diff --git a/translate/figs-events/01.md b/translate/figs-events/01.md index fe94b09..9a20546 100644 --- a/translate/figs-events/01.md +++ b/translate/figs-events/01.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Readers might think that the events happened in the order that they are told. It >... Herod ... locked John up in prison. Now it came about, when all the people were baptized, Jesus also was baptized.... (Luke 3:19-21 ULB) -Jesus was baptized by John. The verse above could sound like John baptized Jesus after John was locked up in prison, but John baptized Jesus before John was locked up in prison. +Jesus was baptized by John. The verses above could sound like John baptized Jesus after John was locked up in prison, but John baptized Jesus before John was locked up in prison. >Just as Joshua had said to the people, the seven priests carried the seven trumpets of rams' horns before Yahweh. As they advanced, they gave a blast on the trumpets. ... But Joshua commanded the people, saying, "Do not shout. No sound must leave your mouths until the day I tell you to shout. Only then you must shout." (Joshua 6:8-10 ULB) @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ This could sound like Joshua gave the order not to shout after the army had alre >Who is worthy to open the scroll and break its seals? (Revelation 5:2 ULB) -This sounds like a person must first open the scroll and then break its seals, but the seals that lock the scroll must be broken before the scroll can be unrolled. +This could sound like a person must first open the scroll and then break its seals, but the seals that lock the scroll must be broken before the scroll can be unrolled. ### Translation Strategies