Henry Whitney
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New toc1&toc2
2016-08-02 16:50:51 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 21:25 change wording
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Judges 21:25 change wording from "as they saw it." to what you see since this is a more explanatory rendering of the hebraism of the last phrase.
2016-07-30 13:56:37 -04:00
Hanker10
e91b3af8e1
Judges 21:19 change wording
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Judges 21:19 change wording to comply with the Hebrew. There is no mention one man having the idea. It was a group decision.
2016-07-30 13:52:10 -04:00
Hanker10
c1261efd6e
Judges 20:16 correct the wording
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Judges 20:16 correct the wording. Took out the "at" in the phrase, "without missing __ a target"
2016-07-29 21:29:19 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 20:10 add wording
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Judges 20:10 add wording
2016-07-29 21:26:52 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 20:5 change wording as before
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Judges 20:5 change wording as before in 19:22 to avoid "sleep" for the euphemism for sex when it is a violent act. Also, the same word for the concubine was changed to "raped"
2016-07-29 21:17:34 -04:00
Hanker10
f083e87fdf
Judges 20:3 correct the wording
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Judges 20:3 correct the wording. The clause, "but none of the men from their tribe went to the meeting there" is not in the text and is an explanation that is not in the notes. I changed it slightly to clarify the explanation.
2016-07-29 21:12:47 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 20:1 correct the wording
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Judges 20:1 correct the wording "at one men" should be as you see.
2016-07-29 21:06:50 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 19:25 change wording
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Judges 19:25 change wording for the same reason as in verse 22
2016-07-29 19:25:31 -04:00
Hanker10
088f2dc690
Judges 19:22 change wording
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Judges 19:22 change wording from "we can sleep with him" to what you see. Under these violent circumstances, to "sleep" would be impossible so it is better to be more explicit. The Hebrew says, "to know" which is euphemism for the sex act.
2016-07-29 19:15:41 -04:00
Hanker10
895dfbcf86
Judges 19:20 change wording
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Judges 19:20 change wording from, "I wish that things will go well for you, but I would like to provide what you need" to what you see. This fits better with the text and the idea of the old man's benediction.
2016-07-29 19:06:04 -04:00
Hanker10
92aa4f6336
Judges 18:7 change wording
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Judges 18:7 change wording since "The next day" is not in the text and the time spent with Micah is not specified.
2016-07-29 18:39:16 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 18:3 add "him"
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Judges 18:3 add "him"
2016-07-29 18:36:35 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 17:3 change wording
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Judges 17:3 change wording from "I will give some of this silver" to what you see. The whole 1,100 pieces were dedicated, not only a portion. Her infraction was that after dedicating it, she only used about 20% for Yahweh.
2016-07-29 18:28:58 -04:00
Hanker10
670e53e874
Judges 17:2 cut extra clause
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Judges 17:2 cut extra clause, "for admitting that you took it" since this is not in the Hebrew and is not the reason she blessed Micah. She blessed him to countermand the curse she had uttered earlier.
2016-07-29 18:26:18 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 16:29 change wording
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Judges 16:29 change wording
2016-07-29 18:15:36 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 16:12 cut extra clause
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Judges 16:12 cut extra clause, "while he was sleeping" since this time the text does not say Samson was sleeping. That happens in the next time.
2016-07-29 17:32:37 -04:00
Hanker10
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Update 15.usfm
2016-07-29 17:17:12 -04:00
Hanker10
672c8de6e8
Judges 14:8 drop clause
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Judges 14:8 drop clause, " after other creatures had eaten all the flesh," because it is not in the Hebrew or the ULB and is an assumption about the state of the lion's carcass.
2016-07-29 16:58:17 -04:00
Hanker10
d880982611
Judges 14:8&9 change "skeleton" to "carcass"
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Judges 14:8&9 change "skeleton" to "carcass".
2016-07-29 16:56:26 -04:00
Hanker10
90e7d3922c
Judges 1:19 change "Yahweh" to "he"
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Judges 1:19 change "Yahweh" to "he"
2016-07-29 16:21:14 -04:00
Tom Warren
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Caps changes
2016-07-28 20:35:16 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 11:24 clarify wording
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Judges 11:24 clarify wording.
