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 \c 21
 
 \p
-\v 1 I, Isaiah, received this message from Yahweh about a land soon to become a desert:
+\v 1 Yahweh gave this message about a land soon to become a desert:
 \q1 An army will soon come from the southern Judean wilderness to invade that land;
 \q2 they are an army that causes their enemies to be terrified,
 \q2 an army that will come sweeping through the wilderness from a terrible land.
 \b
 \q1
 \v 2 Yahweh showed me a terrifying vision:
-\q1 in the vision I saw an army
+\q1 In the vision I saw an army
 \q2 that will betray people and steal their possessions after they conquer them.
 \q1 Yahweh said, "You armies from Elam and Media, surround Babylon and prepare to attack it!
 \q2 I will cause the groaning and suffering that Babylon caused to cease!"
@@ -51,9 +51,9 @@
 \p
 \v 8 So I did that, and one day the watchman called out,
 \q1 "Day after day I have stood on this watchtower,
-\q2 and I have continued to watch during the day and during the night.
+\q2 and I have continued to watch during the day and during the night."
 \q1
-\v 9 Now, I saw a man riding in a chariot pulled by two horses.
+\v 9 A man comes riding in a chariot pulled by two horses.
 \q2 I called out to him, and he answered,
 \q1 'Babylon has been destroyed!
 \q2 All the idols in Babylon lie in pieces on the ground!'"
@@ -68,11 +68,11 @@
 
 \s5
 \p
-\v 11 I received this message from Yahweh about Edom:
+\v 11 Yahweh gave this message about Edom:
 \q1 Someone from Edom has been calling to me saying,
 \q2 "Watchman, how long will it be before the night is over?"
 \q1
-\v 12 I, the watchman, replied,
+\v 12 The watchman, replied,
 \q2 "It will soon be morning, but after that, it will soon be night again.
 \q1 If you want to inquire again about what will happen in our country,
 \q2 come back and inquire again."
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
 
 \s5
 \p
-\v 13 I also received this message about Arabia:
+\v 13 Yahweh gave this message about Arabia:
 \q1 Give this message to people traveling in caravans from the town of Dedan in northwest Arabia, travelers who camp in the scrub there.
 \q1 Tell them to bring water for those who are thirsty.
 \q2