Hanker10
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Romans 8:17 change wording
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Romans 8:17 change wording for clarity
2016-07-08 16:27:32 -04:00
Hanker10
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Romans 8:13 change wording
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Romans 8:13 change wording
2016-07-08 16:24:20 -04:00
Hanker10
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Romans 8:12 change wording
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Romans 8:12 change wording
2016-07-08 16:22:42 -04:00
Hanker10
61563abcc2
Romans 8:6-8 change wording of "nature"
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Romans 8:6-8 change wording of "nature"
2016-07-08 15:53:03 -04:00
Hanker10
aa957ff7c1
Romans 8:4-5 change wording
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Romans 8:4-5 change wording
2016-07-08 15:51:12 -04:00
Hanker10
fa8192635e
Romans 7:25 cut the application wording
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Romans 7:25 cut the application wording, "you and I"
2016-07-08 15:45:14 -04:00
Hanker10
b7988aed54
Romans 7:23 change one word
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Romans 7:23 change one word
2016-07-08 15:24:13 -04:00
Hanker10
af044741ad
Romans 7:22 change one word
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Romans 7:22 change one word
2016-07-08 15:21:28 -04:00
Hanker10
61db8f8861
Romans 7:20 change wording
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Romans 7:20 change wording
2016-07-08 15:20:07 -04:00
Hanker10
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Romans 7:18 change wording
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Romans 7:18 change wording
2016-07-08 15:16:58 -04:00
Hanker10
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Romans 7:16 change wording
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Romans 7:16 change wording
2016-07-08 15:13:55 -04:00
Hanker10
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Romans 7:14 change wording
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Romans 7:14 change wording
2016-07-08 15:10:39 -04:00
Hanker10
5a6ec4ebbb
Romans 7:13 cut dialog
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Romans 7:13 cut dialog
2016-07-08 15:05:50 -04:00
Hanker10
0039aff789
Romans 7:7 cut dialog
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Romans 7:7 cut dialog
2016-07-08 15:03:59 -04:00
Hanker10
4473c3f7ce
Romans 6:19 change wording for clarity
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Romans 6:19 change wording for clarity
2016-07-08 14:47:41 -04:00
Hanker10
a1f2687e5e
Romans 6:16 change wording for clarity
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Romans 6:16 change wording for clarity
2016-07-08 14:42:25 -04:00
Hanker10
8d09eab5c0
Romans 6:15 cut dialog and change wording
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Romans 6:15 cut dialog and change wording
2016-07-08 14:35:17 -04:00
Hanker10
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Romans 6:13 change wording
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Romans 6:13 change wording
2016-07-08 14:29:58 -04:00
Hanker10
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Romans 6:11 change word
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Romans 6:11 change word
2016-07-08 14:18:40 -04:00
Hanker10
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Romans 6:1-2 change wording
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Romans 6:1-2 change wording
2016-07-08 13:49:58 -04:00
Hanker10
f2fce5e102
Update 05.usfm
2016-07-08 13:47:19 -04:00
Hanker10
2e411b65c1
Romans 5:18 change wording
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Romans 5:18 change wording to avoid limiting Christ's obedience to only his death.
2016-07-08 13:44:17 -04:00
Hanker10
22c556723a
Romans 5:13 change wording
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Romans 5:13 change wording
2016-07-08 13:38:50 -04:00
Hanker10
9a1fbb55c9
Romans 5:12 cut narrative not in text
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Romans 5:12 cut narrative not in text
2016-07-08 13:36:23 -04:00
Hanker10
98c3276857
Romans 5:10 change wording
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Romans 5:10 change wording
2016-07-08 13:32:52 -04:00
Hanker10
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Romans 5:9 simplify wording
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Romans 5:9 simplify wording and sentence structure
2016-07-08 13:29:09 -04:00
Hanker10
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Romans 4:25 change wording
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Romans 4:25 change wording
2016-07-08 13:16:59 -04:00
Hanker10
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Romans 4:21 change wording
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Romans 4:21 change wording
2016-07-08 13:13:38 -04:00
Hanker10
5ceb5c03ac
Romans 4:18 simplify wording & order
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Romans 4:18 simplify wording & order of ideas
2016-07-08 13:11:38 -04:00
Hanker10
262e463f19
Romans 4:17 change separate paragraph
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Romans 4:17 change separate paragraph to become part of verse 17. Also simplified the wording.
