1914 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
hharrissWA
96059c55a6 Changed period to an exclamation mark in v. 9 2016-05-29 09:24:08 -05:00
hharrissWA
7373f6383a changed a period to an exclamation mark 2016-05-29 09:24:08 -05:00
ea4de1c307 private to secret 2016-05-26 10:21:42 -04:00
12b6b193ca Closer to the Greek 2016-05-26 10:19:03 -04:00
4c88befe53 Straightened out Lord's Prayer 2016-05-26 10:14:42 -04:00
f2f071ac60 Vs 4, 6
recompense changed to "reward"
2016-05-26 10:11:38 -04:00
94bb3d1e30 Condition 2016-05-26 10:09:17 -04:00
e6823e56e2 Various tweeks 2016-05-26 09:59:31 -04:00
a15df6137a Various edits 2016-05-26 09:45:07 -04:00
hharrissWA
5683d633d5 added "From" to v. 1; and in v. 3 removed the comma after "us,"
"From" helps explain the "to" of this letter:
From ____, To ____
Comma seems to not be needed; unnecessarily interrupts the flow of the
first clause
2016-05-29 08:28:13 -05:00
7315a37291 Sabbath 2016-05-26 09:03:01 -04:00
d7caa84be7 Sabbath 2016-05-26 09:01:01 -04:00
0941298eda oxen and fattened ... 2016-05-26 08:27:39 -04:00
4ba4abafb9 Reworked 22:1
Redundant introduction of narrative is simplified.
2016-05-26 08:21:27 -04:00
cfebe926b6 21:43
removed unnecessary UC"The...", replaced with "the ...
2016-05-26 08:16:16 -04:00
0ca912c6f3 Period at end of 14:3 2016-05-26 08:10:10 -04:00
pohlig
2148f5d075 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 18:16:31 -04:00
pohlig
0047112219 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 17:41:03 -04:00
pohlig
64faccc712 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 17:38:43 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
ceb4651890 V18-23 rewrite 2016-05-25 17:24:06 -04:00
pohlig
f8ec9fc3b6 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 16:14:19 -04:00
Hanker10
651400d74c Hebrews 5:6 colon to comma
Hebrews 5:6  colon to comma
2016-05-25 16:02:53 -04:00
pohlig
f8d1735d95 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 16:02:24 -04:00
Hanker10
4c6ea0134e Hebrews 5:5 semi-colon to comma
Hebrews 5:5  semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 16:00:45 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
27f2320770 V15, 16 rewrite 2016-05-25 15:59:18 -04:00
Hanker10
07e826e8c3 Hebrews 4:3 change colon to comma
Hebrews 4:3 change colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:58:34 -04:00
Hanker10
ba93b9e61e Hebrews 3:10-11 second level quote change
Hebrews 3:10-11 second level quote change from the end of verse 11 to the end of verse 10
2016-05-25 15:57:27 -04:00
Hanker10
a16ae4099f Hebrews 3:7 change punctuation
Hebrews 3:7 change punctuation
2016-05-25 15:51:59 -04:00
Hanker10
1adcde5b78 Hebrews 2:16 change punctuation
Hebrews 2:16 change punctuation
2016-05-25 15:49:20 -04:00
Hanker10
94090499a7 Hebrews 2:12 change punctuation
Hebrews 2:12 change punctuation
2016-05-25 15:47:40 -04:00
Hanker10
1893e1cebc Hebrews 2:2-3 change sentence structure
Hebrews 2:2-3 change sentence structure to make conditional clause (verse 2) precede naturally the main one.
2016-05-25 15:45:20 -04:00
pohlig
a9b86cdda7 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 15:42:27 -04:00
pohlig
8725d6a9a8 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 15:38:37 -04:00
Hanker10
f18a4f0a99 Hebrews 1:14 change wording
Hebrews 1:14 changed "sent out to worship me and to care" to "sent out to minister and to care" since the pronoun "me" is not in the Greek and confusingly refers to God IF he is still the speaker in verse 14 but the quotation marks indicate that now the writer is speaking.
2016-05-25 15:20:57 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
9461dbc12f Rewrite V13, 15 2016-05-25 15:15:55 -04:00
Hanker10
7ac6831325 Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:14:59 -04:00
Hanker10
59e7640236 Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:13:38 -04:00
Hanker10
5f0e04da34 Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:12:27 -04:00
Hanker10
b219692814 Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:11:17 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
cea9da7045 V8, 9 rewrite 2016-05-25 14:46:52 -04:00
Hanker10
97a5260ffa Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
2016-05-25 14:43:19 -04:00
Hanker10
70f3d56c7f Hebrews 11:19 change wording
Hebrews 11:19 change wording to smooth it out and connect "from the dead" closer to Abraham's "receiving him back.
2016-05-25 14:40:54 -04:00
Hanker10
c75401e950 Hebrews 6:3 change wording number
Hebrews 6:3 change wording number from plural to singular "these things" to "this"
2016-05-25 14:29:25 -04:00
Hanker10
9bc5cb01bd James 1:17 change wording
James 1:17 change "He does not change like shifting shadows." to what you see because he does not change AT ALL.
2016-05-25 14:18:23 -04:00
Hanker10
811d6165c5 James 1:8 removed redundant "person"
James 1:8 removed redundant "person" after "double-minded" and "a" from before "double-minded"
2016-05-25 14:08:23 -04:00
Hanker10
323fb0b4e6 James 1:5 removed the word "it"
James 1:5 removed the word "it" from the second use "the one who gives IT generously" since the original shows God as giving EVERYTHING generously, not just "it" = wisdom.
2016-05-25 14:06:39 -04:00
Hanker10
23ce30a274 James 5:6 change wording
James 5:6 changed "the righteous man, the one who does not"  to what you see because the Greek does not put a word for "man" or "person" in that position.
2016-05-25 14:02:46 -04:00
Hanker10
17bb11d545 James 4:1 change wording
James 4:1 change "among your fellow believers" to "in your members" since this is more literal with the Greek and less interpretive which the UDB does adequately.
2016-05-25 13:58:10 -04:00
3e304cce55 Corrected 2016-05-25 13:54:35 -04:00
3f6b7f3fb5 Test 2016-05-25 13:53:22 -04:00