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-An idiom is a figure of speech made up of a group of words that, as a whole, has a meaning that is different from what one would understand from the meanings of the individual words. Someone from outside of the culture usually cannot understand an idiom without someone inside the culture explaining its true meaning. Every language uses idioms. Some English examples are:
-
-* You are pulling my leg (This means, "You are telling me a lie")
-* Do not push the envelope (This means, "Do not take a matter to its extreme")
-* This house is under water (This means, "The debt owed for this house is greater than its actual value")
-* We are painting the town red (This means, "We are going around town tonight celebrating very intensely")
-
### Description
-An idiom is a phrase that has a special meaning to the people of the language or culture who use it. Its meaning is different than what a person would understand from the meanings of the individual words that form the phrase.
+An idiom is a figure of speech made up of a group of words that, as a whole, has a meaning that is different from what one would understand from the meanings of the individual words. It has a special meaning to the people of the language or culture who use it; someone from outside of the culture usually cannot understand an idiom without someone inside the culture explaining its true meaning. Every language uses idioms. Some English examples are:
+
+* You are pulling my leg (This means, "You are telling me a lie")
+* Do not push the envelope (This means, "Do not take the matter to its extreme")
+* This house is under water (This means, "The debt owed for this house is greater than its actual value")
+* We are painting the town red (This means, "We are going around town tonight celebrating very intensely")
+
+#### Purpose of Idioms
+
+An idiom is created in a culture when someone describes something in an unusual way. When that unusual way communicates the message powerfully and people understand it clearly, other people start to use it. After a while, it becomes a normal way of talking in that language.
+
+#### Reasons this is a translation issue
+
+* People can easily misunderstand idioms in the original languages of the Bible if they do not know the cultures that produced the Bible.
+* People can easily misunderstand idioms that are in the source language Bibles if they do not know the cultures that made those translations.
+* It is useless to translate idioms literally (according to the meaning of each word) when the target language audience will not understand what they mean.
+* Sometimes people may be able to understand an idiom from another culture, but it might sound like a strange way to express the meaning.
+
+### Examples from the Bible
+
+>Then all Israel came to David at Hebron and said, "Look, we are your flesh and bone." (1 Chronicles 11:1 ULB)
+
+The idiom "flesh and bone" means "relatives."
>... he set his face to go to Jerusalem. (Luke 9:51 ULB)
The words "set his face" is an idiom that means "firmly decided and began." He firmly decided to go to Jerusalem, and he started on his way.
-Sometimes people may be able to understand an idiom from another culture, but it might sound like a strange way to express the meaning.
-
>... I am not worthy for you to come under my roof. (Luke 7:6 ULB)
The phrase "come under my roof" is an idiom that means "enter my house."
@@ -24,29 +37,10 @@ The phrase "come under my roof" is an idiom that means "enter my house."
This idiom means "Listen carefully and remember what I say."
-#### Purpose of Idioms
+>My eyes grow dim from grief ... (Psalm 6:7 ULB)
-An idiom is created in a culture probably somewhat by accident when someone describes something in an unusual way. But, when that unusual way communicates the message powerfully and people understand it clearly, other people start to use it. After a while, it becomes a normal way of talking in that language.
+This idiom means that he cries bitterly for a long time.
-#### Reasons this is a translation issue
-
-* People can easily misunderstand idioms in the original languages of the Bible if they do not know the cultures that produced the Bible.
-* People can easily misunderstand idioms that are in the source language Bibles if they do not know the cultures that made those translations.
-* It is useless to translate idioms literally (according to the meaning of each word) when the target language audience will not understand what they mean.
-
-### Examples from the Bible
-
->Then all Israel came to David at Hebron and said, "Look, we are your flesh and bone." (1 Chronicles 11:1 ULB)
-
-This means, "We and you belong to the same race, the same family."
-
->... the children of Israel went out with a high hand. (Exodus 14:8 ASV)
-
-This means, "The Israelites went out defiantly."
-
->... the one who lifts up my head. (Psalm 3:3 ULB)
-
-This means, "the one who helps me."
### Translation Strategies
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### Examples of Translation Strategies Applied
1. Translate the meaning plainly without using an idiom.
- * **Look, we are your flesh and bone.** ( 1 Chronicles 11:1 ULB)
- * Look, we all belong to the same nation.
+ * **Look, we are your flesh and bone.** (1 Chronicles 11:1 ULB)
+ * Look, we are your relatives.
* **... he set his face to go to Jerusalem.** (Luke 9:51 ULB)
* ... he started to travel to Jerusalem, determined to reach it.
* **... I am not worthy for you to come under my roof.** (Luke 7:6 ULB)