2016-07-08 13:05:47 -04:00
Hanker10
e138a20f3c
Romans 4:16-17 simplify wording and sentences
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Romans 4:16-17 simplify wording and sentence structure
2016-07-08 13:03:12 -04:00
Hanker10
e8b2c690d3
Update 04.usfm
2016-07-08 12:54:42 -04:00
Hanker10
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Update 04.usfm
2016-07-08 12:54:06 -04:00
Hanker10
725a53349e
Romans 4:11 simplify wording
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Romans 4:11 simplify wording
2016-07-08 12:52:54 -04:00
Hanker10
46b7fbc721
Romans 3:31 cut the imaginary dialog
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Romans 3:31 cut the imaginary dialog
2016-07-08 12:34:38 -04:00
Hanker10
b29fd8a5de
Romans 3:24 change wording
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Romans 3:24 change wording to reflect the action of Christ for us beyond only his death.
2016-07-08 12:04:06 -04:00
Hanker10
24b83c7565
Romans 3:21 change wording
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Romans 3:21 change wording for clarity
2016-07-08 12:01:14 -04:00
Hanker10
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Romans 3:19-20 change wording
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Romans 3:19-20 change wording and punctuation for clarity
2016-07-08 11:54:56 -04:00
Hanker10
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Romans 3:9 cut dialog
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Romans 3:9 cut dialog
2016-07-08 11:35:58 -04:00
Hanker10
c8cc398737
Romans 3:5-8 clear up dialog
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Romans 3:5-8 clear up dialog
2016-07-08 11:30:02 -04:00
Hanker10
5a597196f5
Romans 3:3-4 cut dialog
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Romans 3:3-4 cut imaginary dialog since this is not needed and not in the text
2016-07-08 11:14:21 -04:00
Hanker10
8014f3ca37
Romans 3:1-2 change wording
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Romans 3:1-2 change wording from a direct quote (not in the text) and the imaginary dialog.
2016-07-08 11:10:57 -04:00
Hanker10
8d89082596
Romans 2:25 correct verb number
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Romans 2:25 correct verb number
2016-07-08 11:00:34 -04:00
Hanker10
3592323645
Romans 2:24 cut extra sentence
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Romans 2:24 cut extra sentence, "The non-Jews say God must be a hypocrite if he tolerates the behavior of people like you."
2016-07-08 10:59:33 -04:00
Hanker10
6632df2e73
Romans 2:20 cut extra word
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Romans 2:20 cut extra word "in" and change "what" from "you have __ the law __ teaches you"
2016-07-08 10:56:32 -04:00
Hanker10
7554a08bb2
Romans 2:16 change wording
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Romans 2:16 change wording to shorten and simplify the sentence structure. The idea of secret is central, not an added feature.
2016-07-08 10:53:15 -04:00
Hanker10
cbcef77589
Romans 2:12 change wording
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Romans 2:12 change wording to shorten the text.
2016-07-08 10:43:22 -04:00
Hanker10
195645294f
Romans 2:1 cut added wording
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Romans 2:1 cut added wording that is too interpretive and not in the text at all.
2016-07-08 10:21:44 -04:00
Hanker10
8d9b792854
Romans 1:27 change wording
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Romans 1:27 change wording from, "As a result, God has punished them by sicknesses in their bodies, which is what they deserve." to what you see. To ascribe the agency to God is true ultimately but is too much to read out of the text and is likely offensive to some. The more immediate agency is the physical effects of such behavior that have become obvious in our context as well.
2016-07-08 10:14:32 -04:00
Hanker10
23c0c899f7
Rom 1:14 change wording
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Romans 1:14 change the loaded terms "educated and to those who are uneducated" to what you see. There are many MTTs and their readers who may not have much formal education, but still have good discretion and ability to learn. Besides, this does not convey the idea of "wise" and "foolish" in the text.
2016-07-08 09:52:45 -04:00