2016-07-28 18:40:28 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 11:18 change geographical reference
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Judges 11:18 change geographical reference that was wrong.
2016-07-28 18:36:50 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 11:13 change wording
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Judges 11:13 change wording to clarify
2016-07-28 18:31:43 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 11:11 change wording
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Judges 11:11 change wording to clarify
2016-07-28 18:29:09 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 10:16 change wording
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Judges 10:16 change wording
2016-07-28 18:22:34 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 9:20 add wording
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Judges 9:20 add wording to comply with the ULB and the Hebrew.
2016-07-28 16:49:52 -04:00
Hanker10
319d4e1249
Judges 8:1-17 change spellings
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Judges 8:1-17 change spellings of Abi Ezer and Peniel to comply with Hebrew and the ULB
2016-07-28 16:23:20 -04:00
Hanker10
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Update 07.usfm
2016-07-28 16:14:30 -04:00
Hanker10
c2161c6ec0
Judges 7:2 change wording
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Judges 7:2 change wording
2016-07-28 15:58:22 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 6:27 add "ten of" to comply with text
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Judges 6:27 add "ten of" to comply with text
2016-07-28 15:46:24 -04:00
Hanker10
461fae2d81
Judges 6:26 change word from "cook" to "burn"
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Judges 6:26 change word from "cook" to "burn" since they did not cook the offering but burned it.
2016-07-28 15:44:13 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 6:14 change wording
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Judges 6:14 change wording
2016-07-28 15:20:20 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 6:6 change wording
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Judges 6:6 change wording to clarify the reference of the pronoun. Besides, this is closer to the Hebrew.
2016-07-28 15:12:02 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 6:5 change wording
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Judges 6:5 change wording
2016-07-28 15:09:34 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 6:4 change wording
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Judges 6:4 change wording
2016-07-28 15:07:27 -04:00
Hanker10
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Update 05.usfm
2016-07-28 15:01:32 -04:00
Hanker10
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Update 05.usfm
2016-07-28 15:00:49 -04:00
Hanker10
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Update 05.usfm
2016-07-28 14:59:54 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 5:27 add wording for repetition
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Judges 5:27 add wording for repetition since that is an important element in the power of this poetry.
2016-07-28 14:57:21 -04:00
Hanker10
ca67ab364b
Judges 5:13 change wording
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Judges 5:13 change wording to cut "Mount Tabor" since that is not in the Hebrew (or ASV). The people came down from the highlands where they had been hiding from the oppressors.
2016-07-28 14:32:28 -04:00
Hanker10
64138091c4
Judges 5:7 change wording
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Judges 5:7 change wording to make better sense. The original is very uncertain here since it is the only use of the Hebrew word and sounds like other words that could make equally good sense. This choice makes clearer sense within the context.
2016-07-28 14:04:52 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 5:6 change wording
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Judges 5:6 change wording "and when Jael ruled us" since Jael never ruled like Deborah.
2016-07-28 13:51:32 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 5:2 add a word
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Judges 5:2 add a word
2016-07-28 13:46:26 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 4:14 change wording
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Judges 4:14 change wording to more closely render the Hebrew
2016-07-28 13:33:21 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 4:9-10 move sentence
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Judges 4:9-10 move sentence from verse 10 to end of verse 9 to comply with ULB and Hebrew, etc.
2016-07-28 13:29:28 -04:00
Hanker10
bd67a543fd
Judges 4:9 change wording
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Judges 4:9 change wording
2016-07-28 13:27:33 -04:00
Hanker10
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Judges 4:3 add "cruelly"
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Judges 4:3 add "cruelly" to convey the sense of "with force"
2016-07-28 13:21:08 -04:00
Hanker10
999b58355c
Judges 3:10 correct spelling
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Judges 3:10 correct spelling of "Othniel"
2016-07-28 12:59:26 -04:00