1 Cor 13:10 change wording, "things that are perfect happen" to what you see. This is a bit clumsy language, but the idea is completeness to complement the partiality of verse 9.
1 Cor 13:1 change wording from "I would be worth less than a gong or a cymbal, which does nothing but make noise." to what you see. The talking is compared to the gong and cymbal, not the person doing the talking.