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 \v 3 For there was a time when we--all of us--were thoughtless and unpersuaded about these things. We were led astray and served various passions and pleasures as if we were their slaves. We spent our lives envying each other and doing evil. We caused people to hate us and we hated each another.
 
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-\v 4 But when God our Savior's kindness and love for all people appeared, 
+\v 4 But when God showed us that he was acting to save all people because he loves them, 
 \v 5 he saved us by washing us clean on the inside, giving us a new birth, and making us new by the Holy Spirit. He did not save us because we do good things, but he saved us because he is merciful.
  
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