does not bother judging himself.
2016-07-12 17:12:05 -04:00
Hanker10 f160bd67ce 1 Cor 3:13 change wording
1 Cor 3:13 change wording, "how hard we worked for him" to what you see.
2016-07-12 16:54:07 -04:00
Hanker10 4b3ee1d0dd 1 Cor 3:10 change wording
1 Cor 3:10 change wording to correct idea about Paul's giftedness.
2016-07-12 16:50:44 -04:00
Henry Whitney 828a4fd1f2 typo 2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
Henry Whitney ab1a8ca559 typo 2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
Hanker10 b29e30e7dd 1 Cor 3:4 change wording
1 Cor 3:4 change wording: "tearing the church into pieces" is an assumption here. This is probably true, but Paul is working up to this evaluation of the Corinthians. It is too early to let that cat out of the bag here.
2016-07-12 15:57:30 -04:00
Hanker10 c1ceab7596 1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
2016-07-12 15:53:39 -04:00
Hanker10 eccbb0a764 1 Cor 2:15 change one word
1 Cor 2:15 change one word: "judgment" to "evaluate" since this will avoid the connotation (at least for English speakers) of patronizing dominance over others.
2016-07-12 15:50:30 -04:00
Hanker10 45b66a3ef9 1 Cor 2:3 change wording
1 Cor 2:3 change wording since there is no indication the weakness was physical. There is also no indication that Paul's trembling was because of enemies. Many say it was because of the awesome  responsibility he felt weighing on him and/or because he had just come from Athens where his presentation bombed.
2016-07-12 15:12:16 -04:00