1 Cor 2:15 change one word: "judgment" to "evaluate" since this will avoid the connotation (at least for English speakers) of patronizing dominance over others.
1 Cor 2:3 change wording since there is no indication the weakness was physical. There is also no indication that Paul's trembling was because of enemies. Many say it was because of the awesome responsibility he felt weighing on him and/or because he had just come from Athens where his presentation bombed.